AsYa SS: T.L.C. Chap 16, pg 100

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Sona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

loved the update; finally start of a convo instead of accusations...

-Sona

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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: princessjojo
Loved it Aditee! I'm SO glad Asad is guilty and full of regret. I was kinda shocked when I read the previous update...it wasn't my favorite to be honest. 😳 But this regretful Asad makes up for it and my dear Zoya is so forgiving always.

Hey Jojo,

The previous update evoked the strongest responses from the readers. People ether loved it or hated it! For me personally it was a tough one to write. There's a fine line between sexual violence and sexual aggression.

Asad is not all white, nor is Zoya. In reality, we are all shades of grey, some more than the others. And the characters needed that dose of reality.

At the same time, I can't imagine Zoya with an Asad who doesn't think he screwed up earlier... So the only way this story could proceed for me is if he apologised.

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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Loved it! That was awesome! Thanks for the update!

Thank you for writing back! 😊

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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: AussieChick
I'm loving this fanfiction :P
Zoya forgave Asad <3
But the actual main thing I loved about this update that made me smile was the broken glass :P
Him asking her if he could clean it <3
Soo cute!!!

Haha! You noticed that! I love it when readers pick up on these small details. 👏

Yup, just like Asad na... He's not buying time, he's genuinely interested in getting those shards out of the way. I wanted Zoya to be perceptive, realise that something was amiss... I mean one day this guy is all sweet and caring and the next day, a rogue!

I considered letting them move apart because the misunderstanding continues at his end and she doesn't want anything to do with a jerk. But that's a bit cliched 😉 and I wanted them to behave like rational adults, not perfect all the time but yes, willing to admit their mistakes.