FF: Under the Wishing star (New update Ch 19)

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e_enigma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Oh helll no. My like button isn't working.

Anyway. I more than like this. I love this.

I love the way you portray characters. And I abosolutely love the addition of Rehaan. Such a fantastic character. The more I read about him, the more I love him. There are too many things I love about this. If I start listing them all...well, then, i'll be typing for a while. :P.

So, in short : This is awesome. You are awesome.

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

loved asad and rashid working to gather to find the shooter

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farha623

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

last two chapters were amazing

interview and the fight between asad n zoya soo emotional

him comforting her at the park ? loved tht she let him

asad n rashid working together to get the driver -awesome

hope no one was shottt!

thx for pm =) update soon !

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BTS_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

so beautiful just loved it

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Barayah

@irock321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

OHH Shiet!! :O I hope Rashid didn't get hit!!! And awww Asya ...Just perfect dude!!! I loved this chapter!!! Also today's epi was amazing!!! But so far I liek this fanfic better than the show ...but show is getting better ...just stupid Razia -.- Hate that *insert swear* sooo much!!! -.- lmao!!

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Nila

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

I stumbled upon your fabulous FF yesterday, and have spent every free moment today catching up...you have written an absolutely awesome version of Asad's and Zoya's story. For me personally, when a story is as well written as your is the characters, the background, the emotions all jump off the page and make me anxious to know what happens next. Eagerly awaiting an update, thank you in advance.

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Sneha Nair

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: NVBGKY
I stumbled upon your fabulous FF yesterday, and have spent every free moment today catching up...you have written an absolutely awesome version of Asad's and Zoya's story. For me personally, when a story is as well written as your is the characters, the background, the emotions all jump off the page and make me anxious to know what happens next. Eagerly awaiting an update, thank you in advance.

Thank you dear🤗

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Sneha Nair

@snehatalk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Omg! Your story might be better than the actual serial:):). Thank you so much for the speedy update. I was dying to know what happens next.

The two things that I most loved about this chapter is 1) the friendship between Zoya and Rehaan - so beautiful. Rehaaan is a fantastic character. Love him to bits. 2) the Asad and Zoya sitting on the ground and the coffee wallah scene. Stole my heart:):). I love how their relationship is developing and how Asad is beginning to recognise Zoya's mood, thoughts and emotions.

I must compliment you on your superb writing! You write so well that the story jumps off the page and grabs the reader!!

I know I dont need to say it for you to know but... Please post soon lol!!!

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thanx for the feed back dear...love ur comment...Rehaan has become my fav character too aft asya ofcourse. will post soon

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kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

You are too good man. This FF is just amazing. I think you should start writing for the Cvs..

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etmartian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

oooh good you are aaawsome

i joined this forum only to urge you to write more-regularly constantly and continuously miss untameable imagination.i love your style please update soon

by the way i have some guesses

Either

i)rashid can be bhaijaan(too far fetched)

but he was at the farmhouse and bhaijaan too was there and watched everything.and vowed to keep everything under control.

Rashid is creating a rift as asad and zoya do not agree on the subject of his innocence. his thoughts are too vague on their subject(may be, he says ,they have solved their problems.also he and asad went away together he could have sent for the car leaving zoya alone to be kidnapped or killed

their exists a third party who misled asad and rashid caught zoya seeing her alone.

By the please update soon in your own individual style miss creative.