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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jealous?

Everyone in the house got to know about Mariyum. Dilshad decides to give her shelter till her brother comes to India. Asad contacted her brother.

Everyone was eating breakfast. just then the doorbell rang,

Zoya: i'll get that. (Dilshad smiled and nodded)

Zoya opened the door, there was a man standing with a smile.

He become more confused seeing Zoya," Is this Asad bhaijaan's house?" he asked.

Zoya: yes. who are you?

" I am Fayaz. Mariyum's elder brother"

Zoya: Hi... plz come. Mr. khan breakfast kar rahe hai.

They entered the kitchen, everyone stands up seeing him

Fayaz: Assalam alaykum

Asad: wa alaykum assalam... aap?

Zoya: yeh...

Mariyum: mere bhaijaan hai. she just goes, hugs her brother and starts crying

Fayaz just hugged her tightly with teary eyes.

Phupi, Najma and Asad bhaijaan i recognise you but who's this?

Zoya was about to say something when Asad inerrupts saying, "yeh ammi ki mehmaan hai" Zoya shot a glare at him.

Mariyum: This is Zoya baaji because of her I am safe today.

Fayaz: thank u so much. agar aap nahi hoti toh shayad...

Zoya sees the sorrow in his eyes and said," hey, its ok. Mariyum ne mujhe baaji kaha hai mera bhi toh kuchh farz banta hai"

Asad dont know why but he was not liking that Zoya is talking to a guy so nicely. He felt jealous.

He cleared his throat and said "Allah hafiz. I am going to office"

As he was going, mistakenly Najma pushes Zoya and she lands right in Fayaz's arms.

A pang of jealousy ran through Asad. He shouted, "Miss Farooqi, aap dekh ke nahi chal sakti?"

Najma interrupted apolozising, sorry bhaijaan meri galti thi" He stormed out of the house without listening anyone.

The whole day, he was thinking about that incident and his reactio on that. He said to himself, "concentrate Asad, she means nothing to you."

In the evening,

He came home from office. They all sat down to watch tv. Ishq wala love was playing on the tv. Fayaz forwarded his hand to Zoya for a dance and she accepted that. They were dancing on that song. This was the limit of Asad's anger. he banged his hand on the table the glass on the table breaks down and blood started to oozing out.

Everyone got scared, and began to call his name. He just goes to his room and locked it from inside. He was angry on himself for doing this.

Zoya: Mr. Khan please open the door...

Asad: just leave me alone

Zoya: Allah miyyan, whats wrong with you? Bade bad-tamij hai aap.

Fayaz:Give me the first aid box. I'll talk to him.

He knocked on the door, "Bhaijaan, please open the door i want to talk"

Asad opened the door and turned around. Fayaz sat beside Asad and started to clean the wound. Asad was confused.

Asad: You wanna talk right?

Fayaz: (with asmile) Jealous?

Asad: what?

Fayaz: You are jealous seeig me and Zoya together having a very good time.

Asad: That's not true.

Fayaz: yes it is. Bhaijaan, i want to clear it. She is a nice girl but i don't love her. (Asad was confused hearing his explanation,and a little happy. But he hides it) She is just a friend. She helped Mariyum without thinking about herself. I really respect her.(He completed the bandage and smiled)

Fayaz: I should go now.

Asad: where?

Fayaz: Firstly I will file a complaint against abbu in the police station, then i'll go to my house to pick up Mehnaaz and Mallika and then I'll go to dubai with my sisters.(Asad noticed a tear escaped from Fayaz's eye. He hugged him tightly and Fayaz started to cry)

Fayaz: He is wrong bhai. Abbu, dosen't deserve forgiveness nor does ammi. She dosen't even try to stop abbu. They deserve punishment bhai.

(Asad just held him. He was feeling really bad for Fayaz. After sometime he became normal and came back to his self mode)

Fayaz: Bhaijaan, i would love to date Zoya but I don't steal things which belongs to someone else😉.

with that he left Asad's room with a smiling Asad behind.

ok. this is my first ever os. I know this is not good. but, let me know how it is?😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww..soo cute..I love jealous Asad...
great OS..write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG !! That was awsum !!
Loved the way you've written it :-D
It was really niice ! I want to see a jealous Asad in the serial ...
Your story might happen in the serial :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it...A jealous Asad was too good...wish we could see one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Filmy i would say 😆
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Originally posted by: _Oishi_

aww..soo cute..I love jealous Asad...

great OS..write more

I also love jealous Asad.😉
Thaks for the comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hailaah! First OS mein itna achcha likha? 😆 Don't worry! I didn't expect anything opposite either! Was just kidding around! 🤪

Now this I liked! Sweet OS. Jealousy!! *wiggling my eyebrows*
Aww... Fayaz Bhai? Aap bahut achche ho!! Kya baat hain! Aapne toh humaara dil he chura liya!

*noticing a glaring Asad behind me* Uh... *laughing nervously and pulling shraddhask by her arm* Ae Shraddha? Chal na, kahin ghoomne chalte hain? Yahaan inke teekhi nazaron se kahin humaara shareer na jal jaaye! Chal!

Annie

P.S.: Excuse the last part of my comment, if you didn't understand! Am just crazier than am normally am... I guess! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_virman

OMG !! That was awsum !!
Loved the way you've written it :-D
It was really niice ! I want to see a jealous Asad in the serial ...
Your story might happen in the serial :-)

Thanx dear.
I would also love to see a jealous Asad in the serial 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: neenabinu

loved it...A jealous Asad was too good...wish we could see one

I also wish we could see a jealous Asad.
and i know we will definately see that.
Thanks for the comment😊

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