MujheRaatDin | AsYa OS. - Page 6

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox

awsm os

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

I was left speechless after reading this beautiful OS.

The way this OS began was simply amazing...
First of all let me tell you that I've loved Sangharsh movie a lot and the song-mujhe raat din is amongst my favourite songs.Thanks a lot for using it in this ff so beautifully.
Starting with Asad and Njama's scene,I must say it was really cute yaar.
The way you showed that scene from Asad's point of view was so wonderful to read.
I loved to see Asad behaving like a man in love,acting all weird and crazy.

The idea of confessing his love through the song was simply a mindblowing idea.Asad is soo good..
The description of Zoya's situation was written very well.I loved the way you described ASYA's late night coffee in the garden sessions.
The manner in which you wrote how ASYA felt while being in love was simply outstanding.
Kudoos to you for typing down ASYA's emotions so beautifully...
A disorganized mess-I love this sentence of Asad so much...
His sweet and simply confession was simply beautiful...
The way in which you have used the song in this OS is really fabulous...
I loved the way Zoya reciprocated her feelings back to Asad.She teased her even.
Ah!! Zoya will be Zoya na.She called Asad Akdu in the confession also...😆

All in all this ff is simply a marvelous piece of work.
Thanks a lot for sharing this OS with us.
Plz keep coming up with more such wonderful ideas in future.
Take care!
Asma

ur here raina*hugs*(hopefully u remember me :-D)..beautiful os as usual,i always love ur works,dy r jst amazing:-)👏 PS.missing ur lamba lamba comments on TBP forum,missing ur works come back na yaar!!

Originally posted by: -bornalee-

ur here raina*hugs*(hopefully u remember me :-D)..beautiful os as usual,i always love ur works,dy r jst amazing:-)👏 PS.missing ur lamba lamba comments on TBP forum,missing ur works come back na yaar!!

Originally posted by: sophie420

nice add me to pm

So...Very Mushy.Somehow...I don't really see Asad being like this.Maybe I just can't connect a lovey dovey confession from our Akdu Ahmed.So yeah...seen better from you😛 But that Asad Tamatar scene in the beginning was damn cute.And AsYa laughing at the end was <3.As usual...well written though.

Nice os :-) please pm me when you write something new

OMG I loved this. It was so sweet and well written and I can totally imagine that situation arising between Asad and Zoya. You should write more OSs or SSs or FFs. You are a fantastic writer. Can't wait to read more from you 😊

Originally posted by: delena90

OMG I loved this. It was so sweet and well written and I can totally imagine that situation arising between Asad and Zoya. You should write more OSs or SSs or FFs. You are a fantastic writer. Can't wait to read more from you 😊