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_Nish_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Shaily1008
Continue soon!!!!!!!! Your FF reminds me of PaYa and makes me smile!😊 PKDH is so annoying now!!!😡

Really? Oh thank you😊 was thinking of upadting in one or two days

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Nikita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

amazing update Nisha

sorry for the very late comment

continue this amazing story

thanks for the pm

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_Nish_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Duggukede
amazing update Nisha
sorry for the very late comment

continue this amazing story

thanks for the pm

Thank you so much!!!!!😃

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_Nish_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Again double post!!!!!😭 keep clicking Quote instead of Edit😭

Edited by NISHADEEP - 11 years ago

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_Nish_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Part 5

A morning newsletter arrived at the doorsteps of Deewan Mansion. Sheila comes and picks it up. Her face widens in shock.

Sheila: Anuj!!!!! Rubal!!!!! Payal!!!! Avantika!!!!Maasi!!!!!! Look look, once again our family's name has been published in the news!!!!!

Anuj: Kya? Phirse tumara bhai aaya hai kya?

Sheila: Arey nahi!!! Dekho yaha pe kya likha hai!!!

Anuj, Rubal, Payal and Aneesha nani see the news and are shocked. They start crying

Avantika: What is it? Mujhe bhi dikhao!

Avantika snatches the paper and drops it. her eyes fill with tears and 2 seconds later she bursts into a loud wail.

Avantika: PANKHURI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aneesha: Apne aap ko sambhalo Avantika

Payal: Chalo ab Pankhuri toh chali gayi, so it means mujhe ab yeh atcha ban ne ka natak nahi karna parega. Yaay!!!

Sheila: Payal! Tum itni heartless kaise ho sakti ho?

Payal: Heartless toh mein shuru se hi thi mom, but app log Pankhuri ko itna zaada admire karte te ke main alsi me kaisi hu kisi ko fikar hi nahi thi! Arey main bhi dusri ladkiya ki tara iss ghar ki property se hi pyaar karti thi. Rubal toh ek bhaana tha!!! HAHAHA!!!

Rubal: Payal...tum kya Latika ko atche se jaanti thi?

Payal: Of course!!! Latika was my beloved girlfriend!!! Shaadi bhi hone waali thi hum dono ki, but phir soche ke ek dusre se shaadi kar ke kaunsi khushi milegi? Kyunki pyaar toh sirf paiso se ho sakta hai na!!!

Anuj: Pankhuri ko gaye do pal nahi hue aur tum aisi baate kar rahi ho??!

Avantika: Who said Pankhuri is dead?? I will find her, you wait and watch I will!!!!

Aneesha: Ek minute, look what else is written here!!!

Sheila reads the paper

Sheila: Pankhuri Kumar ne jaate samhe ek baat batayi ke voh shayad hamesha ke liye nahi gayi par ek do din me voh roop badal kar aa jaayegi vaapas. Jo lakdi vaapas aayegi uska naam hoga Ayesha.

Avantika: Wait wait, I don't understand anything!!! Is Pankhuri dead and another girl named Ayesha is coming to replace her or is Pankhuri coming disguised as Ayesha?

Rubal: CVs hi jaane!! Hamesha aisa karte hai! Butt don't know why every time they have to use my Adi to get their job done!

Sheila: Dekho, main iss maze me nahi phasna chaati, so I am just going to quietly believe that Pankhuri is dead. End of confusion. Lets all accept this new girl Ayesha

Avantika: But why would Pankhuri send Ayesha?? Unless she IS Pankhuri??

Sheila: Yeh sab sochne lago gi na toh kabhi iss maze me se baar nahi nikal paaogi. gol gol chakar hi kaat ti reh jaaogi. Is hi liye its better you just believe the truth Avantika and accept Ayesha.

Avantika: NEVER!!!!

She storms off.

PKdHians again were again watching all this mess from outside, feeling guilty for what they had done but also angry at what Pankhuri was planning to do, at what the CVs were planning to do!!!!

Me: But hang on guys, wont the CVs find out about that newsletter? They know that they didn't send it so why will they believe it?? Wont they wonder where it cam from??

Shaily: Us ki chinta mat karo. Aaj tak CVs ne kabhi bhi kisi bhi cheez par dhyan diya hai? They keep on making bloopers themselves, they will never pay attention to such a small thing!!!

Sonia: Shaily is right. CVs wont notice, they never care much about what is happening in their Deewan Mansion. Bahut hungama hota rehta hai ar unko kya? Forget it. Don't worry

Diya,Linaya,Nikita: But now we are teaching them a lesson!!

Me: Hang on, where is Ayesha? Our Ayesha?

Here is part 5!!!! again I need your views!!!!! this was a quick update and I promise the next update will also be super quick but only after your comments guys!!!!😃😃

Edited by NISHADEEP - 11 years ago

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Tacker_Holic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Gosh Nisha you are too good! This was a full on detective update! You should defo send this to CV's via Twitter! They may read it! I am sure they will laugh and enjoy this! 🤣

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_Nish_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Tacker_Holic
Gosh Nisha you are too good! This was a full on detective update! You should defo send this to CV's via Twitter! They may read it! I am sure they will laugh and enjoy this! 🤣

wow that was a quick reply Sonia!!

Aaw thank you so much!!!😃😃 hehe hope the CVs do see this, I want to know their reaction!!!! oh imagine what they'll think reading something like this...

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cupcake2906

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Heyy... The spammer is back 😆

Sorry I didn't reply on the last post but both are soo amazing 👏 Your sense of humour is just out of this world 🤣 If you are on twitter or have any friends who are on twitter, you just send this to the CV's and as many of the PKDH cast as possible... I am sure they will love it as much as us 😃

Keep going... You are a really good writer... Wish those stupid CV's learnt something from you 😳

Also congo for 100 comments...👍🏼 I was the 100th one 😛

Edited by cupcake2906 - 11 years ago

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_Nish_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: cupcake2906
Heyy... The spammer is back 😆

Sorry I didn't reply on the last post but both are soo amazing 👏 Your sense of humour is just out of this world 🤣 If you are on twitter or have any friends who are on twitter, you just send this to the CV's and as many of the PKDH cast as possible... I am sure they will love it as much as us 😃

Keep going... You are a really good writer... Wish those stupid CV's learnt something from you 😳

aaw thank you so much!!! Yes, I'm back😆

Hmm I only just joined twitter a few weeks ago, but not liking it much. might just get some friends to send it but yes I really want them to see!!!! After all it is all dedicated to them and their wonderful brains!!! Just hope that they DO love it like you said and not get angry😕😃

Thank yooouuu!!!!