Another scene I'd love to see...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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All four of them were having breakfast. As usual the mood around the table was quite serious, thanks to Asad. Breakfast was poori with mushroom and aloo ki sabzi.

As always Zoya was lost in her thoughts about finding her father and didn't quite see what she was serving herself. (Zoya is allergic to mushrooms). Midway through her third or fourth mouth her breath hitches, she starts hiccupping violently, and then starts gasping for breath.

Phoopi and Najma are sharing a laugh on something and dont notice what's going on with Zoya. Asad jumps out of his chair and rushes to her side and screams"Zoya, kya hua - tumhari saansein kyon phool rahi hai? Tell me what's going on dammit!"

Zoya is unable to breathe and struggles to talk ...she just mumbles "mush..." pointing to her plate , still desperately trying to gasp for breath. Asad gets visions of her after he pulled her out of the ground and thinks she is probably having a panic attack. He gets desperate and helpless as he's not able to understand what she's saying - and orders Najma to call for an ambulance.

Zoya clings on to his collar and tries to shake her head in the negative to explain that she'll be fine in a bit. He screams at Najma to not bother with the ambulance and says that he's taking her to the hospital and picks her up and rushes out of the house … he gets her into his car and even before his Mom and sister can react he's already driving away leaving them stranded at the entrance wondering what got into

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Oishi23 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww..I would love to see that..Now i am actually dreaming about htis kinda scene..awesome one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that would be quite a cute scene
but somehow i just cant imagine asad saying 'dammit'
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Amazing...you should develop it more and make it a one shot ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: angellovergirl

that would be quite a cute scene

but somehow i just cant imagine asad saying 'dammit'



Well he siad 'what the hell?' why not 'damn it "?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that wud make such a cute scene 😊
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wow that scene will be so cute love to see something like that
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Originally posted by: -Racha-



Well he siad 'what the hell?' why not 'damn it "?


i dont know how to explain it.. its just i cant imagine him saying that in my mind

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww i wish i could see that
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing imagination👏 I would love to see such a scene, I already pictured it in my mind, so cute it would be

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