FF: Kya aapko Qubool Hai :Last Part, Page-137 - Page 29

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I just luv it dear do continue soon
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This is quite a super Interesting FF!!...once I started reading,I couldn't stop.. the relations & feelings of each person especially Asad & Zoya,are well expressed!!...Tanveer is annoying especially all the times she tried to make Zoya look bad infront of Asad!...agh!
Wat a relief it was wen Razia finally had to pay for her evil deeds,felt sad for Zoya though..looking foward to this "family dinner"...
Will Asad go??... Will they find out about tanveer??...
Please pm me...Thanks!!..
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Perfect!! Can't wait for next chapter!!! Thanks for PM :)))
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it was awesome plz pm me when you update again!
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Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..

eager to read the next part. :)


will update today dear...
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Thnaks to all of above for liking my post and as well as to all those who commented, just writing next part...will update soon...

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Hey all, i am back with my update... a long update and finally after this update, story back on track... this will be my last update of this week. next update most probably on tuesday as i will be busy upto monday...

Part-14

It was evening and Rashid Khan's house was decorated beautifully, may be it was going to witness a new relation, so called relation of two wives of one husband, but Shirin had thought it to make a sisterly relation, she had asked everyone's choice from zoya and prepared food according to that, zoya too had helped her in kitchen as she knew what and how Mr. Khan will like everything'.

shirin was liking Zoya day by day and she was the only one at the home who didn't knew reality of zoya-ayaan's relation and zoya was tensed on thinking how will she react when she will come to know the truth'

All were waiting for Dilshad and her family to come'.

At Asad's home, dilshad was getting ready, she had worn a beautiful green suit as green was favorite colour of Rashid'Asad had seen his ammi happy after such a long time'.

Nazma was also happy as she was going to meet her siblings officially today'till now, she had just seen from a distance in the college or sometimes necessary talk' but for the first time, she was going to be with them' Asad had decided to take Tanveer with them as he wanted to avoid zoya and he knew, if Tanveer would be there, it would be easier for him to control his emotions'..

As they reached there, saw all of them were waiting eagerly for them' Dilshad reached to the gate of rashid's home, but was hesitant to enter inside, shirin came, held her hand and took her inside..both the ladies had unsaid emotions attached to each other. Dilshad was giving her respect for accepting her husband's first wife and shirin was giving her respect as dilshad had never tried to ruin her life in last seventeen years for taking her husband away'..

Ayaan came , hugged Asad'both the brothers had tears in their eyes'when Nikhat, Nuzzrat and Humaira came and took Nazma and Tanveer with them' All of them went to badi bee'

Badi Bee was pleased to see her whole family together, when Rashid came and was surprised to see all this' He was just shocked n seeing all this, when shirin gave her Dilshad's hand and turned to go back but dilshad held her hand too'..

Rashid went to Asad'but Asad still had anger in his eyes only for Rashid and he denied to talk to him'

Dilshad came to rashid'. Rashid, he still needs time to accept but I am sure one day he will call you abbu'.

Zoya had arranged the dining table and all were having dinner together' Zoya was talking nonstop to Dilshad and Nazma as if she wanted to speak to her heart in those few hours'.

Zoya, I have never seen your this side in so many days'.. I have always seen you serious and sad, didn't know aap itna bolti bhi hain' said shirin'

Kya? Zoya baat nahi karti? aapko koi galatfehmi hogi Shirin, ye to pichle teen mahine se humare ghar ki ronak thi' humare bejaan ghar mein isne jaan daal di thi' lekin jab se ye gyi hai, humara ghar phir se vaise hi bejaan ho gya hai'.. Lekin ab kuch hi dino mein hmari bahu tanveer aa jayegi' to hope hmara ghar fir se roshan jho jayega'.. said Dilshad looking towards tanveer'. to which tanveer smiled while zoya skipped her heart'..Asad looked at her from corners of his eyes' and suddenly said , yes, ammi, soon our home will witness the happiness, when tanveer will be there'.

While zoya thought'. yes, my decision of being alone at my ammi's home was right 'once I leave ayaan's home' I know my dream to get love can never be fulfilled'. soon he will get married to Tanveer'. and'.

