Asya two shot : The doll factory part 2 updated

Hello everyone. I am back. I am very overwhelmed with the responce you gave to my first

os. Thank you so much everyone. ok, so the latest topic of discussion on the forum is the

doll factory. Thought to write something...Here it goes

The Doll Factory

Asad and zoya reach the doll factory to know the secret behind the burnt factory.

Zoya - Mr. khan aapko kya lagta hain yahan pe koi ghost hoga kya? Hum logon ko khayega

to nahi naa?

Asad looked at her weirdly and said, aapke hote huye kisi bhoot ki kya jarurat hai

aap to waise bhi dinbhar mera dimag khati rehti hai.

Zoya - Allah miyan...whats wrong with you Mr. khan? Aap mere bare mein kabhi kuchh acchha nahi bol sakte.

He smiled at her expression, suddenly they heard some noice.

Zoya got scared and said, maine kaha tha naa yaha ghost hain, aap mere kabhi nahi sunte Mr. khan (He covered her mouth with his hand)

Asad - ssshhh...(they looked into each others eyes for a while.😳 Asad breaks the eye contact

and follows the sound )

They saw a man digging the land and some bones were lying there😲. The man was none other

than Rashid. Asad was horrified with the scene in front of him so was Zoya. Rashid sees Asad

and Zoya and stop his work. He was shocked to see Asad there. He tried to explain but...

Asad - (with teary eyes) to ye hai aapka raaz. 17 saal pehle aapne kisika qutal kiya aur laash

yaha dafan kardi. Aur isiliye aapne meri ammi ko chhoda. Ek baat bata dijiye aapne meri

ammi par goli kyun chalwayi?

Rashid - Asad..beta maine...

Asad- maine aapko pehle bhi kaha tha main aapka beta nahi hoon.😡

With that he left from there and Rashid looked at Zoya helplessly. She knew something

is wrong but she was very well known of Asad's anger. so she also left from there.

Asad was sitting in his car crying. As soon as Zoya came there he wiped his tears. Zoya

noticed that he was crying. she sat down in the car.

Zoya - Mr. khan crying helps you to ease your pain and sometimes it's also good for

eyes because it cleans your eyes.

Asad looked at her confusingly and a tear rolled down from his eyes. Zoya blinked her eyes

once and gave a small nod with a faint smile. He hugged her and cried out loudly he don't

know why but his heart said you can trust this girl. Zoya was taken aback by his behavior

but she controlled herself and put a hand on his back to comfort him. After some time he

became normal and they left for the home. He went straight to his room because he didn't wanted

to face his ammi. Zoya tells Dilshad that the guard didn't allowed them to enter the factory.

Zoya was finding some reason to talk to Asad. She gets an idea, she made a cup of

Coffee and knocked on the door. Asad opened the door and allowed her to enter his room.

She handed him the cup of coffee and sat down on his couch.

Asad- I am sorry for what i did in the car.

Zoya ' Its ok

Asad- woh aapne ammi ko kuchh bataya?

Zoya- nahi. Maine kaha ki watchman ne hume andar nahi aane diya. Mr. Khan aap ko jab thik lage

Tab aap iss bae mein phuphi se baat karna.

Asad- thank you

That night Zoya again had a nightmare about her past which was scaring

Her nowdays.

Next morning,

everyone was having breakfast and the doorbell rang. Asad opened the door...

Zeenat and Anwar was there to surprise Zoya.

Ok guys this is it. It will be a two shot. Tell me should i continue or not.

And how was it? Chappals, tamatar, all are welcome. I will update the next part

In 2-3 days.😊

Originally posted by: fee-fee

2-3 days is way to long! 😆 Please continue- I like it- kind of goes with the character's current states. Good job so far- can u also PM me with the continuation?

It's a nice start

Please continue..