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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

:O
I will right more after I get over the shock.
:O.
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Miss Sara

@Samaira32

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

BRILLIANT...

It was so damn good... Loved it and it made me cry too...

Awww Zoya and Asad - felt so bad for them... I felt i was visualizing it rather than reading it... It was so good and not at all dramatic... Loved it dear... 😊

Do write more... Pleasee

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raii

@raii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

its actually far far better than 'simply good'!!!! its awesome...

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Mus@

@Mus@

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

the way u expressed the story is marvelous in the end i couldn't control my tears bravo!! bravo!!

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Annie

@_Annie_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

OMG...That was simply Awesome dear...!! Such a brilliant piece of writing! Amazingly written dear...the way u showed the Asad's pain and anger...was superb! :)
Would love to read more! :D
Take care! :)

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

I have to Admit that i cried. i read this 3 times, just to be sure if Zoya gets to be alive anyhow. Cause like Asad i too cant bring myself to the fact that she is dead. their baby is dead 😭 😭

It was more of Arjun and Roshni from Arjun 😃 although.

But what a fab writer you are. What a fab! 👏

Do let me know about your future writings. I would love to read them also your Maaneet fictions. I am pretty sure they will be as beautiful as this. 🤗

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Do you have any idea how much you made me cry?😭😭😭 You are soo mean😡

it was a wonderful piece of writing👏 Zoya was worrying for Asad's safety and...

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Farhana

@risingsea101

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

WOW...didn't expect the ending

This was mindblowing

Feel really bad for Asad though

I loved it

Keep writing <3

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

This was Faaantastic, woman !
Loved the intensity at the end and what a cute beginning .. Awwh @ A&Z !
heart-wrenching ending :( but loved it nonetheless. Poor Asad .. it's ironic how destiny played with them and how you ended up switching their position .. I was fearing for Asad and you made Zoe get shot.