Love Beyond Words... asya ff COMPLETED - Page 17

Originally posted by: aditi061

One confusion. Has zoya already met raashid?

Originally posted by: Raneebee

Sorry ...this is not a criticism but I dont understand this logic...it is encouraging all the negatives in our society...I think you should be more proactive and accept that we must eradicate this evil of dowry and and not show the female as someone to be used as a pawn... and move forward.

Originally posted by: RMamsa

Babe you are all set to go pro! the update got me so involved in the story that I found commenting on Asad's action as I do when I watch the show! totally captivating!

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

I feel so bad for Dilshad and Asad.
Agh!! I want to kill Razia.This woman needs to learn to respect others.
Poor Zoya is in so much pain.I was so scared when she didn't open her eyes.Thank God that she was asleep coz of the pain killers.
I loved Asad's concern for Zoya.It was so amusing to see him talk about Zoya's habits and lifestyle and getting all edgy with the thought of leaving Zoya in someone else's house.
I wonder how Asad,Najma and Dilshad are going to bear the heart-ache they will suffer in Rashid's house.
I think the 2 families might come closer and their differences may get resolved coz of Zoya...
I loved this part a lot.The whole update was mindblowing..
Waiting for the next part eagerly.
Plz try to update soon.
Take care!
love ya
Asma

Originally posted by: RMamsa

I believe that's where zoya will step in and influence Nighat or Shirin or most likely Rashid- Its an interesting turn and I have a feeling Zoya will play a stronger part in Siddy's QH. We need to patiently wait for exciting turns :)

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

awsm ff

Originally posted by: starplusfanno1

wow now i can say this U ROCK!!! what an update loved it so much plz update extremely fast zoya ayaan and asad wow amazing

Originally posted by: sakshilksg

nice ff.

read it in one go.

Guys oh your comments! MA!(masha allah) I love you guys. So much encouragement. Your comments and likes act like power boosters for my imagination. Thank you so much. And of course yesterday's episode was mindblowing. Asya scenes, nikhat and as add scene was so much like I envisioned. Asad threatening haseena bi. Just wow! For the first time I have fallen short of words to describe how happy the episode and especially the precap has made me. and so I am writing this part in high spirits so expect some really good zoya(lol) moments. Also this is all comedy scene. I just don't want to ruin my mood by writing something emotional today so I just wrote a full zoya part. Anyways since zoya was missing for previous parts a lot so I gave her this entire part.

Razia, shereen and dadi were sitting in the hall doing some work.

Shereen: bhabi aapko lagta hai ki vo ayengi?

Razia: oh ho shereen. Vo zaroor ayegi. Akhir humhare ghar mein aa kar rehene ka maukaa vo thodi na haath se jane degi.

Dadi: tum bhool rahi ho razia ki unko humhari koi zarurat nahi hai. Asad ne vo sab haseel kar liya hai jisse dilshad ko kabhi bhi humhare ehsaano ki zarurat na pade.

Razia: aap toh bas meri baat ko hi kadva kahiye.

Just then Rashid came out.

Rashid: shereen main office ja raha hoon.

Shereen: ji.

Rashid realised that she looked a bit tense.

Rashid: kya hua?

Shereen: dar lag raha hai. Haseena bi sagai kal karne ke liye maan to gayi hai lekin dar lag raha hai ki phir'

Mamu came out.

mamu: aisi manhus batein muh se mat nikalo shereen.

Shereen nodded and turned to Rashid with a small smile. Rashid gave her a assuring smile and turned towards the door and stopped.

Rashid: asad.

All looked at the the door. Asad was standing there with najima behind him and holding on to dilshad's hand who was standing besides him.

Shereen smiled with relief and razia just scoffed. Mamu was glaring at dilshad but asad walked in front of her bringing mamu's attention to him. Rashid's expression was somewhere between joy and helplessness. Asad walked in the house leading dilshad and najima and stood infront of mamu and Rashid. The silence was tense but was broken by one word. "Bhaijaan"

All looked at nikhat who was glowing with joy. Even nuzat behind her was smiling as humeira looked at her dad worried.

Asad and najima smiled at them. But dilshad was looking down to avoid rashid's pleading gaze on her. Shereen looked up at Rashid and could feel his pain. Razia decided to break the silence that had fallen again.

Razia: humeira ayaan kaha hai. Ja kar use bulao. Use aaj saman lane jana hai.

Humeira nodded and walked back inside. Again the same silence fell in the house but this time it was broken never to be restored again.

GHAD GHAD GHAD'.DOOM DOOM DOOM DOOM GHAD GHAD. Everyone looked at the source of the awfully disturbing sound and saw a girl in blue jeans and blue top dragging her suitcase with very much difficulty and much more noise.

"phupi. Maine socha ki inki madat kar du to unload the bags par pata nahi is suitcase ki wheels ko kya hua hai"

Saying this she turned around. Well obviously everyone was shocked except asad. Zoya first noticed asad who was looking at her as if she was the worst joke anyone could have cracked. She looked at her phupi and najima who were scared shocked. As though she had made a big mistake. She swallowed and looked at the people behind them. Razia and dadi were shocked not because of zoya. May be a little but the biggest shock to them was her clothes. The mamu was shocked because of her clothes and the fact that this girl had completely disregarded the presence of so many elders present there and spoken in a normal pitch without lowering her voice. And worse she was dragging a suitcase like a corpse! Asad looked at mamu and he couldn't help but smile. He was sure that if mamu's face had not been so stern from years of practice; his jaw would have dropped on the floor and went rolling out. Zoya's eyes focused on Rashid and she immediately blurted out, "aap?"

