SS: Istanbul - Part 5 - Updated Nov 27th

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Comment frequently too! Only then frequent updates are possible...😆

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Oh my my...😲 You've updated so many parts together ( I know its Three parts ... yet they seem many too me...) it seems ages since I've read Your updates so back- back. ( I mean recent ones... as I keep re-reading your other FFs precisely NYT...😉)

Me off to read them ... will comment in some time...😊

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Loved all the 3 parts...

You have a great way of putting forward miutest deatils in an altogether mesmersing and magical way... Always leaves me craving, pinning, wanting for more of it all. I know I have told you this umpteen times yet Can't really help it... Each writing of yours leaves a sweet tingle behind awakening a need to know what will be there more to it... especially more than predicting the next it's the wait to feel the beautiful way you put it in the parts...👏

Loved the couple here... the longings, decision made... the wait for Asad to come & search for her, Zoya's approach to evnts in their life, her pleadings. Also the back & forth between the time frame... doesn't at all feel haphazard ... but seems as though it's needed.

Loved the special "their " moment during the ceremony... so intimate yet so forbidding...

Waiting for the precap... also to see what's going to happen when these two come face- face 3 1/2 years later. Continue soon.

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desire_20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Read the precap! Waiting for the update!

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hilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Simply Brilliant ! :D
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what I love is that your pieces are short, yet gripping with detail and intensity to such an extent.. it hold much power than just the length of your piece. kinda wish you exceed the length, lol.. i can't get enough of it !

*counts down when the next update will arrive !*

PS; oh and I'm so happy to read that Asad "actually" recalled Zoya, 'his wife !' eeek. and him, her shohar ! gaaah.

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-Misek-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

It is so beautifully written and i love the way you connecting the dots with past.. Pls do PM me when u update next.

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hopehot

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

wonderful, thanks for the pm

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749230

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

The Sultan Ahmad Mosque at dusk.

Hagia Sophia: Another famous mosque.

Something to look forward to in the future updates: Cleopatra's sunken bath

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-Misek-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: 6th.Element
The Sultan Ahmad Mosque at dusk.

Hagia Sophia: Another famous mosque.

Something to look forward to in the future updates: Cleopatra's sunken bath