ASYA FF: Playboy Khan [updated chapter 3, 14 Mar]

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

this is a nice ff. its just da start but its catching my interest. seeing AAK as a pkayboy is soo different. he's smitten by Zoya at first site, i dont think he'l behave similarly wid her, da way he behaves wid everyother female. he will change in personality n cox of zoya he'l become a better person.

plz add me to ur pm list.

love,

Nimra.

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Oishi

@Oishi23

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

wow..I love the concept..so different from others..

update soon..cant wait

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misha93

@misha93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Thank you sooo much everyone for your wonderful comments! :D Im glad you liked the concept. And yep, some of you guessed part of how the story will develop, though I would like to add twists in the future. Lets see where this story will take us 😉 Im sorry I wasn't able to reply to individual comments for this chapter due to exams :S

Note to blueflames: I guess you have a slightly less intense defination of a playboy and I agree there can be different perceptions.I did check up the exact defination after reading your comment though. As for this story, I felt that if I lightened it to just mere flirting, it would be a little misfit for how I want it to develop. Sorry to disappoint. But future Asad will be better na 😛 Hope you still keep interest in the story :) Thank you😊

Edited by misha93 - 12 years ago

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Sophia

@sophie420

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Nice FF, with a good concept!

Please add me to the pm list!

~Sophie :)

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Faatimah

@starsanjana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

all the best in your exams and add me to ur pm lists also

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priyanka

@loveuarmaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Hey i loved ur ff and this asad too **blush**

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Well deary, good to see a SS which has a varied sects of opinions [which i hardly get *jealous jealous* 😆 ]

Its a good start, i must appreciate that, but at some point of time, i did feel that AAK here was kindaa those Womanizers, scanning from head to toe, which i didnt like very much. But but but nevertheless, i hope you have a point why you are writing this and i am sure, Zoya here would change this AAK into a better man.

No offences made, i just said what i felt after reading.

🤗