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JeanieBeanie

@JeanieBeanie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

This was so beautiful and deep! I love your use of adjectives. 😊 And your shayari is brilliant.

I really like Jojo's idea of Zoya writing deep shayari. I sincerely hope they have that in the show too! It adds more dimension to her character... that she's much much more than the silly girl she portrays herself as. Someone should pitch the idea to the creators fo sho!

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QueenofGreen

@QueenofGreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

You're brilliant!

Best piece of fiction, I've read on this forum :))

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Just had a rendevous with this post - thanks to all for the time. If time permits, perhaps I'll bore you with another one of my ramblings soon...

Cheers,
dc

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Shukriya, 😊

Cheers,
dc

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Loved your writing style.👏

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..
Loved your writing style.👏

Appreciated😊

Cheers,
dc

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Dee

@Enchantress

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Amagin One shot. So, well expressed. I was utterly mesmerised and captivated. You know what you are brilliant with words. You have the art to play with words. That's the best part. Your words define the emotions too well. Brilliant.. Please, do temme if you have written or will write something on Asya.. Would love to read them.

~Dee~