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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks 😃
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great update can u please send me a pm too😃
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Originally posted by: Sajilisha

<font color="#330099" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">great update can u please send me a pm too</font>😃

thanks 😃
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Mai aa gayi vaapas!
Taada!
I wonder mera xam mein kya hona hai!
Phir bhi mai likhi! So here is part 4!




ZOYA'S ROOM


Zoya picks her cell and dials a number and that was none other than her bestie karan.

Karan: Arrey badi jaldi hamari yaad aa gayi?

Zoya: india tak aaye aur bataya tak nai!? Mai tujse naraaz hoon!

Karan: arrey baba muje tuje surprise dena tha par tere visa ne toh muje hi surprise de di toh mai kya karta!? Tu hi bata!

Zoya: haan haan jaa maaf kiya! Tum bhi kya yaad rakhoge! 😆

Karan: meri tufaan mail hai kaisi? Kitna time ho gaya tuje dekhe!

Zoya: mast hoon! Waise bhi aaj toh mil hi rahe hai na! Tu aaj raat hi aa rha hai na?

Karan: afternoon mein aa rha hoon! Flight prepone ho gayi!

Zoya: ye toh aacchi baat hai! Jaldi milte hai! Waise muje najma ke saath shopping jaana hai tu aayega shamko jaana hai! Waise muje ab tak najma ko puchna baki hai par yet!

Karan: haan haan! Aayunga na! Definately! Chal koi cliets aaye hai baadmein baat karte hai.

Zoya: okiiee! Miss u! Bye!



NAJMA'S ROOM


Zoya: najma...najmaa...najmmaa... Kahaan ho..?

Najma: arrey meri maa mai washroom mein thi. Ab toh apna gala phad phad ke chilla na band karo!

Zoya: haan! Oops! Sorry! :-/
Sunno nah! *puppy face*

Najma: bolo nah! *same tune*

Zoya: tum aaj free ho!? Muje actually shoppin jaana hai!

Najma: haan haan! Kyun nai! Par kya kareedna hai?

Zoya: kch traditionals indian stuffs n all!

Najma: *spilled d water in her hand*
Tum aur indian?

Zoya : ummm... Haan! Kyun nai!? Muje suit nai karega? *sad*

Najma: na na aisi baat nai hai zoya ! Vo tum indians kahaan pehenti ho aur new york mein unka kya kaam!?

Zoya: mai kch india yani bhopal ki yaadein apne saath le jaana chahti hoon! Tum sab ko pack karke jo nai leja sakti! *teary*

Najma: Aisa mat kaho! Hum bhi tumhein bahut miss karenge! *teary*

Zoya: Chodo ye rona dhona muje bilkul pandand nai hai. Ek kaam karte hai karan ki flight bhi jaldi aane wali hai! Vo aaj afternoon mein hi aa jayega. So mai usse bhi thode indians dilwa dungi! Afterall uski behen ki shadi hai 1month mein! Aur uss allsi ne kch tyaari nai ki hogi !

Najma: umm.. Aap dono ek dusre ko kab se jaanti hai!? I mean kaafi gehri dosti lagti hai!

Zoya: Haan sahi kaha najma kaafi gehri dosti hai humari. Hum college se saath hai. Waise toh vo casanova type ka hai par uski iss image ka humari dosti par kabhi assar nai hua! Vo bahut sweet hai. Aur haan sirf best friends hai aapke asad bhaijaan aur unki tannu ki tarah!😆

Najma: haan baba haan!

Zoya: waise ye baat bhi sahi hai ki vo pura din mujse flirt karta haipar vo hai hi aisa!

Najma: (thiking)
Flirty haan? Ab bhaijaan ke muh se sach ugalwa ke hi rahoongi! Allah miyya aapne mera kaam bada aasaan kardiya!
Ab sirf zoya ke dil ki baat pata karni hai aur isske muh se sach bulwana toh badi aasaan si baat hai!!

Zoya: najma kahaan kho gayi?