Par zoya to hamare ghar ko roshan kar chuki haii, agar hum pure jahan mein chirag lekar bhi dhundhte na, to bhi hme ayaan ke liye esi ladki na milti'.shirin said'

Suddenly something fell on Tanveer's dress, zoya stood up to tell her the way to washroom, when Tanveer got up and moved ahead of zoya without listening to her'.

zoya was a little surprised: Tanveer, how did you knew the directions to washroom, you were for the first time here'

Tanveer was a bit upset: I''I just guessed zoya'. waise the food is very tasty, you have changed a lot after marriage'. and wearing anarkali too? a good change'. Tanveer changed the topic'

Time changes everything Tanveer, misfit for someone may be fit for some else, it depends on the way to look at the person'.. zoya said while looking at Asad, who bowed his head down on listening'.

All had enjoyed the evening forgetting their differences and with new growing relations'.

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By next week police verification for zoya's visa extension had been done and the renovation work of zoya's ammi home was also complete'. when Ayaan came ot zoya'

Zoya, are you sure you need a divorce now?

yes Ayaan' I want you as well as me to set free'

may I ask you one question, if you don't mind?

yes, ayaan,

Do you have someone else in your life?

on listening a tear rolled over zoya's eyes and she just thought about Asad'.

she wiped her tear' no ayaan,there is no one now'

no one now? means there was someone in past?

yes, I will not lie to you, there was someone, totally different from me.' but I could not understand in time, what I felt for him, and when I understood that I was in love, he has gone'.. gone away to someone else declaring me misfit for him' he never loved me'. anyways I am alone now and for a while, I want to be alone'. I need time for myself'

Zoya..., ayaan held her hand'.. I want to tell you something'.

zoya was shocked on his behavior'

Zoya, first I had a different opinion for you, I always thought, you are carefree and modern girl' but in last few days, we stayed together and I found you too different from others' zoya, I just want to say'''.I'. I love you''' can't you be my life partner forever?

Zoya shrugged her hand and stood up from the bed' ayaan , I understand your feelings' I know you are a good guy'.. but I had already told you'. there will be no intimacy between us'. ayaan, I have loved just one person till I have understood love, and there can't be anyone else in my life'

but you are saying na, he loves someone else'.

when did I say, I demand the reply of my love from him? I love him, that is my problem' he doesn't love me, he has his own reasons'. and I am not going back to him after having divorce with you' I will go to my ammi's place till appi and jiju come next month, after that I will go back to New york with them'

And if they chose someone for you?

They know me very well, for me, marriage is everything'. you know, why I preferred to get married in court instead of traditional wedding with you'. because main kabhi bhi ese rishte ko qubool nahi kar sakti jo main zindagi bhar ke liye nibha nahi sakti'.. For me saying " Qubool Hai" to someone is to accept him forever and not temporarily'..

So its your final decision? you will live alone and join a job?

Yes'.

Ok,I will not force you in anything'. tomorrow, we may file for divorce in the court, hope the case will be over soon with mutual consent'. but remember one thing'.. I am always there for you, if ever you feel like'.

but how will we tell to ammi? she doesn't know anything'

I will tell her truth tomorrow and don't worry about that, no one will stop you from going..'. by the way, I have talked to a consultant, you have interviews day after tomorrow'

Thanks a lot Ayaan, but we will be friends always, I never get a friend like you, who helped too much to me'. zoya hugged ayaan, which ayaan reciprocated with his love'

Zoya, may I demand something from you? said ayaan parting from zoya'

yes'

Can't you be the same zoya as old before, the same chirping and speaking a lot'.

you know ayaan, I always thought, just being happy in pain makes you feel good' that's why I was always happy till I didn't know truth of my ammi's death and abbu' appi never told me that I will break and I always showed being very strong'. but she was right, that truth broke me from inside, I don't have a strength to be happy again' but yes, I will try to be the same zoya as before soon'. and same applies on you too'.

yes, I will be happy again with my zingo hotties''.

with a happy node, both went for sleep thinking about the next day'

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Next day was shock for Shirin, she was all in tears as she came to know the decision of ayaan and zoya at the dining table' all were trying to console her, but she was too angry with them and was totally broken' she didn't see zoya's face when she was leaving home, however rashid had been to court with them to file for divorce. It was just a matter of few days that both got divorced.

Zoya shifted at her ammi's place to start her new life and as per ayaan's advice to become an old zoya all happy and enjoying life'.

Precap:-- Zoya at her new job' just guess, where?

So, how did you like it? (i just made zoya to work as i didn't want zoya to send back to asad's home when tanveer is there and she had her ammi's home now)
do leave your feedback...
Edited by jeenia123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it.waise maan na padega you are a great writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi jeenia. I just love this story and your writing style. I think zoya will join asad's company. And I agree with you zoya should not go back to asad's place because of that BCA.

Well have a great weekend. Will wait for next update. 😊
Edited by life4me - 12 years ago

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