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@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Res

Like I told you :P 🤣

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Rula diya yaar tune to ! 😭
But it was beautiful nonetheless.
Loved it Suppi !! I HATE sad OSs. Really.
Par tune likha hai to tujhse naraaz bhi ni ho sakti :P
Agli baar na twist daal diyo :P Sad na likhna yaar. Pileej !
Kitte bhi mast ho, sad wale na dil sad kar dete hai. Aur tu likhti hai to to pakka dil ko chhuta hai ❤️

Anyway, I heart it ❤️

P.S.Kaisi gai exams ? Aur kinni baaqi ?

Edited by Monu_Deewani - 12 years ago

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sochona

@sochona

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

so sad and yet so beautiful.loved it.

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supriya.ipkknd

@supriya.ipkknd

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani
Res

Like I told you :P 🤣

Edited

Rula diya yaar tune to ! 😭
But it was beautiful nonetheless.
Loved it Suppi !! I HATE sad OSs. Really.
Par tune likha hai to tujhse naraaz bhi ni ho sakti :P
Agli baar na twist daal diyo :P Sad na likhna yaar. Pileej !
Kitte bhi mast ho, sad wale na dil sad kar dete hai. Aur tu likhti hai to to pakka dil ko chhuta hai ❤️

Anyway, I heart it ❤️

P.S.Kaisi gai exams ? Aur kinni baaqi ?

Thnak You chokri 😆

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supriya.ipkknd

@supriya.ipkknd

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: misha93
You made me cryyy T-T.
Very well written

Aww... thank you So Much :D

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

This made me cry. I had a emotional turmoil happening within me all the while. I loved it. But, you know what I'l never want Asya to have such a closure to there story . Although it ain't a closure , she had Aatif. But, his being matters and when someone special goes away it really hurts and I don't want this to happen with there story. But, you see a sad closure , a emotional closure to any topic is something that catches the attention and I must say you depicted all the emotions so well. I loved these lines

"When a person who really loves you

Kisses you..

It was not the lips he kissed

It was your soul... "

So , true... Loved it. If you have more fictions of yours on Asya do tell me I'l love to read more on them.

~Dee~