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sochona

@sochona

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

enjoyed reading it. would like to know what happens next.😊

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dipteapie12

@dipteapie12

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

hiii,
nicely written...wonderful chain of thoughts of asya for each other...good job... update d next part soon.. 😊

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Ritika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Amazing dear..!! Loved Mr. & Mrs. Akdu 🤣

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aashshhs

@aashshhs

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Very cute scene...loved their ranting :) :) :)

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Ankita

@..Ankita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: havokhotline
Hey! :)

Thank you for the PM. :D

So first off, this is really gripping. I mean, I bet that these were Asad and Zoya's thoughts after the fight!

I could literally hear their mind-voices. :O and I also wish this had really been the scene. :(

Write more! Brilliant stuff! :D

Thanks so much! My next will be purely Zoya's POV.

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Ankita

@..Ankita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Rushitaa
I LOVE this! you've got some skill woman! writemorewritemore
..I wouldn't mind seeing this in one of the upcoming episodes..😆

Thanks so much! Me too..Looks like we'll get a comic version of this in tonight's epi 😆

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Ankita

@..Ankita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: AMMY12
nice

😊

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: cutiepreet
Awww this is damn cute... :)
I cud imagine them fighting themselves over if they should sorry or thanxx or what..! Typical ASYA .. :)

thank you so much!