#1 AsYa FF: Time to go back (COMPLETED)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: shabana20
Fab Update!!..
Adored the " Asya" moment a lot!!..
New York track is a Yes please from me...
Thanks for the pm..

Thanks a lot 😃 😳

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Ani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: sweetnandu
nice one,... waiting to read the future track..

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Ani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: soniaanna
great update , thank god he listened to his heart here not like the serial

Thanks a lot 😃 😳hahaha! Actually! Mera asad inna bhi stuborn nai 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs
Eow..anmazzzing ff..livd it..outstanfng..do vonyinie soon n pkz pm me wen i ipdate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: Chinnu.Munnu
Amazing update.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Originally posted by: --Kriti--
awsomeee updateee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

Originally posted by: rennie
loved how asad confessed...and pls do continue the story in whichever thread that want, but pls continue it for some more time...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: nimi.fan
nyc work

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Posted: 12 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: Alveena12

i thought this update was great and i love how he admitted his love and i also absolutely love your idea of the new york track...please update soon and please pm me when you do

Thanks a lot 😃 😳

Edited by aniiee - 12 years ago

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Ani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#570

I was gonna write dis chap aftr a day or two but den decided to write today as i got a little free time!

Waise did u all see kal ka episode where Asad listens to Dilshaad abt confessing his love and same happnd in my stry in chap 11!
GOSH! Wen i saw the epi i was lyk ye toh maine pridict kar liya tha!
There where many ppl who said Asad wont listen to his ammi in the epi! But i guess hamari dua qubool ho gai🤣

Anyways here is the update 😊

ZOYA'S ROOM

Asad: Ki mai bhi aapse pyaar karta hoon!

Zoya smiled out of her tears and just ran so fast and hugged him tight!

For a second Asad was shocked but now he knew he has to get used to it.

He hugged her back getting lost in tha moment!

The best moment of their life!

Zoya: Mr. Khan aapko andaza tak nai hoga iss din ka mai kabse intezar kar rai thi! Aapko pata hai jab muje iss ka ehsaas hua ki mai aapse pyaar kar baithi hoon mai bahut dar gai thi Mr. Khan jaise saasein hi ruk gai thi!

Asad: *Confused*
Aisa kyun? Itna bura hoon kya mai?

Asad broke the hug to find her crying.

Zoya: * Teary*
Haan ho aap itne bure Mr. Khan! Jis tarah se aap muje ignore karte the muje toh laga ki mai ek aise insaan se pyaar kar baithi hoon jo mujse kabhi pyaar nai karega! Aur upar se aap jaise complicated aadmi se pyaar karna khud hi mein himmat ki baat thi! Muje laga ki apni aami aur abbu ko khone ke baad mai ab aapko bhi kho dungi apne ek taraf ke pyaar ki vajah se! Mai...mai...mai aapse bahut pyaar karti hoon Mr. Khan! Aur... Mai jab bhi aapse dur jaane ke baare mein sochti mai tut jaati! Ek baar phir kisika pyaar khona mai afford nai kar sakti thi!
*cries a little and get backs to herself*
Par ab muje kisi baat ka dar nai Mr. Khan kyunki mai janti hoon ki aap muje chodke kabhi nai jayenge haina Mr. Khan?

Asad: *Teary*
Sahi kaha! Kabhi nai chodunga aapko mai! Aap sirf meri hai aur hamesha rahengi!
Zoya aap kab tak apni ammi aur abbu ke na hone ke liye apni kismat ko consengi?
Aapko pata hai ammi kehti hai ki insaan ko wahi milta hai jiski usse zaroorat hoti hai! Muje mere abbu ki zaroorat nai thi issiliye vo mere saath nai!
Aur aap toh zoya farooki hai urf "miss fix it all" aap toh itni strong hai ki allah ko laga ki aapko kisi ki ugli pakadke jeene ki zaroorat hi nai jisko thi unke paas hai apne ammi abbu! Vo kamzoor hai! Hum nai kyunki humne wo sab saha hai jo vo sapne mein bhi soch nai sakte!
Aapke paas ammi abbu issliye nai hai kyunki aapko unnki zaroorat nai hai aap aisehi itni pyaari jo hai haina?

Zoya: *Getting back to herself*
Maine sapne mein bhi nai socha tha ki aap itne emotional ho sakte hai! I mean mai janti thi par mujse?
Aaj mai bahut khush hoon Mr. Khan aaj muje sab mil gaya aur kisi baat ka gum nai! Sahi kehte ho aap mai strong hoon! Muje shayad zaroorat hi nai thi!
Thank you Mr. Khan!
Agar aaj aap na hote toh mai zindagi bhar iss baat ka bhoj uthati!

