OS AsYa: Rescue( Part 2)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok i have already updated this part but from another id which i won't use for pms...😃..so those of you who want pms please buddy me... thnx !

PS: yes! i'll try to send buddy request to those who wanted to be my buddies for PMs ...😳

hello, hi, Assalam Alaikum guys! 😳😳 i'm a newbie here...😳 i started watching qubool hai 7 days ago and have become a big fan 😃 i couldn't control myself writing this OS afer watching today's episode...it's my First ever OS about AsYa... hope you like like 😳 (i knwo it's not as good but still šŸ˜‰)


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Akraam: I'm here to complete the "incomplete" work on that day.

Zoya stood up from her chair hearing those words.

Zoya: Sorry aAkraam, I didn't get u

Akraam: huh! Tumhe kyun samajh mein ayegi? What did u think Ms

Zoya faruki? You would say sorry and I'll forgive you? so easily? After

what you have done to me? my family? I can't meet people's eyes

because of your IMMATURE deeds on our nikah.

Zoya: but I'm telling you I wasn't ready for nikah AT ALL! I mean'ok

forget that Akraam'.even I felt uncomfortable at the behaviour of some

of your family members'.they seemed goons to me and they were rude

to me too


Akraam: Lekin Aaj to hamara nikah hokar hi rahegi Ms Zoya Faruki !

Saying that Akraam gestured 2 guys who were seating behind zoya. They

came near zoya and stood either side of her making Zoya nothing but

shock and speechless. she knew she had been trapped.


Akraam: either you come or we MAKE you come with us. You chose

zoya


Zoya never felt so helpless and frightened before. She didn't bring her

paper spray along with her and on top pf that it is a matter of rescuing

herself from 3 GOONS who looked not less than creepy! This was the


first time she thought of having someone who could stand beside her,

who could rescue her


Akraam with a evil smirk: let's go zoya.


Zoya: n'.no! WHAT NONSENSE IS THIS?!


Akraam: Zoya we gave you 2 choices. Either come with us or we will

MAKE you come'.and I'm sure nobody wants force to be implied on

them''you know what I'm talking about.


Zoya widened her eyes in shock. She diodn't know what to do where to

go. But suddenly she saw the other 2 guys who were behind her were

smiling evilly at each other much to her to make an escape. She made

her escape and ran as fast as she could. She ran across the street and

continued wherever her eyes fell.


Akraa: Pakro us ladki ko!


Zoya realized that she has come to a very calm area where no people to

be seen. She suddenly stumbled on a rock and was hurt badly. Her feet

started bleeding.


Zoya: Aahhh! Allah mia!


She was about to get us when a somebody held her hand. she looked

behind to see Akraam and the other two goons with him


Akraa: kaha bhag rahi ho meri jaan?! Nikah ke bina?


He took her hair in his fist and started dragging her all the way to a hut.


Zoya: OUCH! Ahh! let go!


Tears were running down her cheeks. And her head felt like it's

spinning. She almost felt dizzy at Akraam's grip in her hair.


She somehow managed to push him and run again but her feet wouldn't

let her as it was bleeding. Suddenly she a sharp pin pierced her feet make

her stop. It continued bleeding.

The guys ran to her and Akraam was about to slap her when a strong

hand held it. Zoya Closed her eyes in fear when she say Akraam raise his

hand. but it's been long but nothing has happened. She slowly opened

her eyes to see Asad holding Akraams's hand and his face has gone red

as if he would burst right away.


Holding Akraam with his left hand he punched his nose 3 times in one go making it bleed continuously. He punched the one guy and kicked the

other one making them fly down to a tree. Akraam was about to punch

Asad back but her sensed it and held his fist not even seeing it. he turned

and gave him 5-6 punched in the stomach and nose and finally kicked him making him hiss in pain.


All of them were now in the ground. Zoya looked at Asad in tearful eyes.

Not wasting any time , she ran and clammed herself in his chest hugging

him tightly. She hugged him the way as if her life depended on him, as if

he is the only one in the world who could save her from EVERYTHING,

EVERY DAMNED THING!


Asad was shocked at first at her move but erased all of these thoughts.

He cursed himself for letting zoya go alone like that. He cursed himself

for not listening to her not even for once.


He engulfed her in his arms forgetting what they were doing.


Zoya sobbing: Allah mia what's wrong with you?! Aap jante hai hum

kitna daar gaye the? That akraam wanted to complete the nikah. He

threatened me. I felt'.i felt as if'.


Asad stroking her hair: shh. I'm sorry zoya! I never realized that

Akaraam could have done something like that. I'm really sorry.

Zoya hugged him tighter.


After 5 minutes they realized what they were doing and quickly pulled back. There was a awkward silence of 15-25 seconds.


Asad: let's go.


