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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update.. Waiting for the next part.. Thanks for the pm..
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Mystery ...mystery...mystery...dying to know n that girl,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, u write amazinggg...already all the chapters...please pm me next time...and a question...whenever I press like button it shows error posting it...I m a member then why?????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The Burnt Body


I sat back on the bed, my hands covering up my face while I tried to perfectly think - what actually happened yesterday?!

***

The start of the morning was just perfect. Who knew that it will be ended at such a note?

I was sleeping while I felt water droplets falling on my face.

I opened my eyes and oh well - seeing her the time I woke up was the best way for me to start a day with.

She turned back and I quickly acted as if I was sleeping still.

She came near me and kissed my forehead.

Chills ran down my spine.

We haven't confessed at all but surely we act as if love stuck teenagers!

Oh well, whatever it is. I just love it this way.

She caressed my hairs.

"Asad, wake up!"

I heard her speak but I didn't woke up.

"Asad??"

And here I pulled her on the bed, giving her an almost heart attack.

"ASAD! Control."

She fired back, wincing a bit.

"Aise saamne aaogi toh control kahan se karunga main zoya?"

I spoke dangerously close to her ear, my breathe hitting her nape and surely I could hear her fast heartbeats.

"Asad I'm..."

She found it difficult to spoke but I got what she wanna say.

Giving her a sweet small kiss, I let her go and went to freshen up leaving a blushy zoya behind.

I walked out of the washroom when I saw her doing her daily work.

Arhh it irritated me. She needed rest after all?!

I wen to her and picked her up in my arms.

I saw her complain but ignore it.

Making her sit on the bed I spoke out.

"Chup!"

She went silent. Ahh I like it.

"Take some rest."

I told or better to say announced and went down.

But oh again the time I came back up in our room after around 4-5 hours, I saw her standing near window.

I hugged her from back.

"Howz my princess and angel?"

I asked, my chin resting on her shoulder.

I saw her frown.

"Kaun angel?"

"Zoya.. my baby angel!"

"No! that my rockstar"

She spoke out with a pout. Aww she look cute.

"No way zoya... she is angel... MY angel!"

"Your angel? No way! He's my rock-star. Humph!"

"Rock-star... I won't mind but she is my angel!"

"Rockstar Rockstar Rockstar! He's my rockstar, Asad!"

I stepped towards her.

"Rockstar, ASAD huh?"

I asked with my usual smirk and damn! That blush. She nodded a 'no'.

"No... then?"

I made her look up towards me.

"My rockstar, baby asad!"

She spoke and ran out of our room. I passed my hands through my hairs.

I walked down only to see...

The scene in front made the earth slip below my legs.

There she laid in her own blood pool. I saw up and saw my own disgusting parents with a knife.

I clenched my fists and closed my eyes tight as anger filled my veins but right now I have other thing to look upon.

As fast as I could, I took zoya to the hospital.

It had been 3 hours since she was in OT.

Don't know why but my heart fell as if sinking, as if I would loose her.

The doctors came out as I rushed towards them.

"Doctor, zoya... how is she?"

I asked in a shaking voice.

"Mr. Khan, we are sorry to say but we can only save either zoya or your child."

The doctor spoke out as I closed my eyes shut.

This is what, I have been praying not to come up.

"Save Zoya doctor"

I did the formalities while the doctors went to the OT back and came out after almost 2 hours.

"Doctor.."

I spoke out as I approached him.

"Sorry Mr. Khan, we weren't able to save your child. Your wife if fine, just unconscious right now. She would gain conscious in a few hours"

Saying so he left while I walked in.

I took a sigh of relief knowing she is fine, at least.

I went in and sat by her side while caressing her hairs.

I pecked her forehead and vowed to not leave them this easily, that they have to pay for it.

The nurse came and handed me a list of medicines.

Giving her a last look, I went to take those medicines.

When I came back, I saw fire coming out from the place where she presently was.

Without thinking of it, I stepped in the room.

I didn't care if something will happen to me

I didn't care if I would burn to ashes.

All I care was her!

I went near the bed but again when is her Allah miyan fair to me?

There was a burnt body on the hospital bed.

I took the body out.

Her face was burnt totally.

I fell on my knees with her in my arms.

Kyun Allah?

WHY?!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG Kon its awesome and bang on update. loved it

Continue soon else we've reserved spammerz group 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-

OMG Kon its awesome and bang on update. loved it

Continue soon else we've reserved spammerz group 🤗


thanx yaariyan 🤗

will update it the same day I will post it on KR version! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Luvd both of d KriYaansh n AsYa versions..
Reveal d truth soon..can't wait more :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely Part babe
Continue soon and Thanks for the PM <3
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Chapter 7 - The Come Back



I sat on the bed remembering how Humeira ended up with me. I was sitting on the bench on the hospital not willing to leave her body - dead body.

It was only when the nurses with the help of doctors took her body away from me - FORCEFULLY.

I sat there on the chairs still, tears dried up. She was my everything, and now I have literally lost my every thing - my life, my only family member.

I don't know what empowered me and I started to walk away. I stooped in my track as I saw humeira sitting on a bench and crying like anything.

I can't see her like this. I know my condition too is miserable but she - she was my best friend.

I went to her and kept an arm around her. She looked up and hugged me tight.

I do'n't knew what had happened, but I felt like consoling her. I felt as if she was going through the same I'm going through.

"Asad, Ayaan will be fine na?"

She asked in a cracking voice.

AYAAN?!

What happened to him.

This was the only thing in my mind.

"Humeira.. what happened?"

I asked her and she told me everything.

My parents had arrived at their place and I remember her telling me how badly they stabbed ayaan! What was Zoya's and his fault?!

I don't knew and so do Humeira.

But well, they were soo good at it.

Zoya was already dead and doctors weren't able to save Ayaan too.

This broke her up - totally.

~*~

I decided to take a shower.

This was getting too much.!

The time I came back in my room, I saw the television open.

Who opened it?

God knows!

I went to switch it off but stopped in my tracks seeing something and carefully listening to the news.

"Aaj, ------ par ek ladki bahut buri tarah se takraayi thi..."

And they spoke out but my eyes were just glued to the pic in front.

It was her?

It was the same place where I bumped into that girl.

It was the same girl whom I was so tempted to meet.

The same one with 'my' ZOYA's face.

This isn't possible.

Or is it?

Is my Zoya alive?

I rushed to the hospital where she was taken.

I knew now, she was my zoya.

I knew that.

But how?

How did she escaped that fire.

And even if she had, then who was that girl for whom I had been yearning for from past soo many days?

So many questions and answer - Just her.!

Since this incident had reached till media, I wasn't allowed to move in.

It was only when the doctor identified me and let me in.

I mentally noted to thank him but just as I was gonna step in, he stopped me to tell something.

"Mr. Khan, well we don't know how your wife escaped and all but for now, her state is stable but there's a big injury on her head. No, not due to this accident. It had been from yesterday or so because in this accident she had just got a few yet major injuries. Well yes, though she is still not conscious we just can't tell you about her present situation. There can be major injuries or effect - mentally or physically. Well physically because at the time of operation we have seen many injuries which can't be caused through an accident like this. There is much more what it seems like. Take care of her and tel us when she wakes up."

The doctor let out in a go.

God its too complicated!

The doctor left and I went in.

It was her, my ZOYA.

It felt soo relieved to see her.

Though she was not in a good situation but at least, she is alive.

My ZOYA is alive!!




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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting update..could you please PM me whenever you update.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

very interesting update..could you please PM me whenever you update.. 😊


thanx :)

will do pm you 😳

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