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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Wow it gvs an emotional pinch to my heart. Do cnt

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kriti

@GroverAddict

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

wowww...

this is really very good...

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Sharyn

@-LarryGurl-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

OMG!! that was so beautiful!!!!

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Harjot.

@Angel-Jot

Alumni

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

That was beautiful. Heartbreaking but very beautiful.

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

This was so beautiful. The angst, Oh my God. -.-

You write just fabulously. I felt terrible for Zoya, really. I wanted to cry. :(

This was amazing. PLEASE continue?

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Neha

@howler

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

PLEASE CONTINUE...and do PM me the next part..Its simply superb...

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

"America, India…where was home?
Drifting…alone…that was she had been doing all her life…" these lines got me tears... Its sooo heartbreakingly beautiful... Please continue, PM me if possible

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Mallika

@malkasub

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Wow, that was so well written. You made me cry. I hope they show something like this.

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princess_T

@princess_T

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Amazing... I just loved the way you described her feelings. Continue Please...

BTW I'm Tanvi too!

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

I must tell you, i hate sad os, but this ne made me weep... really.. so much pain...infect actual as zoya is feeling now...just loved it to the core... please continue to make it SS...