(16+) AsYa SS: Summer love Chap 9 pg. 85

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan
u just KILL!!!!in simple words im flushed wid heat n so turned on by this...ur amazing adeeti...

im all blushy mushy now

Thanks Shan! 😳 It's great to hear from you guys! It makes it worth all the time and effort I put in! 😊

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

OMG! -now breath- *breaths in* *breaths out* Okejj. That is jsut brilliant, like brilliant. I loved each and every part of it. It started high and it just went higher and higher. You never lost me, not even when Najma and Dilshad were there, their parts where cute, but the feel of the story didn't change. That is so wondefully done. How you give a story such a hawt feel, the sexual tension in the air and all, yet having those cute moments, without losing the tension. I really loved the update! Awesome work!

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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

P.s. I loved the wayy you showed Zoya's insecureness to the readers, but also made clear that she seemed quite confident to Asad. Which makes you think as a reader that Asad must go through the same, and they make eachother go further with what they are doing...

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Now wat do i say Dee? u've written a hot part n to imagine dat the night isn't over yet n dis is da beginning, is lyk oh God! ☺️.thanks for updating n cont soon. plz dont take dis long next time.

love,

Nimra.

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adeeti10

@adeeti10

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: sophie420
It was so HAWT!! 😳

Thanks Sophie!

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

OMG THAT WAS HOT DEE!!!! ASAD is the fantasy to the boot!!! Loved the update.

I am going to have a very cold shower now. 😃

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Im out of words... Seriously

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Wow Dee...that was really way tooo hot!You got me all blushing like a newly wed bride..☺️The sexual frustration between the two were just oozing out the page Dee.From the time in the restaurant to the time in the car,the excitement,the adrenalin rush never felt amiss.Their want,their need for each other and the desire to become one could be felt intensely with your every word.Zoe is one foxy minx and Asad knows it too.She can barely contain herself when she is around him...and who can blame her?☺️
His mere perfect presence is enough to not be tantalised in seduction...resisting temptation is not allowed when Asad is on board.
Just wished it could on forever Dee...why did you have to make it so short?😔
Just got my finger's crossed that Dilshie and Najma dnt become the spoil sports...we want more more than mere morsels Dee...please have mercy on the hunger stricken souls here Dee, and pleased dnt tease us any further Dee.!😉Mujhse yeh tension aur bardaasht nahin hogi...nahiiin,nahiiin,nahiiin..

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Adeeti, you are cruel to leave us this way! That was just so incredible, I was blushing like a beetroot. I had a smile that was so huge, you'd think it was me getting seduced by Asad! Talk about hawt! That was just incredible. This Asad has yet to grace Indian television...he's a man, a man who is not shy and not afraid to take control. Goodness, why don't Indian writers give us a male lead like this!

Poor Zoya; can't help grinning at your coyness and inexperience - really love it. Getting charmed and enamored by Asad and dropping all her inhibitions to the point she's going to be screaming with ecstasy...damn it...how long do we have to wait?