Najma: Kahin nai bha..oops sry zoya !

Zoya: bha..? Kya?

Najma: Vo mai soch rai thi ki bhaijaan ke liye ek rishta aaya tha jo bo obvio nakar denge. Par muje bhi apne ghar ek pyaari si bhabhi laani hai ! *pouts*

Zoya: umm... Haan... Vo... Kya ? Jahaanpanah ki shadi?

Najma: Haan kyun?

Zoya: vo kych muje kya? Mai thodi na unhe pansand karti hoon n all aur mai toh jaa rai hoon nah!

Zoya: (thinking)
Shit shit shit!! Kya bol rai hai tu!
Zaabaan pe lagaam daal! 🤣

Najma: *all innocently* ji?

Zoya: kuch nai mera matlab tha ki sad hoon ki jahaanpanah ki shaadi nai dekh paaungi!

Najma: oh haan! *grinning*
Waise sachhi?

Zoya: ummm.. Haan aur nai toh kya! Tamatar tu thoda padh le. Shamko milte hai! Bye!

Before najma could answer zoya ran away 😆

Najma: bye bhabhi! 😆



HALL


Asad comes back from his office.

Asad: Najma coffee milegi?

Najma: haan ye lijiye!

Asad: thanks tamatar!

Zoya and dilshad come to the hall taking about the shopping plans.

Dilshad: toh tum dono bacchiyaan aaj shopping jaa rai ho huh ?

Najma: haan ammi aur aapko pata hai zoya ka friend karan bhi humein join karne wala hai!

Dilshad: ye toh badi acchi baat hai. Usse please dinner ke liye ghar le aana. Mai bhi milna chahti hoon!

Tanveer comes back from her work.

Tannu: kya baat hai?

Dilshad: kch ye dono shopping jaa rahe hai tum jaaogi?

Tannu: nai khala bahut thak gayi hoon! Sona hai muje!

Tannu leaves

Zoya receives a call. Its from karan.

Zoya: welcome to bhopal!

Karan: thank u thank u! Waise tu lene nai aayi airport pe! Kitne baje kahaan aana hai ye tune baataaya hi nai!

Zoya: chhota baccha hai kya? Lene nai aayi ? Waise haan mai najma se puchti hoon!

Zoya: kahaan bulaoon?

Asad: kahin nai!

Zoya: huh?

Asad: mera matlab hai usse kyun itna pareshan kar rai hai aap logo ko maj drive kar deta hoon! Vo jahaan hai vahaan se hum usse pick kar lenge!
Naya hoga na vo iss sheher mein!

Zoya: aap?

Asad: haan mai koi problem hai?

Zoya: nai..! Uummm. Haan karan address do hum tumhe pick karenge!

Karan: yea.. Ok! I ll text u!

Zoya: yea.. Okaay!
***



Gosh i knw ye update boring tha but i guess nxt wla mast hone wla hai. So stay tunned! Ye wale mein family drama zyaada tha nxt wle mein asya jealously zyaada hoga! 😃


Aur haan plz keep commenting accha lagta hai!

Sabne 2 chaps pe comment ki phir 3rd chap ke waqt vo purane log dikh hi nai rahe the! So plz u ppl come back aur mera hosla badhao! 😆


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Luv Ani <3

Edited by aniiee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the way nazma said... bye bhabhi and loved when asad said kahin nai..lol..j factor...
very good update...please continue soon
Edited by jeenia123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm dying to see Asad's reaction to Zoya and Karan's interaction !! Please update the next chapter real soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

unres ~

it was an amazing update!

want karan to come jaldi jaldi because i'm dying to see jealous asad!

ps - wen are your exams?
Edited by startruck - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pls PM me when u update..good going
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey nice update dear
I like Najma & her planning & also i like the answer from Asad Kahi nahi
I know ur next part will be more enjoyable & full of jealousy
so update soon i can't wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm awaiting the next part! Can't wait to Asad jealous!
Thanks for the pm!

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