But before Rashid could say anything another voice from their right side scremed, "aap?"

Zoya turned around and saw humeira and ayaan.

Zoya: tum bhi?...aur tum bhi?

Humeira looked at zoya confused. She had heard this voice before but she could not quite remember where.

This time asad was shocked.

Asad: ayaan tum inhe jante ho?

Ayaan: bhai jaan aap inhe jante hai?

Humeira: kya main aap ko janti hoon?

Rashid: tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

Asad: aap inhe kaise jante hai?

Zoya like a fool was looking from one person to another but no one was letting her speak.

Zoya: allah miyan! Whats wrong with you all? Mujhe bolne toh dijiye.

She took a deep breath.

Zoya: phupi ki guest hoon. Mera india mein koi nahi hai so I am staying with them. Since inhe yaha rehne aana pada so I didn't have any where else to go so I came here. Par agar aap ko koi problem hai then I will leave.

Saying this she tried to move her suitcase but the poor thing's lock gave up after the whole bumpy ride and it opened up. All her clothes fell out. Zoya's hands flew to her mouth and asad's hand to his forehead. She quickly gathered up everything and stuffed it in the suitcase again and put the suitcase down.

Zoya: vo sorry. I didn't'.

Rashid: koi baat nahi. Aur tum yaha reh sakti ho. Humhari mehman ban kar.

Mamu looked at him disapprovingly but didn't say anything.

shereen: oh ho.par humhe tumhara naam to batao.

Zoya: um'well'I am zoya.

Ayaan: zoya!

Humeira: zoya?

"phir se nahi"Nuzat and najima said at the same time. both looked at each other.

Shereen: oh ho. Zoya tumhra naam toh bohot hi acha hai. Dekha nahi kaise sab bar bar dohara rahe hain.

Razia rolled her eyes.

Dilshad seeing the whole confusion decided to put a stop to it.

Dilshad: vo humhe humhare kamre'

But before she could finish mamu turned around to walk away. zoya noticed that her phupi had just been insulted.

Zoya: excuse me par kya yeh is ghar ki tradition hai ki jab koi ghar aya mehman baat kar raha ho ya kuch puch raha ho toh iss ghar ke log unki baat unsuni kar dete hai?

Mamu stopped in his tracks and turned around with rage evident in his eyes. he didn't like youngsters like this girl and especially her. He hated her for some reason he didn't know why. Shereen Rashid razia dadi nikhat nuzat and humeira were looking at mamu visibly scared. But ayaan was looking at zoya clearly impressed. Even dilshad najima and asad's heads had turned towards zoya. The former two were shocked but asad was fighting to control his laughter. He had never been so impressed with zoya. Any other time or to any other person he would have not supported her but to this mamu he couldn't help but feel satisfied. Mamu again turned around and strode off from there.

Zoya next looked at razia.

Zoya: aunty.

Razia literally jumped out of her skin. Dadi chuckled lightly. Razia turned to shereen and told her that she was going after humeira's abu.

Zoya: who's humeira?

Humeira: ji main hu.

Zoya: oh you.

Humeira: ji aap mujhe janti hai?

Zoya: of course remember that fashin show'

Humeira recalled where she had heard zoya's voice. She hurriedly cut in.

Humeira: ji haan haan. Mujhe yaad aya.

Dadi: humeira? Fashion show?

Humeira: vo darahsal inho ne meri help ki thi'vo vo..

Nuzat; vo humeira baji fashion show organising committee mein helper thi na tab.

Zoya drew her eyebrows together in confusion and was about to deny it when she saw humeira pleading to her silently.

Zoya: haan vohi. Meine iski madat ki thi. Par

She turned to ayaan.

Zoya: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Rashid; ayaan mera beta hai. Tum janti ho isse.

Zoya: haan dos'

She stopped short of saying dost.

Dadi: nikhat nuzat jao inhe inke kamre dikhao.

Nikhat: ji.

As nikhat and nuzat led najima dilshad and zoya inside followed by shereen and dadi, ayaan walked towards asad.

Ayaan: toh zoya ye hai. bhai toh yehi hai vo jo uss din raat ko aap ke kamre mein aap par gir gayi thi.

Asad: vo sab chodo. Mujhe ye batao ki tum inhe kaise jante ho.

Ayaan: mulakat hui thi teen char bar. Maine to akhri bar dua bhi mangi thi ki inka chehra kabhi na dekhna pade par lagta hai khuda kaan mein ear phones lagaye baithe hai.

Asad: abhi nahi. Pichle ek mahine se. issiliye meri bhi dua abhi tak qubool nahi ki ki inhe meri zindagi se wapas le jaye.

Ayaan looked at his brother with mock shock putting his hand on his chest.

Ayaan: bhai jaan. Kya baat hai? Aaj pehli bar apne mera'mera joke continue kiya hai. Zarur kuch toh baat hai iss zoya mein.

Asad: kya matlab?

Ayaan: mera matlab'kuch nahi.

Ayaan was about to say that this zoya is beautiful and that she was clearly affecting his brother but when his brother showed him his fist ayaan decided not to push it.

Ayaan: chaliye bhai apko aapka karma dikhata hoon.

Asad nodded and followed ayaan in.

PS: how many of you thought after reading the first few lines that zoya was not coming to live in rashid's house along with asad?😛 Please honestly reply Because when my cousin read this her first reaction was that I had duped her by giving her false hopes that zoya would stay in the house with asad and ayaan's family.😆