AsYa SS: You're a perfect fit.. Updt Pg. 26 (30/4)

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

plz write down the next part asap.

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Ranee Bhattacharya

@raneeb

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Very nice Avantika--- waiting for you to continue...thank you!

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Andrea

@DreA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Whens the next part coming?? Dont leave us hanging for too long!

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Anaka

@Anaka

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Ya allah!!!!!!!!!!!! Dat was absolutely mindblowing...I wish tanveer is really a grey character coz i jus cant tolerate her sweetness...god my blood actualy boils seeing zoya in pain.Bt dear plz do continue...Am waitinggg 😊

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

I shall be back for this one B2. :)

Hey BB, now you've done it. You have been telling me to catch up with this for ages but reading just part one of your wonderful is making me want to run to nearest computer to catch up on the show, most especially the current track.

Waise I have watched few of the episodes but haven't had the chance to catch up on the whole show yet.

Thar Sherlock bit was very interesting too, you know for the obvious reasons.😉

Anyway I am not sure how close you are to the track of the show but I bet everyone and myself included has enjoyed this OS and are looking forward to you updating this OS.

Really it makes me want to catch up quickly.

Very beautifully written and for me it was easy to picture the scenes in my head. I am aware of each of the characters you mentioned so I was able to picture each of their expressions also.

👏Wonderful job my pyari si behna. Thanks for the PM, I really enjoyed as I expected.

P.S You were worried for nothing, trust me this is really, really good.

Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 12 years ago

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

wish u were a part of creatives dear ...:)

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Awesome story di... Loved it...

Why was Asad scared...???

Please continue soon.

My favourite part was "U underestimated my Sherlock Homes."

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Amazing story. I loved it. I wonder what he read. Please continue soon.

And if possible please pm me. Thanks

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani
RES !!

Even before you posted it 😎

Haha.. And I'd hit the like button, even before you'd Unresed it! Ain't I awesome as well? 😉😆

-EDITED-

Since YEARS I had been resisting to PM you to write on AsYa.
I knew, sooner or later, you would fall for the magic and give in to the temptation.

Oh! I'd told you before..My fingers have been itching to write something, for so long.. I've had my hands full recently.. But yes, had to give in to the temptation.. 😉😆

I'm not surprised. I know you, so I knew this would make my day.
I don't even remember the episode now :D And I LOVE you for that ❤️

Yay! Mission accomplished then.. 😳

As usual, it was B.E.A.U.tiful 😉 (P.S. Yaar karva !! Nai yaad hai 😲🤣)
Sheh! You disappoint me, partner!
Okay.. Remember, Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan? Rings a bell?! 😉
I'm surprised you still remember that! 😆

Right as I started..rather, right when I SAW you've updated, a goofy smile came on my face
It occasionally turned into a smirk, but never left my face. And will not either, till I think about this

Avnu, do come here more often. Your works will save these poor readers from mine 🤣

Oh shut up! I've read a few of your works, if not all.. And my dear, you're on a roll.. Needless to say, I'm a fan of your work, these days.. 😳😆

But seriously, damn amazing. MY Sherlock Holmes. Wish Zoya had heard that. So sweet 😳
And I LOVED the fact that Asad noticed. Blind guy :P It was high time he started actually SEEING !

Yupp.. It really is high time! 😕

Enjoyed each and every moment of it, and will be impatiently waiting for more :D

Yours always my Avnu,
Shaili 😳

Thank you so much, as always dear.. Love you.. 🤗

P.S. PLEASE update EDKV / TDSM / TKPVD !
P.P.S. I don't have any res-ed posts there, do I ?! :O
P.P.P.S. I WANT a reply ! 😛 🤣

Lol.. Yess.. Yes.. I know, it's been ages since I've updated them..
Been really busy with a couple of FF's on Arjun Forum.. That place is addictive! 😃😆
Wil update them in a week or so.. 😃😛

Lol.. I'm not sure if you've commented on TKPVD'd maha epi special and TDSM as well.. 😉😆
Need to check! 😉 *Ducks*