DRIVING THE RRR : AsYa+Ma OS [my first :D]

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Well i wrote this last night for today as we all know we will be super bored 😆😉 , after seeing Alloo and Tamater and Bhindi [Zoya] together because they are sooo Cute!!!😳🤗

Hmmm the theme of the story is a bit way ahead, [or whatever] where things are finally normal, theres no kasam, and Zoya's Visa is also extended, and Zoya has decided to stay permanently at Asad's place after Dilshaad and Najma's and reluctant Asad's insistence, as there was no progress of Zoya's Mission.🤗

Do let me know how it is as its my first OS on AsYA+Ma 😳

DRIVING THE RRR

"Haan Tamater! Kya baat hai?" Asad asked absent mindedly eyeing half from his caffeine-d newspaper.

"Umm-hmm Bhaijan. . ." Najma hesitated.

"Main tumhe kha nahi jaunga Tamater! App arzz, i mean pharmaish kar sakti hai." Asad laughed softly while he sipped his coffee.

Najma smiled a big one.

"Jahanpana, why doesn't Najma drive?" Zoya chirped in out of thin air, at Najma's help.

Asad spit out his coffee in shock, more in confusion, either to be mad on her like Asad, or laugh like Zoya at her. Najma debated for full 15 seconds on her reaction to be like and then decided to go with The Shocked Expression as it wont leave her dear brother odd out.

"NO-NO Zilli-iIllahi I-I Mean'" Zoya tried to explain, but Asad cut her in between.

"Because she doesn't know driving Mis New Yorrk" Asad rolled the 'R' a bit longer, as he stood up.

These days Dilshaad noticed how Asad "Rolled the R" and smiled at herself. More over she felt a glow on her cheek when she saw her son's face bright with a smile after his and Zoya's conversations. And not to forget the "finally found back" Twinkle in his eyes too.

Asad only knew how much he loved rolling the R."Arrrlll" he would growl lovingly when alone in the study sometimes. The world had been harsh with him, but truth remained was that he was still a child saved at heart which this crazy woman Zoya had perfectly nurtured out again. And Asad loved every single second of that.

"'Soo Don't yo'"

" Yess, I do think she should, but I am afraid, your little friend TOMATO is not as good with the directions like you, Miss Yorrrk!" Asad said as he buttoned his coat.

R rolled again.

Wait a second, Did Jahanpana just crack a joke at me? Zoya widened her eyes.

Asad looked at his sister with a twinkle in his eyes while a smirk played on his lips. Najma got the hint, and burst out into laughter. And Asad joined her finally.

Jahanpana is Laughing?? Allah!! Miyaa, Jahanpana is Really Laughing or am I dreaming? Look at him. He really is laughing!!

I never saw Jahanapana laugh like this.

I never saw someone laugh so loud, so clear. Clear like this.

I never knew that Jahanapana even knew what was laughing like.

Jahanpana Laughed.

Zoya looked at Asad and then Najma, Aloo and Tamater both hugging and smiling at each other. She smile at them. Najma hugged Asad, Asad hugged back, Zoya's smile brightened like a 5 year old child who just had brought her favorite ice-cream, and Asad did notice, and for the first time smiled a big one at Zoya.

Maybe Jahanapana just knew how to make others smile back too. Maybe he knew she knew that too. Maybe now it was time for them to know that they knew the secret behind each other's smile. Maybe just this is the time.


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So how was it? Let me know let me know Pleaseee😆😳



❤️Ankie

For More Works of Fictions Do Have A Look At My Index 😳


A friendly reminder, KARAN SINGH GROVER will always be MY ASAD AHMED KHAN and SURBHI JYOTI as ZOYA FAROOQI in my FICTIONS, rest is up to you readers, You can imagine anybody my leads to be as, I assure you I will not have a problem with that. 😳

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 11 years ago


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Eternal1234 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome you come up with nice ideas keep writing more!!!!
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v have a new fantastic writer wid us now😃

loved it!...kaash aise hi episode mein bhi ek din asad khulke hase😳


now u better start writing more for u r not gonna be spared😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆☺️😳 Super Gladddyy that you all liked my stupid writing 😳🤗
Thank you soo much everyone 😳🤗
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
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Awesome dear. Very nice. Tum such me humpty dumpty ho:-D
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Originally posted by: Archi02

Awesome dear. Very nice. Tum such me humpty dumpty ho:-D


Arcchiiee, was the latter part a COMPLIMENT or SARCASM? ehehhehe 😆 thankyy 😆🤗
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is sooo beautiful.
You are such an amazing writer dear.
I loved this OS so much.
The last line in bold black was simply marvelous.
I loved the way you described a very small scene with so much depth,intensity, humour and fun.
I loved this one a lot.
Plz do come up with more such wonderful ideas.
I'm falling in love with your writing stuffs.
You write very well.
Take care!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is litterally the most adorable AsYa+najma OS I've read so far.
From the rolling of the r's to najma drivings cars, this brightened up ma day!!!
A lovely OS, and thanks for the pm love :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww...that ws cute...
Jst luvd it...
Thnx fr pm...:)
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Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

This is sooo beautiful.
You are such an amazing writer dear.
I loved this OS so much.
The last line in bold black was simply marvelous.
I loved the way you described a very small scene with so much depth,intensity, humour and fun.
I loved this one a lot.
Plz do come up with more such wonderful ideas.
I'm falling in love with your writing stuffs.
You write very well.
Take care!



Originally posted by: AussieChick

This is litterally the most adorable AsYa+najma OS I've read so far.
From the rolling of the r's to najma drivings cars, this brightened up ma day!!!
A lovely OS, and thanks for the pm love :P


This seriously means a world to me Thank you sooo muchh everyone 😳🤗🤗

Originally posted by: mits40

awww...that ws cute...
Jst luvd it...
Thnx fr pm...:)


Thank you dear, anytime 😊😳

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