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Posted: 12 years ago
hey i really love reading your writingz...red whole of d SS now...hv been bzii due 2 examz so dint get tym had jst red d 1st part b4...finally i red ol d rest of it...so yeah yu r a great writer...reallyyy very very Beautifully written...shud i say dis as my luck i think coz now examz r over n your story also cuming 2 end 😭 but ahh i know iwill get 2 read more of your wrytingggs in futureee coz i feel yu will wryte more on AsYa 😃 Wud surely love 2 read more 4m you Fizzi..amazinggg writer you are...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
KOI MUJHE BATAYEGA YEH FF AKHIR KAB UPDATE HOGI???????????????????????????????????????????????

FIZZAAA

PLZ UPDATE THIS FF BACHA...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Writer's block. :|
Hope I recover soon.
Keep the comments on, I might get motivated to write :)
I want to make this part memorable since it's the last one but never the less, I will continue writing a few OS's and SS's 😃
Please co operate guys!
And yes, if you guys want a special scene or something you guys imagined then please lemme know! Because I can write better then 😉

-Fiza.
Edited by -Fizzi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wish u may get over the writer's block soon.
by the way did u read Virtue?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes I did, totally slipped out of my head to comment. Will do it soon! :P
Sorry! :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
OK..BUT PLZ IF YOU WRITE NEW SS OR OS..PLZ EK BAAR BATANA
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope you recover soon :)
Waiting for the last one.
Lemme know if you write any new OS or SS :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Fizzi-

Yes I did, totally slipped out of my head to comment. Will do it soon! :P

Sorry! :(



ok jana.It's ok
No need to say sorry.sometimes it happens.KSGLOVARIA ke kuch toh side effects honge na.😆
I'll be waiting for ur comments darling.
plz try to get over ur writers block soon.
love u
Muah.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aw damn. :\

Get better soon!

It was a joy reading this!
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Posted: 12 years ago


**********

Asad was sitting on the bed lost in his thoughts. It all happened so suddenly that it hit him right through his head. He was unable to analyze the situation for the first time in his life! Okay, not first. First was his relationship with Zoya. But that should've made him better at judging stuff. He mentally hit himself. He wasn't supposed to judge people! That's what Zoya hated and that's what she had also fixed in his head. Judging people was wrong. Their behavior, their decisions, everything was wholly their look out. He was no one to judge them. So he tried to put that thought aside and closed his eyes.


He heard the Washroom door click and saw the most beautiful sight that he could have ever imagined. His wife stood there in the sexiest thing he had come across. A black and red lace Lingerie which fit her curves perfectly but did nothing to hide them from his delirious eyes. He winced when he saw the robe over her body but then rejoiced. He could gladly get it off of her.


Without any further adieu, he started moving towards her as she looked back at him with confidence, smiling a coy smile. She wasn't one of those stupid girls who would shy away or feel nervous about exposing their body to their own husbands! Like, who does that?! She leaned her body against the wall next to the washroom and watched him approach her.


Asad decided to say it today. Whatever was in his heart, mind and soul had to come out today. Seeing her like this was probably the last thing he was expecting at the moment. But who was he kidding? This tiny little woman in front of him had the power to make his body react like no one else had ever done. As he reached her and held her wrists to the wall, coming as close as possible to her, he placed his lips right above hers. Not kissing her, just yet.


They're uneven breaths mingled with each other and she immediately bent forward to join her forehead with his. They entangled their fingers with each others and waited for the other to take an action, or say something at least.


"Do you know how much I want you right now?" He whispered, dangerously close to her lips.


"Definitely not as much as I want you." She blabbered shamelessly as she watched him grin.


"Let me warn you Mrs. Asad Ahmed Khan. Tonight's gonna be a long night with a lot of moaning and groaning. Because I ain't letting you get away so easily."


"Let it be so. I wanna see how wild you can get."


Asad smirked and was glad that she was welcoming his wild ideas. He was going to make it worthwhile for her, for himself, for them.


"You just got yourself in to a whole lot of trouble jaan!"



Asad dipped his head just an inch more and grasped her lips into his with such an urgency that she was left bewildered at the power of this man. Zoya snaked her hands around his neck and pulled him lower, closer to her, if that was even possible. He took her cue and let one of his hands roam over her back and the other working on the ribbon of her dress just when she caught his hand and pushed him away. He groaned in frustration and looked at her with a confused look.


"Not so soon baby. You have to earn it!" She smirked.


"Earn? You're mine!" He tried gathering her in his arms once again and was pushed back, again.


"Mr. Desperate Ahmed Khan! I have an idea in mind. Up for it?"


