All The Time, It Was You: AsYa SS/Chapter 11-Pg90 - Page 28

your are doing great... waiting for the next update...❤️

wow !! loved the precap,,, what will happen now?

superb part.

tht ws really nice yr...zayn kuch toh gadbad hai...nice update & thnks 4 d Pm...pls continue & update soon...& do PM me..

Ok...so I finally read the whole thing..and you better dont call it crap !! 😡

I sooo loved the whole of it !! Much better than the epi ! Especially Asad-Zoya's reactions and dialogues... You write them so well !! 👏

Personally, I dont like that song 'Pehli Nazar Mein'... Dont know why... 😔 I cant bear to hear it even ! And maybe thats why the dance part didn't go well with me..!!

Though, I must admit... It was super hot !! 😳
And I could actually imagine AsYa doing the dance !! The only problem was the song playing in the back of my mind...😆

Their reactions after the dance were shhooo cuteee !! Zoya smiling to herself and Asad noticing her secretly !!

I'm loving your Najma too !! She's really a lion's sister !! I just hope Zayn doesn't harm her...as you've shown him a negative character now ! :|

I'm also loving the Asad-Zoya bonding !! They're coming closer now...
But the precap is scary !! And supperrr exciittiiinggg tooo !! I cant wait for the next part !!

Looks like Asad blames Zoya for something or some misunderstanding is on its way !! And I love it..coz it'll only make their relationship stronger !!

The jealous Asad was a treat to watch ! And Zayn is definitely planning something big this time !!

Thanks for the lovely, long update and PM !! :)
Cant wait for the next part... Cont soon ! ;)

It's getting difficult to tolerate Zayn any more.😔

Originally posted by: mahimarewari

Res 😆

UNRes 😊

Mahn, u r getting better day by day... 😃
I loved this part... 😳
From the Dance sequence to the little dance Zoya did and Said 'Wife'... 😃
From Asad getting J to asking her out... 😃
His Trademark 'Woh Main Actually'... 😳
This Zayn character is an evil one, but thanks to him Asya went for a Date, their 'First date'..
And Surely Najma is goin to find out things early... i mean Soon-ish.. ☺️
Continue soon..
Love,
Ur Maahi di ❤️ 👏 🤗

Originally posted by: Chinnu.Munnu

Lovely update.

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

yippie yippie yippie

i'm more happy that Zayn turned out to be negative n not positive

the dance! ahem ahem have you considered writing an erotica? try ur hand in it.

lovely update sadaf!

the precap sounds scary but i know you wont disappoint me! asad will definitely trust Zoya! i think i have an inkling of what might happen that would lead to zoya saying this!

anyhoo! gr8 update! post the next part soonish

This was awesome bacha
I loved it to the core
I'm having exams,so plz forgive me for the short comment
the dance was mindblowing
I hate Zayn soo much
plz continue ASAP