Asad: Issmein thank you ki kya baat hai? Maine toh wahi kaha jo muje sach laaga!

With that Zoya hugged Asad once more!

Zoya: I love you Mr. Khan!
Meri zindagi mein aane ke liye thank you!

Asad: Nai thank toh muje karna chahiye tumhe, meri zindagi mein rang bharne ke liye aur muje iss pyaare se anokhe ehsaas se vakhif karne ke liye! I love you too!
Aur mai aapke saath hamesha rahoonga!

*Cough cough*

ASYA broke their hug and looked back to find Dilshad, Najma& Karan grinning at the door!

Karan: OMG! Like finally!
Happy endings do happen in real life!
Aadhe gante pehle toh dara hi diya tha aapne Mr. Khan!
Toh finally dil ki baat aa hi gai zubaan par!

Najma: I know! Kitni der lagti hai ek i love you kehne mein bhai! Aap bhi na mai shart haar gai!
Ab muje Karan ko all the way mere college ke paas ke kulfi wale ke paas treat dene jaana pagega!

Karan: Vo toh hai! Maine kaha tha meri princess jhel nai payengi! Sabse pehle wahi bolegi! *grins*

Najma: *huff*
Wo toh mere bhaijaan thode speechless ho gaye the!

Asad: *Grumpy*
Tum dono?
Mai jaan gaya tha ki tum dono ka kaam hai!

Karan: Hum dono ki taraf se sorry Mr. Khan! Par hum kya karte mai jaanta tha ki Zoya aapse kitna pyar karti hai aur Najma aapke pyaar ke baare mein! Hum dono toh aapka ek dusre ke liye pyaar kabka samaj chuke the! Yeh jaan ke bhi ki aap dono ki ek duje mein jaan baasti hai agar aapko itni aasaani se alag hone dete toh kalank hai hamare aise rishto par ki apne chahiye logo ke muh pe ek smile bhi na la sake!

Najma: Haan bhaijaan hum jaan ke anjaan nai reh paayen! Akhir hum aap dono se itna pyaar jo karte hai!

Zoya and Asad were in tears. They were so much loved. And here they talked about being alone? No ways! This is their family! Sweet little caring family! The cutest and the best of them all!

Zoya: *Teary*
Karan? Mai tujpe kitna chillayi! Tuje room se bahaar phekne ki koshish ki! Tere muh pe darwaaza band kiya! Saara frustation utara aur tum dono!
Thank you so much you two little cupids!

With that Zoya hugged them both!

Dilshad: Mai aaj bahut proud hoon ye hai mera parivaar jo ek duje se itna pyaar karta hai! Isse pyaara parivaar kisika ho sakta hai bhala?

Zoya: Nai ho sakta phuphi!

Dilshad: Toh finally tum meri hone wali bahu bann hi gai?

Zoya blushes!

Zoya: haan! FINALLY!

Asad: Thank you ammi! Agar aapna muje na samjati toh mai Zoya se apne dil ki baat kabhi na baata sakta!

Dilshad: Mai jaanti hoon beta! Itna bhi nai bada ho gaya tu ki sab baatein khud decide kar sak! Mai jannti hoon mere bete ko meri kahaan zaroorat hai aur hamesha uske liye khadi rahungi! Samje tum?

Asad: Samaj gaya!

Asad and Zoya hug Dilshad to which even Karan and Najma join!
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So this was all lovey dovey happy happy wala update! Hope u ppl lyk it! I have written this in a hurry so i have no idea that it is long or short😆

And yaa i m gonna reach my 2500th post soon!😳

Please do leave yr beautiful comments!

Guys plz check the UPDATED ALPHABETICALLY PM LIST ON PG 18! Check out ur names in it!

Buddy me for pms n also leave a one line comment dat u wnt a PM

GUYS WHILE SENDING PMS I FOUND OUT THAT SOME PPL ARE IN MY PM LIST BUT NOT IN BUDDY LIST! THOSE PPL WONT RECEIVE PMS COZ I DNT KNW WHO R DEY NW! THERE R ALMOST 10 PPL! PPL ON MY BUDDY LIST WUD ONLY RECEIVE PMS! COZ WEN I SEE COMMENTS I SND A BUDDY REQ BUT SOME PPL DO NT ACCEPT DEM SO I CANNOT SND DEM PMS! SRY PPL! TO THOSE PPL WHO R MY LIST AND DIDNT RECIEVE PMS PLZ ADD ME !

Luv Ani <3

Edited by aniiee - 11 years ago

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