All The Time, It Was You: AsYa SS/Chapter 11-Pg90

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mahimarewari

@mahimarewari

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Res 😆

UNRes 😊

Mahn, u r getting better day by day... 😃
I loved this part... 😳
From the Dance sequence to the little dance Zoya did and Said 'Wife'... 😃
From Asad getting J to asking her out... 😃
His Trademark 'Woh Main Actually'... 😳
This Zayn character is an evil one, but thanks to him Asya went for a Date, their 'First date'..
And Surely Najma is goin to find out things early... i mean Soon-ish.. ☺️
Continue soon..
Love,
Ur Maahi di ❤️ 👏 🤗

Edited by mahimarewari - 12 years ago

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

yippie yippie yippie

i'm more happy that Zayn turned out to be negative n not positive

the dance! ahem ahem have you considered writing an erotica? try ur hand in it.

lovely update sadaf!

the precap sounds scary but i know you wont disappoint me! asad will definitely trust Zoya! i think i have an inkling of what might happen that would lead to zoya saying this!

anyhoo! gr8 update! post the next part soonish

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

what an update yaar👏 i loved the brother-sister duo... the way they were trying to help Zoya was really nice😃 I hate Zayn😡😡😡 what is he gonna do next?😡 whats with the precap? is Zayn gonna create misunderstanding between Asad and Zoya?😭 update soon. and thanx for pm

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anisha

@anishaalluri

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

sadzi.. meri pyaari sadzii.. tujhe mujhse kya dushmani hai bey?? 😡

har roz ek jhatka .. my heart is not soo strong FYI

anyways, keep that creep away from tamatar

loved asya dance it was amazing n also Tomato n potato's scene was nice 😛

dont kill me that i called him that

zayn is such a 🤬.. tu samaj le what i want to say

waiting for asya date 😳

n what's up with the precap?

u better tell me otherwise all the wierd name i call u will b out 😆

luv u..

Tarzi Alluri 😆🤗

Edited by anishaalluri - 12 years ago

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

ohh god finally first dance nd first date! grt yar

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shami810

@shami810

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Wow..What a lovely update..!!!!👏

Do cont soon..Can't wait for next part

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

This was nice.. I thought so this zyan is not good. But, what is he up to? And , precape.. Asad doesn't believes zoya...Hmm.. Continue soon !!!

Dee

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 30

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Amazing sadaf...zaynnn i knew that kuch toh jhol hai iss zayn me...nw i wanna kill him..bt ueke wajah se toh asad aur zoya pass aye...isliye chor di :p