|Arrogance| An Asad-Zoya OS - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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enjoyed reading it. would like to know what happens next.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
hiii,
nicely written...wonderful chain of thoughts of asya for each other...good job... update d next part soon.. 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing dear..!! Loved Mr. & Mrs. Akdu 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very cute scene...loved their ranting :) :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: havokhotline

Hey! :)


Thank you for the PM. :D

So first off, this is really gripping. I mean, I bet that these were Asad and Zoya's thoughts after the fight!

I could literally hear their mind-voices. :O and I also wish this had really been the scene. :(

Write more! Brilliant stuff! :D


Thanks so much! My next will be purely Zoya's POV.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rushitaa

I LOVE this! you've got some skill woman! writemorewritemore
..I wouldn't mind seeing this in one of the upcoming episodes..😆


Thanks so much! Me too..Looks like we'll get a comic version of this in tonight's epi 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutiepreet

Awww this is damn cute... :)

I cud imagine them fighting themselves over if they should sorry or thanxx or what..! Typical ASYA .. :)


thank you so much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anoo67

enjoyed reading it. would like to know what happens next.😊


We'll have to keep watching the show for that 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dipteapie12

hiii,
nicely written...wonderful chain of thoughts of asya for each other...good job... update d next part soon.. 😊


thanks so much! And this was a one shot. There won't be any following parts to it!

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