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Posted: 12 years ago
Woohoo, u updated! 🥳 Lovely chapter! 👍🏼 But Asad didn't get to finish his confession! 😡 😭 And Billi showed up! 🤬 🤣 Continue soon, sweetie! 😆 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow! its sad FF!! bt i lik it..update soon gal
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~Flashback~

She sighed heavily and lightly ruffled my hair and nodded her head in a yes. I took my coat and opened the door and to my astonishment there was someone already standing there.

Tanveer.

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Chapter - 9

~Zoya~

"Hello, Chief? It's me Zoya." I said softly.

"Officer Farooqi! Thank god you called! The whole unit was so scared, where were you after the encounter?" A very worried Chief spoke from the other end.

"Chief, I got shot I'm in a hospital right now, didn't Officer Punjabi tell you about this?" I asked him.

"Officer Punjabi? He never came to us, and anyway he is not even a member of your team! Why is he working with you?" Chief asked suspicion lacing his voice.

"Wait a second! What?! Officer Punjabi is not a member of my team?! How can that be possible? He's been working with me on Mr. Khan's case! He told me I was his partner!" I said.

"Officer Farooqi, I don't know how this can happen under my supervision but now that I'm checking his profile he was in unit 20 and was assigned a different mission, one that required him to go to Moscow a week ago. And according to this report he has already reported at Moscow and is sending us information from there!" The Chief said.

"Sanjeev uncle.." I said my voice shook in the end.

"Zoya beta, I know you are worried and Gaffur has told me to take care of you, and I will. Just keep me reported of whatever he does I need to see what he's upto. If he can forge his profile and case files and can even send us information from Moscow then this boy can do anything. I'll send two officers for your protection tell me in which hospital are you admitted?" Chief asked me, and I told him.

After that I hung up the phone, and started panicking if this guy could forge files and escape from CBI's eagle eyes then this guy is capable of doing almost everything. Suddenly I felt as if I could not breathe, I had trusted this guy so much! But now that I think of it, I don't know whether I should even trust him or not.

I ran a hand through my hair shakily and took my pills, hoping that it would make the pain go away and make me drowsy. And it had the desired effect, I was sleepy now and was almost going back to sleep when a nurse entered my room.

"Miss Farooqi? Mr. Khan has come to visit you." She said and I quickly sat up, fighting away any signs of sleep.

"Zoya." He said when he came in, whenever he says my name it always sets my heart racing.

He sat beside me and started fiddling with his fingers, he seemed kind of nervous, which was weird. I kept my hand over his fingers and he looked up.

"Asad, what's wrong?" I asked him softly.

"Zoya your father is Gaffur Siddiqui, right?" He asked me, my heart sank.

"Ye..yes" I stuttered.

"He killed my father, Rashid Ahmed Khan, you knew that didn't you?" He asked me.

"Yes" I stuttered again. He closed his eyes and tried to compose himself, I felt as if the floor would give away any second. How did he come to know about this? Did Mrityunjay..?

"Why didn't you tell me, Zoya? You knew it, you knew it from the very start that I was after the man who killed my father! Why didn't you tell me? Or rather were you even planning to tell me?" He asked me, his voice though soft sent shivers down my spine.

After so long things had finally set in, things were finally going great between us, but no faith had to intervene! Why couldn't I get a happy normal life with him? Where there were no secrets between us?

"Asad, I was planning to tell you trust me!" I said and took his hand in mine, he quickly snatched them back.

"Words like trust don't sound good when they come out of your mouth, Zoya." He said and got up, his words had pierced my heart tears were now flowing freely.

He was going now, it was now or never if not today then maybe it will be too late and maybe after today I won't see his angelic face again.

"Asad please don't leave me, not again I won't be able to take it." I said softly, my voice shaky. He suddenly stopped and turned around and looked at me his eyes unreadable.

"I know we hardly know each other but I feel as if I know you since forever, please don't go so soon." I said and fiddled with my bed sheet.

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~Asad~

"Just give me a reason to stay then, Zoya." I said to her.

"I'm asking you to stay, isn't that reason enough for you to stay?" She said, her eyes pleading.

"Why do you want me to stay?" I asked her softly and sat beside her.

"Because I feel lost, incomplete when I'm not with you Asad. I don't know what it is...but whenever you're near it makes me complete. I know we've hardly met each other and most of the meetings have usually turned out sour but I want you to stay, would you stay?" She asked me her eyes brimming with tears.

"Zoya..." I said.

"If you want to leave then you can...I won't pressurize you I just wanted you to know what I felt." She said and looked down. I gently cupped her face and forced her to look up.

"I want to stay, and I'm not leaving until you tell me to, Zoya...I love you and there's nothing that could ever change it, not even the fact that you hid what I wanted the most." I said and took her hands in mine.

She smiled and hugged me tightly and then suddenly gasped in pain and clutched her stomach tightly, I quickly handed her, her pills and she gulped them down. Beads of sweat had formed on her forehead, she closed her eyes and breathed heavily. She opened her eyes and smiled at me again.

"You had almost got me there you know? You gave me a heart attack Zoya, don't do that to me ever!" I said and she rested her forehead against mine.

"I won't do that again I promise." She said and I kissed her forehead softly and made her lie down, soon after she was sound asleep.

Finally I was feeling as if I was now complete, as if now everything was going great and now that I could breathe again. But the fact remained the same her father, Gaffur Siddiqui had killed mine and whatever happened now, I had to find him and demand some answers.

But before that I had some more important work to do when I reach home.

To find out what Tanveer was doing here.

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Hola peeps! I'm back with an update!

Hope you like it! 😉

And here is a news for y'all! The FF is soon gonna end, the maximum chapters this FF will have is about 22, not more than that!

R&R!









Edited by lDirectionerl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

unres!

the update was amazing!

i love this FF! one of my favorite!

cant wait for the next part!😃
Edited by --starstruck-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
God I love this Asad. I hope Tanveer is doomed. Please tell me she is?
So Mrityunjay is the bad guy :). The update was great but short :'(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh My i didnt know about this FF.

why have i never recieved pm's for this one. I have to read all chaps. Im resing, il read all and comment. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

oh man this update was the best!!👏
i am lost of words now ...to explain how much good was everything between them...
i really felt so good!!!!
u r amazing tanya!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh this update was the best!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome wala update!

I loved Zoya's dialogues here...and mrityunjay is supposed to be in Moscow but he's here instead?! Eh? Ab iska kaunsa chakkar hai?
Please update soon , cant wait to read!!!

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