ASYA: OS GALLERY BY AS ❤️ (Note pg27) - Page 4

Aah this is too good! I really like the way you write!

Sorry don't have much time to jot down my thoughts at the moment so can't give you a bigger comment lol

But this is truly really well written! I loved how Asad confessed. And how ammi knew how Asad is gonna react lol
Anyways keep writing :D

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

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Asad said he loves her

Dilshad playing cupid

You are an awesome writer dear

I loved this OS

Keep them coming

Okay.. I am lost now. I don't know what to say. You've portrayed Asad and Zoya's character so beautifully.. I didn't feel as if I was reading an OS.. Felt as if it was QH ka episode..Loved how Zoya fumbles all the time 😆 .. I really feel like you've been writing since ages .. You really don't look like someone new to writing.. The BEST part of the OS for me would be when Ammi made Zoya go all sharmilee.. and the other best part would obviously be the confession where you've again not forgotten Asad ka character.. It's AWESOME .. Seriously.. It's too good.. You're really stupid.. How can you even say this is not nice :| It is amazing okay.. ? Don't bring those stupid thoughts into your mind. Samjhi ?

Originally posted by: havokhotline

Tha was outstanding! :)

Thanks a ton :)

Originally posted by: HoneySweety

Wow its realy a very nice os continte

Thanks a lot :)

Originally posted by: amruta04

nice OS
loved it
thanks for the pm.

Thanks...m glad u liked it :)

Originally posted by: -Deepshikhaa-

Completely loved it, specially when Zoya Hugs him and Asad finally confesses that he loves her😳

And I really liked the way youu expressed their feelings❤️

Overall it was just tooo cute <3333

As you said its your gallery, so you HAVE TO KEEP WRITING OS.😆Don't stop because you are an excellent writer😳

I love youu Appuuu Papppuuu😳

Omgieee deepshi...thank u sooo much ofor commenting firstly 🤣
I m sooo happy that u liked it...
Yep I would try writing more :P wen I get idea in my tiny brain 🤣
I lovee u more 🤗

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

A very beautiful OS indeed.
I loved it a lot.
You are a wonderful writer.
I hope you may write more on ASYA.
Thanks a lot for the pm dear.

Awww 🤗 thanks a ton...yep I would write more on ASYa

Originally posted by: rockstar_kajen

OMG 😲

thank u sooo much for the wonderful comment dear...

m glad u liked it :D thank uuu 🤗

When are you planning to update this gallery.😳

Waiting for a new one

Don't make us wait for long. I would love to read more from you😳

Love,

Diya