"What idea?"


"Well you can't back out after knowing it. So give me your consent first. Yes or no?"


Asad looked at her with a desperate look. This woman would be the end of him. She was standing in front of him wearing that sexy thing and he couldn't wait to rip it off oh her! But she came with clauses, apparently! He could already feel his body throbbing and his insides wanting to burst. He could kill for her right now!


"FINE! What is it?"


Zoya laughed like a lunatic and looked at him. "Look at you! I've changed you so much! Hahaha.."


"Are you telling me or should I just force you in to having sex with me?" He said straightforwardly.


"Now now darling! What's the hurry? How about we put up a show before our reunion?"


"A show?!" Did he hear her right?


"Yes! A seduction show! Performed by my very own seductress!" Zoya gave him an evil smile.


"You must be crazy!" Asad shrugged of the idea as soon as it had been said to him.


"Aww. You're scared. Poor baby!" Zoya grinned.


"Shut up. I'm not scared. I just don't fancy the thought of having to pull off a nuisance stunt to make love to my wife." Asad spat back. What the hell was wrong with her?!


"Oh. I'll just go and change back then. Good night!" Zoya turned to her heels and walked back to the washroom. But she knew he was going to stop her. Say it Asad!


"STOP!" She stopped and turned.


Asad was desperate. Yes he was! He was ready to give in to anything to get into her.


"Get your sweet ass here!" He smirked and pulled a chair as he sat on it and beckoned her to come and sit on his lap.



Zoya's eyes popped out of their sockets as she realized what he was going to do with her. Was this the same Akdu Ahmed Khan she had known all this while? Something was definitely wrong with him. She scanned his taut muscles as he buttoned down his shirt and pulled it down his arms, revealing those heavenly six pack abs and also something which shocked her beyond her wits.


A tattoo on his right elbow. How come she hadn't noticed that before? Maybe because he wore full-sleeved shirts during the day and even full-sleeved kurta's at night! But the last time they made love also she hadn't noticed that. Did Ammi know? And tamatar? Wow. This was news!


"I'm waiting sweetheart!" Asad called out to her, breaking her chain of thoughts.


She walked upto him and lifted up her legs making herself comfortable on his lap. She groaned as his hips created a heating friction right there. She held on to his manly shoulders as he wrapped his arms around her waist.


"Am I seductive enough now?" Asad whispered in her ear.


Zoya didn't want to answer that. Her cheeks had turned red and she felt hot around her ears. As if something inside her was breaking, wanting to come out with a force. She bit her lower lip as he nuzzled her neck, tracing its long length with his nose.


She arched her back and her hands rose from his shoulder to his hair, engaging him to keep it going. Asad replaced his nose with his lips. Soft and tender. Not kissing her, just feeling her skin under his lips. When he reached the bottom of her neck, he placed a hard kiss in the hollow space in the centre.


"Mmhhh.." She let out a moan.


As soon he heard her moan, his hand reached her hair and he pulled at it.


"Aah!" Zoya opened her eyes to meet his.


"Not yet. You wanted me to do this to you right? Don't be a spoilt sport, let's do this."


"Asad please-"


"Uh-huh. Not a word. At least not until I'm done with you."


With that he placed his lips on hers. She had never felt such intense emotions inside herself. But then again, this man could render her senseless with a few swift movements.


His tongue tried to make its way through her teeth but she wasn't opening up. He was frustrated and bit her lip as her mouth opened in a gasp and his tongue dived right inside her mouth. After sucking on to each others lips as lusciously as they could, they broke apart due to lack of oxygen.


His hands reached for her over coat and pulled it off of her. He stared at her barely clothed body with his piercing gaze and buried his face in her breast, trying to grasp as much as skin as he could as she held his face in her palms.


She heard his zipper go down and almost instantly she snapped out of the illusion. Something ran over her mind and she pulled apart.


"Asad. Wait."


Asad looked at her confused. Isn't this what she wanted? Now, why was she pushing him off all of a sudden?


"What is it Zoya?" He could see something was bothering her.


Zoya gave him an apprehensive look. Asad knew it was time for a few confessions.

**********


-COMPLETE-


Hey guys! My paper sucked. Big time. -.- But I couldn't let you guys suffer and since I've given my word, here's the complete Chapter. Now the last part will take time. Got exams and Practicals this month so I'm super busy. So I hope that's cool! :) Read and comment. I hope I haven't gone overboard with anything. Criticism too is always welcome! And yes I know the must awaited ILoveYou hasn't come yet. Last part. Definitely! :D

Love

-Fizz.



Edited by -Fizzi- - 12 years ago

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