Asad-Zoya SS |Hugs and Kisses| UPDATEPg19 on 26/1 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
Plz do update soon n olz hlp me i cnt fnd d part 2 of did ss!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just read your ss dear, absolutely brilliant writing. plzz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Red.

I thought red looked fabulous on Zoya.

I didn't know why I was imagining that though. But all the same… Red looked absolutely gorgeous on her.

It made her look scintillating.

"Asad." Ammi murmured.

"Yeah?" I said, trying to stop staring at Zoya. We were at the shop. After that rather embarrassing incident in the car where I was caught staring at her, she had decided to start ignoring me even more.

I had no idea what kind of annoying game we had going on. All I knew was, I was sick and tired of these games.

Me ignoring her, her ignoring me and the both of us just pretending like it wasn't happening.

"Najma and I are done with clothes." I nodded and then gently prodded, "Did Zoya pick anything?" I asked.

My mother nodded and we went to the billing section. I noticed that Zoya was standing with Najma holding a blue dress. Needless to say, I was surprised.

She looked at my face for a split second and then moved to billing and said, "Phuphi, I've selected my dress too. I know it's blue but frankly, I'm tired of wearing red."

Zoya gave me a point blank look. I almost felt like the "I'm tired" statement applied to me more than the clothes.

I nodded at my mother and went and billed the three dresses. Maybe Zoya was right, she was just as tired as I was with this constant drama. We needed to put an end to all this.

The point was that I didn't know how.

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As we walked back to the car, it was almost like as if all the cars in Bhopal were in this street. Traffic smothered us on all sides.

By reflex, Ammi held Najma's hand. I saw Zoya on the other hand, trying to get cross the road unsuccessfully.

Without a thought, I went to hold her hand.

I could feel my heart plunge into overdrive at the spark of contact. Her eyes betrayed her nervousness but in less than a millisecond, she pulled her hand away from mine as if she had been burnt.

Her eyes spoke volumes as she gave me a piercing glare.

She said absolutely nothing as she walked forward and crossed the road.

I was left alone, standing on the other side as she went and stood by the car.

This was just plain ridiculous.

A month ago, her hugs, her kisses and her touches had infuriated me. They had made my uncomfortable and annoyed.

And now I missed them?

What was going wrong with me? It was almost as if she was cutting off all contact with my family as well. She never hugged my mom either nowadays or playfully patted my sister's head. She had become this emotionless robot.

In other words, she had become me.

And this bothered me, more than one could possibly imagine.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice. Can't Wait To Read More. (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey it was a nice part. Asad's near to realising Zoya's importance in his life. hope you cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..this is nice...poor asad...
cant wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Author's Note:

Hey guys! :)

I have exams coming up in March and this is a really crucial year for me, so the updates will definitely be slow. Thank you so much though, for not giving up on me and my writing.

Love you all. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part.
I'm loving Asad's restlessness from Zoe's cold behaviour.
I hope ASYA may indulge in a conversation soon.
Plz update the next part soon.
Take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!!! You updated.
Was waiting for it.
As usual i m tired of saying you are brilliantly brilliant. I love it. Back in QH i always want Zoya to behave somewhat this way to avoid Asad so that he could know her importance . And, its happening here. Loved the twist in the character's , zoya actually potraying pure Asad and emotionless.
Exams huh??? Its ok, take your time.Will wait for the next update.
Best of luck for the exams, hope you do well.
As always an mind blowing update.
Continue soon!!!
~Dee~
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely ss...
do pm me when u updt..
n plz do cont soon...

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