LOL yes i badly want a Asya hug šŸ¤— hayeee! i hope asad kills that akraam (no didn't mean to KILL him , tab to wo jail chala jaye ga šŸ˜†, want him do as much worse condition as he can make of that akraam 😔)

Anyhow, how was it ? please pls pls hit the liek button and comment if u liked it and want me to continue, pls 😃

thank you! 😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
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We all are dying for a hug dear
But what can we do, just write an OS to give our dil some tasallišŸ˜†
Beautiful work, I really enjoyed reading it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was really good :) loved the hug but its going to take a long time to be able to see that on the show :(
Please pm me on your further work

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: risingsea101

We all are dying for a hug dear

But what can we do, just write an OS to give our dil some tasallišŸ˜†
Beautiful work, I really enjoyed reading it



aww! i'm really glad that u enjoyed my work... thnnx a lot ! 😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

That was really good :) loved the hug but its going to take a long time to be able to see that on the show :(

Please pm me on your further work

Nikki <3



yah i know! lekin kya kreh? yeh dil to nahi manta... so wrote an OS to comfort my DIL šŸ˜†lol


and yap! u'll surely get a PM next time as ur in my buddy list

and thank you for liking and commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey all! wassup? ALL IZ WELL?? šŸ˜† i'm here with my next part of my OS: "Rescue" ... hope you like it too...


Those of u who want pms, please buddy me! thank you! 😳


PART: 2

All of them were now in the ground. Zoya looked at Asad in tearful eyes.

Not wasting any time , she ran and clammed herself in his chest hugging

him tightly. She hugged him the way as if her life depended on him, as if

he is the only one in the world who could save her from EVERYTHING,

EVERY DAMNED THING!

Zoya: aah!

Aasad: what happened?

He looked down to see her feet bleeding continuously. He stopped his car very far from where they are now. Not being able to find any other way, Asad lifted her and took her into his arms making zoya widened her eyes.

Zoya: it's ok Mr. khan. I can walk. You can put me down

Asad continued walking taking her in his arms not even looking at her once as if he's not hearing anything

Asad completely ignored Zoya's protest making zoya give in. He carefully put Zoya into the car and buckled her. He went to the car seat and drove to his house.

As they reach to his house, Asad opened the door of Zoya's side and got her out of the car. Asad lifted her again and ranged the bell of his house. Dilshaad opened the door only to be shocked at the state of zoya. He lips were bleeding.

Dilshaad: Zoya, what ' what happened to you?! Ya Allah!

Nazma: zoya, aap ko yeh chot kaise lagi!

But the shock they have gotten seeing ZOYA IN ASAD's ARMS MILKE THAT IS BEYOND describable. There eyes just popped out seeing asad and zoya in that state. And asad? He's acting as if he's not even caring or bothered that a GIRL is in his arms.

Asad: Ammy, I'll get zoya to her room.

Dilshaad nodded.

As they went upstairs, Dilshaad and Nazmaa's eyes were shocked opened without a blink, their mouths were gaped,'.. they just kept staring at the way Asad and Zoya just left without any motion. They stood as if they were statues

Nazma: Ammy? Hum log sapna to nahi dekh rahe hai na?

Dilshaad: mujhhe bhi aisa hi lag raha hai nazma'.. it must be a dream!

Asad entered into Zoya's room only to find a slice of pizza infrnt of the door. But FRO THE FIRST TIME, asad didn't care. He just ignored everything. The only thing in his mind was that Zoya who needs full rest .

He placed her on the bed, carefully.

Asad: how're you feeling Ms. Zoya?

Zoya: Good'.ow!

She felt the pain and screamed out loud grabbingher feet.

Asad quickly got the first-aid box. He got the cotton out of it and rmoved the blood. He took the antiseptic cream and started applying it on her wounds making Zoya stare at him continuously.

Asad: thoda sa jalega.

Zoya didn't hear anything as she was too busy staring at her rescuer.

HE applied the cream on her feet and he was surprised at the fact that Zoya who screams every other day for NO REASON is not screaming. He looked at her only to find her staring at him.

After a few seconds'.

Asad: Ms Zoya!

She didn't hear anything ( O_o )

Asad: Ms Zoya?

Nope! Not yet

Asad: ZOYA!

Zoya was startled and finally blinked

Zoya: g'.g'.oh! ALLAH MIA! What's wrong with you@ aise koi chillata hai kya?!

Asad: woh ! I have been calling you for so long and you didn't hear. So I had to

Both of them realized what Asad just called her'.. no he din't add any "Ms" with her name. he just called her ZOYA!

For some reason, she didn'r mind him calling her zoya! There was a awkward silence between them for 30 secs

Asad: Are you feeling better Ms Zoya?

Zoya nodded.

AsaD: take rest and don't dare to even get up frombed. Ammy and nazma is here' you can call them if you need anything ok?

Zoya nodded'. As asad woke up and about to exit the room Zoya called him from behind.

Zoya smiling: Mr. Khan! It's ok if you call me by my name. I won't mind.

Asad stared at her for 10 seconds and turned heading to his room without saying anything.

please do tell me how it was through comment...and please don't forget to press the like button! thank you! 😳

Edited by Mushfika2456 - 12 years ago
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LOVED it!!!!! are you gonna continue??? pm me if u do!!!
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part 3 please😳cant wait

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