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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: deeyadev
This was beautiful yaar❤️...u really portrayed her pain... !!!!!!!!!!!

aww thanks love <3

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: misha93
Nooo!

yess!!! 🤣

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny
Beautifully written! 👏

thanks love <3

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Annie

@_Annie_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

I hate you!! :/ Why so saddy saddy?? :(
But...it was beautifully written...the portayal of Zoya's emotions were so Awesome! :)
But girl, you have to write another happy OS...or else I will definitely kill you!! :P :D 😆

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sweetypie_16
I hate you!! :/ Why so saddy saddy?? :(
But...it was beautifully written...the portayal of Zoya's emotions were so Awesome! :)
But girl, you have to write another happy OS...or else I will definitely kill you!! :P :D 😆

i love you too <3 🤣

thanks love, BUT I CANT WRITE HAPY OS's !!!

one day, maybe <3

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Annie

@_Annie_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: AussieChick

i love you too <3 🤣
thanks love, BUT I CANT WRITE HAPY OS's !!!
one day, maybe <3

But why? 😭 Are you always depressed? :/ :P

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sweetypie_16

But why? 😭 Are you always depressed? :/ :P

im not deppressed love 🤣

actually quite the opposite.

the teachers say that the only reason i write sad stuff is because im so bright, i dont realise all this pain and shit, so thats why my stories end up angsty 🤣

you gotta love aussies 🤣

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MannMeRamBasale

@DamRyeong

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

seriously dude???

u killed mr. khan just bcoz u don't hv chocolates i ur bag... ???

go n buy some chocolates n write another os..😆

which should be beautifully written just like this one.. 😉

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kriti

@GroverAddict

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

amazingly written
please write happy things to...where asad stays alive

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Andrea

@DreA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

OMG You Killed Asad! I hope you never go another day without chocolate lol
Superb writing though. With all the boy bands you stalk you should write about happy things too lol. It was great 😊