AsYa SS Part 1 : I Promise - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
uff i've loved dis os and hope u'l cont it asap. i just wish and hope dat v get to see dis in QH too. i soo loved dis caring asad, who's till haunted by the mere thought of dat incident and feels guilty of it, thinking him to be responsible for it. the way he checked on her showed da changing side of asad's character and da growing feeling he has for Zoya. his words to her made me smile, how he promised to take care of her till his last breath and asked for her genuine smile, one which he had been searching for since their return n he knew he was da reason for its disappearance. Zoya must hav felt bad and hurt due to his words on calling her musibat but poor thing din't know she was making him go mad. Zoya's curiosity to hear him talk, smile and just be around her were enough to show dat she never held him responsible for watever happened. she did hate him as much as he did but wen things changed, she never knew. her confession was a sweet one,her smile is due to him n dat by keeping himself distant from her, he was causing her pain. i hope da next day wud bring a beautiful change to both of their lives. hoping to hear from u soon. n pllzz will u pm me if u do for dis os. thanks and keep up the great work!
love..
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Omg this was so amazing and cute.. I really loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG...that was absolutely fantastic.

i wish it didnt end.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
I wish that didn't end so soon. :(
Was good to see and OS from you after so long. Just beautiful. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
can i please have more of this😳 its sooo beautifully written...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Beautiful! Greatly written. I wish it was included in the drama, the part you wrote where Asad came to check on her every night. I loved it and you described their feelings wonderfully.
👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
WELL WRITTEN - FEELINGS- STORY EMOTIONS WOW
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Holy crap. That made me hold my breath. Please continue it.
I promise I'll read it ;)

Oh, also, pm me when ever you write something, anything!

Thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
A very sweet OS. I loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
woah that was briliant loved the concept
mind blowing

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