Asad-Zoya OS | Not Anymore. (Tanveer's Entry) - Page 2

Dat was painful yet amazing

zoya's pain brought out very well dear..

Its wonderfully written..And seems pretty real going by the offscreen moments we have seen...I loved how you portrayed Zoya's thoughts something which is not there in the show..I really want Zoya to think about her feelings for once..hope that happens soon...brilliant work!!

This was just amazing Fizza...
I loved the emotional turmoil of Zoe a lot...
I hope this may not happen in the serial.I don't want Zoe to be heartbroken yaar but you are right.Segments have almost confirmed that something like what you have written in going to happen.
Zoe-Why do have such a gentle heart to help Dilshad and get Mr. Khan annoyed...
I've already started disliking Tanveer.
I loved the way you have written the whole bus accident,Zoe and Tanveer's meeting and then Asad's silent way of showing is anger to Zoe by not talking to her...
This OS was very beautiful darling.
Keep writing!!
PS-Plz complete ur SS if possible.

Oh alright just take my heart out and stomp on it why don't you💔

Excellent! You should continue. I know you had it in you. This storyline grabbed me instantly and the characters did not deviate from their original intent. I strongly encourage you to do more. Great work! I like. You're getting the reader to break their heart - and that's talent.

My heart goes out to zoe baby

Brilliant! I won't be surprised if we see this exact sequence by in the coming episodes!! Extremely well written!! I could imagine it all!

ur good at writing.