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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Zara, this is an absolutely amazing ff, i found it today accidentally, at first i was a little uncomfortable with the whole idea of Asad and Humaira, but for some reason i carried on reading and before i knew it, i just had to read it in one go, i hope you update soon and i know it's a little early but 'Eid Mubarak!' for next week. Also please can you pm me when you update? Thanks a bunch! x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This story is amazign and i really like the parts where Zoya is teasing Asad and when they are just like a family with everyone else. Please update sooon, and pm me when you do pleaseee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: zara1ksg


Hey readers .. I know that I am very delayed and haven't updated in a long time .. I was too irratated with tannu to get the writing done but now that she is gone I promise to update really soon ... I am very busy till next week mon .. But as soon as ramadaan is over I will be updating very frequently .. There's a lot of interesting twists coming up in the story as well as AsYa romance !!!

If you want updates to be in ur pm then please buddy me 😊

And I promise no more writing in caps locks ... 😊

And just so I know .. What has been your most favorite part of the story so far .. So I know what to write more about ?

Xoxo
Zara



Dear is more then a month... hope you are well..
and update soon... TC

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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

hey everyone ! I know I promised to write after ramadaan , but I was soo uninspired - everytime I wanted to write something no words came !! well surprisingly news of a maybe zoyaan track has inspired me to write a new part ! so please enjoy and leave your comments !😊

to linsie - this is for you - you have been asking for updates all the time , hope you enjoy this , sorry for the late update
PART 16

recap - zoya left the house after razia confronted - asad went crazy looking for her and finally confessed their love for each another -

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at the house rashid ,dilshaad and the family waited anxiously for zoya and asad to return ..dilshaad was on the ground making dua and thanking allah for helping asad find zoya . and she prayed that allah always keep them together and happy .

the next moment asad walked in zoya a few steps behind him but her hand was held tightly by asad

zoyaa!! - the 3 sisters ran to her to see if shes okay , humeira brought her a tea and asked zoya to drink it !

bhabi is your favourite movie the runaway bride ? ayaan came and squirmed his way next to zoya and gave her a side hug .. do you know how worried i was !

ayaan! again with your nonsense ! - asad muttered - please take everyone upstairs to your room , i need to talk to ammi and abbu ,

oh bhaijaan ! you got zoya back , you should be romancing with her ! why do you wanna talk to the parents now ! cmon bhaijaan !

ayaan ! asad said a bit louder this time and looked at ayaan with a gaze that ayaan knew he had to keep quite !

ok girls lets go ! i have to try on my sherwani for so many upcoming weddings ! you girls can tell me which looks best and he started up the stairs ..

zoya followed behind and as she passed asad , her hand grazed his and her caught her fingers in his ! he didnt want to let go but it was just for a little while ! he nodded to her and smiled and his eyes told her everything will be ok so she left his hand hesitantly and went upstairs ..

razia and gaffur were watching this silently - when razia started ! dilshaad ! this is the girl you want as your bahu ! she didnt even apologise for just running away ! how could she -

and she was interrupted by asad ! i think its better that you dont say anything razia ! asad angrily looked at her .. and i think that its time you and your husband leave !

Asad ! what are you saying ? dilshaad sternly asked asad ! talk with respect !

ammi ! this women deserves no respect ! she is the reason that zoya left ! she accused zoya of marrying me for money ! she taunted zoya ! she blamed her for humeira and I ...

dilshaad bi , zoya is lying .. i nev- razia stuttered ,

NOT ANOTHER WORD ! asad shouted !

asad calm down ! dilshaad touched him !

razia is this true ? did you ask zoya to leave ?

razia looked to her husband for help but he kept silent ! and dilshaad knew her answer !

i think it would be better if url leave tomorrow ! rashid said , we have family gathering here and i think it would be best for everyone if yourl did not attend !

but rashid ! gaffur tried to plead but all he got was rashid walking away from him - dilshaad followed and they went to their room !

gaffur stared angrily at razia and stormed to his room ! razia was leaving when asad came and menacingly stood infront of her , one more thing ! never talk about zoyas parents ever again ! he was never your ! and you can never hold that against zoya ! it would be best if we never see each other again - i will make sure the car is here for yourl at 8 am ! and he let razia walk of to her room , her head bent down ...

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asad stood outside ayaans room and he heard laughter , it was hers ! she sounded so magical - he opened the door slightly and saw sitting inbetween najma and nikhat as they watched ayaan do different poses ..

asad rolled his eyes looking at ayaan and he peeked at zoya again - she was laughing but he could see different emotion in her eyes ! , there was sadness , worry and happiness , but she still managed to smile for everyone !

asad was so lost in her beauty , he didnt realise everyone was now watching him !

ahem , ahem , bhaijaan can we help you ? ayaan teased

zoya blushed realising asad was staring at her - he looked so handsome . he had changed into a white shirt which was unbuttoned enought to see a little of his chiseled chest ! she could see love for her in his eyes and it filled her with a warmth ! she just wanted to be with him ! his eyes were pulling her to him ! she was so lost in his eyes ! and then she felt a nudge ! najma winked at her and said ! are we boring you zoya .. bhabi ? and they all laughed ! leaving asad and zoya embarrassed !

ayaan was the 1st to recover and he seriously said ! ok girls - lets not trouble them anymore ! let asad have what he wants and he looked naughtily at his brother ! who just rubbed his forehead !

nuzhat pulled zoya and pushed her out the door towards asad and closed the door behind her !

zoya realised she was alone with him and it made shy ! asad noticed her cheeks got red and it pleased him to see the effect he had on her ! they started walking towards the staircase .. asad put his hand near zoyas and when she didnt pull away her entwined their fingers ,, zoya loooked at him , her eyes mirrored with the desire and love in his eyes ! they needed no words to speak to each other .. he squeezed her hand and they were lost in each another when suddenly zoya tripped on the end of her shawl !

before zoya could tumble and fall - asad grabbed her waist and pulled her close to him and before zoya could realise what happened she was in asads arms and he was carrying her , when asad whispered , i think it will be safer for everyone if i just carried you down the stairs - zoya narrowed her eyes at him and asad just smiled at her ! zoya melted looking at him and willfully put her arms around his neck and rested her head on his shoulder ..

asad carried to her room and placed her on the bed ! he pulled off her shoes , unwrapped her shawl and folded it neatly ! he pulled her duvet cover over a tired zoya and bent down to whisper ! good night zoya ! and he turned to leave when a powerful pull surprised him when zoya grabbed his arm and pulled him towards her ! losing balance he fell directly on zoya inches away from her lips ...

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so did you guys like it ? do you want more ? what would like to see in the story ? please comment
thank you
xoxo Zahra
ps - buddy me if you would like me to pm you 😊
Edited by zara1ksg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Finally an update after ages

Loved this one

Razia deserved it

And Asya were so cute

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Awww... hope fully i did not bother you much with the
update... ☺️ ☺️

Thank you... anyway.. 😆 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Good lesson Razia got it... and deserve it...

What will happen to Humeira...& ayaan..

This asad is so romantic...


Ending shows... lovely asya moments on the way

Thanks again...



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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Aww that was so cute. Glad someone finally told Razia off. Great update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
awww. nice.glad to see you back.
plz update soon. thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
hmm gd Razia..!! i lov Asya romance😳

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