FF: Kya aapko Qubool Hai :Last Part, Page-137 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update!
Please update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I can't tell you I didn't like it because I did ...because Asad deserves that ...I wish it happens in the show as well ...because Asad is being a total douche-bag right now! -.- Like seriously!!! Can't wait for next part!! Thanks for the PM :))
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: titli4love

Well..I liked it though I never considered Ayaan n Zoya as a couple in ur story n it's a little bit weird.But I like the twists! 👏
So plz carry on...😛


Yup, i too agree, even now i don't consider as a couple, it will be cleared in next update dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: e_enigma

I have a feeling that this will actually happen...

Anyway, I like it! :)
I love the way the story is progressing! :D


ya, i too feel so thats why i thought to pen down it in my way...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: marialuvsarshi

thanks for the pm please update soon



Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: irock321

I can't tell you I didn't like it because I did ...because Asad deserves that ...I wish it happens in the show as well ...because Asad is being a total douche-bag right now! -.- Like seriously!!! Can't wait for next part!! Thanks for the PM :))


Thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey all thanks for the feedback and liking, so here is the next update...


Part-10

Miss Farukhi….Asad called….

Its Mrs. Zoya Ayaan Ahmed Khan…… Zoya answered with tears….

Why did you do so? why? asked Asad….

you don't have any right to ask Mr. Khan…..

but you could even talk to me taking such a big decision… atleast once? was I nothing to you?

I had come to you Mr. Khan , when you were talking to phuphi about me………… zoya finished her sentence and Asad was all lost……….. this means she knew every word he had said about her…..

meanwhile Ayaan came there…

Zoya begum chalien ghar? he called zoya, while Asad was hiding his tears… pretended to be on call and left the space for Ayaan….

Let's go but first remember all the condition,s I have told to marry you. said zoya………

Yes, Zoya I remember everything… this marriage will be just a contract between you and me, I will never try to be intimate with you and this marriage will be valid only till you complete your revenge from Mamu and Mumani and I get the proofs to save my abbu that may be with mumani…. ok? but if till then you fall in love with me? Ayaan chided her…

no chance Mr. Ayaan Ahmed khan, it is not possible in this life….. do as we have decided….. and both started moving…

Wait a minute………..Asad called them back, who had listened everything………………

both looked back in shock….

What is this? is your marriage just a….? Asad left the sentence incomplete……..

Bhai jaan? I thought yo have left already……….

don't change the question, answer me ayaan. asked asad in anger………

bhai jaan infect zoya called me in the morning and came to meet me at lake side with a proposal…

that if I marry her today, she may get extension in visa and she will enter into my house…… and we together may find the doll and CD which will prove abbu innocent as well as she will get time to take revenge from mumani and mamu for killing her mother…… we both had reasons and both could complete our responsibilities, so I agree………. we also involved Abbu in all that, he too know everything now……

and he too agreed for this stupid plan? do you think those siddiquis will not come to know about it……. the person who has stolen that doll from my room must be knowing about zoya too… that she was also included in our plan, they may harm her too…………

Yes Mr. Khan, they know everything that I was involved in finding proofs for Mr. Rashid Khan, but one thing is there they don't know……..That I am daughter of Nadira , that I am daughter of Mr. Sidiqui….. they will never come to know about that………. and as much for danger to my life is included……. I am big enough to take care of myself as well as , I am also not fit for any family na? what matters I live alive or not tomorrow, no one is there to even weep for me……. so you need not to worry about me……she commented on Asad

while Asad's heart skipped a beat on listening this….. he left the place in small tears in his eyes… while Ayaan asked zoya………. ab ghar jaa ke dekhein kya naya tamasha hota hai? and both headed towards home.

Ayaan and zoya had recahed at the gate of Rashid Khan's house…. Rashid ahd already told at home that Ayaan got married to a girl of his own choice…….. every body was shocked specially Humaira…… how could he? he didn't even tell her about that…. As Ayaan entered in house with zoya…… Humaira, Nikhat and Nuzzrat …all were shocked………Zoya? (They all have met zoya once in their college) while Razia was worried that their must be some plan behind threir marriage as billo rani had already told her about Zoya marrying Ayaan………. shirin was all in tears and not ready to accept zoya as her daughter in law when Dadi came ahead and accepted zoya as her family member……..

Finally all compelled shirin to accept zoya as her daughter in law and zoya entered in the house with all the rituals…..

As zoya was in Ayaan's room… Shirin came to her….

Zoya, humein appke bare mein zyada to nahi pta par nikhat aur nuzzrat ne ataya aap new york se ayi hain?

Ji… all zoya said….

Any ways… humein is baat se koi shikwa nahi hai ke ayaan ne apni pasand ki ladki se nikah kiya, bus gila to ek hi baat ka hai ke humara ek hi beta tha aur hum uska nikah dhoom dham se karna chahte the…. chaliye koi baat nahi… hum jaldi hi ek Dawat rakheinge aur sab logon se apka parichay karwaynge……… Zoya just amiled but could not reply….

Aftre some time ayaan came ther….

Zoya, maine Mumani ko hamare room ke age nikalte dekha , I think she has doubted….

no problem Ayaan but everything will be as per our plan…. we will start from tomorrow… and zoya went to sleep on couch… but she was reminding Mr. Khan's recation in the court… did I matter to him so much that brought tears in his eyes? if it was so then how could he said I was misfit for him?

There Asad was still wiping his tears, today zoya could be his instead of ayaan if he had not made such comment on zoya…. now he has lost her forever………………

I will not ask how it was today because i know it was more a filler... and i even felt bad while writing about Ayaan with Zoya don't know how will tolerate in the serial if it happens there... anyways, i will try to complete this Ayaan zoya part within two more updates and bring the story back to ASYA till then please bear with me and keep commenting so that i may bring the story to track soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Was it????????????
thanks for the feedback...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part.
I know its hard to see ayaan and zoya together but it is important.
we knew the value of something when we lost it.
now asad knows what zoya means to him.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshilksg

nice part.

I know its hard to see ayaan and zoya together but it is important.
we knew the value of something when we lost it.
now asad knows what zoya means to him.


agree dear but its too difficult for me to write about zoya and ayaan... hope i will finish this part soon...

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