Poker Face-AsYa SS (16+) Updated! Chapter 5 11/4

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

WOW...that was one really awesome update...

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

whoa...u wrote it beautifully..lovely update...update soon dear

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: RMamsa
I blushed, sighed, cursed my self for not being Zoya & read the chapter 2 twice!
You write passion like no other Del! 😃 this is the smile on my face right now!

Haha thanks a lot Mamsa! I just really wanted this fic to be different. There are so many sweet and romantic ones and i thought hey why not do something more out there. I am glad the gambles working out. 😊

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: J12L85
EXPLOSIVE...ok so I just read all 3 parts thanx to Adeeti who posted the link in her PM...this was just brilliant...it was sensuously erotic but you maintained the beauty of Asyas coming together. Very well poised dear despite all the intensity flowing about... Loved it and looking forward to following your SS:) Outstanding writing!

Dee is a darling for pming the links out 😊

Thank you for taking the time to read this story. I am really happy with the response for this fic. It's kinna really cool that people are being so accepting of a slightly more risque storyline.

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
do i really hav to tell how it was? i guess da previous comments wud hav done dat job pretty well. girl, it was freaking hot, n to think of how da night wud progress is beyond me. waiting for u to cont soon n keep up the excellent work.
love,
Nimra

Hehe...thanks for reading! I'll try and update asap! 😊

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Holy Shit. This update was erotic and sensous. You need to update, and update faster! Please!

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: RMamsa

How I can relate!!!!!

I'm sure you can Mamsy and have a fair idea which certain hottie it would be in the picture for you dear!😉

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Oh my god. It was super hot and excited for the night ahead. Can't wait for next chapter. Please continue soon.

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Manasi

@Manasi_16

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Today I accept...that I am a certified fool😆 After the disastrous error of reading your 'Summer love' SS in office😉 I then continued reading this one😳😳😳

What a different story this is...all your 3 stories are not only very different from the actual show but also within themselves!!!

Fantastic!

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: Manasi_16
Today I accept...that I am a certified fool😆 After the disastrous error of reading your 'Summer love' SS in office😉 I then continued reading this one😳😳😳

What a different story this is...all your 3 stories are not only very different from the actual show but also within themselves!!!

Fantastic!

Hey Manasi,

Correction: my good friend and writing buddy, Delena90 is the author of this wonderful story "poker face". She and I are cowriting a revenge Roulette.

So all credit to her on this one! I only shared her link as part of my PM updates to my buddy list so all of you could enjoy her work! 😆 Do check out her fan fic index on the first post in revenge roulette. You'll find some more awesome stuff.

Only summer love and TLC are by me.