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nimi.fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

plzz don;t write such stuff it makes me cry

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Asya0910

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Posted: 12 years ago

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That was wonderfully written. Next time when u write something please pm me

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

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This was incredibly written. Amazing. You kept the tension taut from the beginning and made me feel all the emotions.

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JeeLeZaraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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oommggg... such a sad ending! 😲 It was really well written but so sad 😭 Please do continue

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Nivriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

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It is so beautiful. I could actually imagine it all happening in front of my eyes, and mind it, very few writers have this splendid power to do so! You've caught hold of the correct emotions, and scrapped down a stunning OS, if I may say! Really deep, shadowy, but touched the chords of the heart, instantaneously. Loved each word etched here! Keep it up!

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Desigirl144

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thank you to all who commented and liked this OS!😳 I will try to reply to everyone's comments! <3

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Sad one
Seriously...i cried in the end

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JeeLeZaraa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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oommmggg. ... that was so suspenseful!!!! So many emotions as well. Very well written. 👏 I had goosebumps the whole time while I was reading it. I kept wondering what was going to happen and then its not Asad but its Zoya who got shot. Asad lost his Zoya and his unborn child 😭 So emotional. Thanx for sharing it

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