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"This looks perfect," Zoya thought.

Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan had to have everything perfect for her strict but kind-hearted husband Asad. He wanted everything perfect. If he had found one crumb on the table he would just grab a napkin and wipe about 100 times. Zoya on the other had wasn't a neat freak like him. She was one of those girls who were messy and crazy. But she had to change for him. Yes, indeed she did love him but he took sometime to confess his feelings for her.
They had gotten married about 12 months ago. Yet it was an arranged marriage, but gradually they developed feelings for eachother, but didn't know how to confess.
"Dilshad Ammi let me go check what's taking Asad so long," said a concerned Zoya.
" Accha, while then I'll serve food to Najma," said Ammi.
"Asad, why are you taking soo long,"
" Cause my shirt's button is broken, I had kept this very shirt for today,"
" O cmon Asad, just wear a different shirt,"
"No, I'm not going and I'll just cancel the meetings and work from home,"
"Allah miyan, what are you doing?"
"Asad stop being childish, wear a different shirt!"
" Arre Asad, why aren't you going today?" asked Ammi.
" Cause his shirt's button is broken, and Mr. Khan is very obbesive about everything," Zoya said meanly.
" Now all of you fix your moods, because we have to go Eid shopping, right?" Ammi said.
"Yeah Ammi, I'll take you guys then come home and start work," said the workholic.
~~~
" Asad take Zoya and we'll meet at the food court at 3," Ammi instructed.
Asad felt like Zoya was upset with him about the button incident. Man, women can be pain in the butt sometimes!! He had to cheer her up with his distictive, and skilled moves.
" Zoya, are you still upset with me about the button?"
" Yes, you're impossible, you're such a freak!!"
" Allah miyan, why didn't I get a normal husband?"
" Zoya, please listen to me, I planned this whole incident so I could spend some alone time with you! We never get a chance because I'm always busy with work, and you're always doing chores of the household!"
" Fine, but next time be normal! Just wear some other shirt! You'll still look the same, handsome and cute!"
" That's more like it!" said a cheerfully Asad.
They held hands, and went for a fresh new day!
The End!!
This is my second OS on AsYa, I know it was crappy!! I'm not really a good writer, but I feel we should have more ff, os, ss on AsYa!
Please Hit Like and Comment, I would appreciate! Tnanks!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww pretty cute and realistic to see Asad's character .. Lol
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Aww that's so sweet <3
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That was so cute and adorable! :)
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Awww!! This is sooo cutiee <3
Do write more ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww this is such a cute story. Short yet very beautiful.
OMG! Asad is so cute here. He does the drama so that he can spend some time alone with his wife Zoya. So swt.
Love it.
Edited by RAJLUVASYA - 11 years ago
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Very sweet and awesome!
You're a really good writer! :)

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