ASYA FF: Playboy Khan [updated chapter 3, 14 Mar]

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npatel

@npatel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow what a nice story. I love it. I hope you continue...i know with this Tanveer track all are sad, including myself but we can be optimistic with our FF's, OS's, and SS's. One can dream right?

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blueflames

@blueflames

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

i agree your title Playboy Khan is attracting readers, i liked the first part, but honestly second one disappointed me sorely.

if Asad is a playboy he should be a lady killer, flirtatious and a charmer not an X-ray machine scrutinizing ladies figure and beauty. are you sure your character Asad uses women as tissue paper.

this line "Humari taraf ek bhi baar dekha nahi. Kal take to bade maze se hume chu rahe the"

assassinates his character to a level of a pervert.

i might have sounded rude but this is what i felt.

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kdramafan

@kdramafan

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Edited my comment on page 2. Why is this happening today??😕 Why are my posts getting double posted??🤔

Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago

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kdramafan

@kdramafan

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Edited my comment on page 2 and yippie I was the first one to comment

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Inquisitive_mind

@HmmBrazen

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Just readed both the chapters they are superb... do pm me

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

it sounds nice but i didn't really understand it since it was in hindi

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Bharti

@TheSexyDevil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hey just came across ur ff...its awesome

i am soo blushing☺️...can't believe Asad can be soo but very interesting

the PLAYBOY KHAN🤣...amazing idea

pls update soon and please try to pm me

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Tanzia Scott

@latanzia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

i like it so far, but if Asad is a playboy you need to spice up his character more.😉

Good job though i am waiting for the next part

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RMamsa

@RMamsa

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Its fun & light reading :) add me to your PM list :)

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Good thing Zoya isn't like those other cheap girls...She will resist but how long ...who knows?!? xD Zoya will hopefully end up fixing Asad's ego and fixing his dirty ways ...although not bad ;) xD Please PM me for next update!!