PaYa TS: Dil Ki Doctor.. - Page 2

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You are amazing! You have left me speechless and you write for so many forums beautifully! How do you do it? I really like the idea of diary entries and how you have controlled the story with Adi's thoughts which are ever so intriguing! Truly wonderful! Keep Going Girl! 🤗

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Part 3: Prayers Answered

More and more deeply, for her I prayed,

Can you believe they were suddenly answered?

Time passed by, I sat on that soft, beautiful bed reading 'My Memory Lane', maybe that was the best thing that has happened to me during the past weeks. When looking back to those days, I realize, the relationship between me and Pankhuri was not just friendship, but it was something else. Or else why did I share each and everything about her with my memory lane? Why did I behave so over-possessive at times? Why does she become so tensed if I fail to reach home on time? Maybe she felt the same for me. And maybe we can call our relationship... LOVE! Can we?

But thinking about all this gave me, excruciating pain and nothing else. If I am in love also, it's been too late. Now she won't respond if I confess my feelings for her, she won't hug me if she feels the same, she won't jump like a kid and god knows if she will feel anything at all. It's all because of me, only me. I have never felt so guilty in my life at all.

Now, the only one who could help me was god, if someone like that really was there. I have heard people saying that there was nothing that god couldn't do. And if we ask with such a sincere heart, then our prayers will be answered and wishes will be fulfilled so soon. I can ask him to save Pankhuri, not to take her away from me, keep her beside me all the time and I can even assure him that I will take care of her forever. Maybe God thinks that I won't take care of her well and that's why he has decided that he will take care of her himself. Like me, he too must have realized that she truly is a gem. But I will prove that I will take best care of her than anyone else. Was I becoming too childish? Maybe I was!

A knock on the door, broke my chain of thoughts. It was mom.

"Adi, come and have lunch, You haven't had your food properly for days.", she really did seem concerned about me.

"No mom. I am not hungry.", I replied showing no interest. "But Adi, you must take care of yourself.", she again insisted me to take lunch.

"Mom! Can you please leave me alone?", I requested craving for some peace.

She suddenly closed the door and left, maybe she really did feel that I wanted to be left alone.

I started reading the memory lane again and after minutes and maybe hours, I heard another knock on the door Expecting it to be mom again, I opened the door. But to my utmost shock and surprise, it wasn't. It was Pankhuri.

The bruises on her body had disappeared and there wasn't any sorrow on her face, she seemed happy and her smile enlightened my face. But I couldn't believe it was her, I pinched myself, closed and opened my eyes again and again, but the scene remained the same. Pankhuri still was there.

I noticed that she was wearing the salwar I gifted her, it's the first time she is wearing it and I have never seen her so beautiful.

"Pankhuri, you here?", I asked in shock.

"Why? I cannot come here? It's my room!", she seemed as if she didn't even know about the accident.

"No! No! Come in!",I invited.

I held my hands forward and she took hold of them tightly commenting on my move, "Lagta Hein Tum Aaj bahut Romantic Ho." I smiled back, her hand was awfully cold and freezing.

We both moved towards the bed, holding hands and sat there. After long silent seconds, she broke it.

"Adi, I missed you during these days."

"I missed you too Pankhuri, my life was just like hell. And I realized something."

"What?", she asked in amazement. I hesitated at the beginning but seeing her enthusiastic eyes, decided to tell her everything, all that in my heart.

"I realized, you are not just a friend for me, I realized our relationship is something else. It's true; distance makes the heart grow fonder. My heart has grown an unknown feeling towards your heart, when you were in the hospital, I missed you like hell. It seemed as if my life ended without you and I realize, that's what is called LOVE. I love you Pankhuri.", I said and took a deep breath.

I waited for her reply; I saw different emotions going through her eyes and finally she replied back, "If that's what is really called the feeling of LOVE, then I must say I love you too Adi." She suddenly pulled me into a hug.

Never in my wildest dreams had I ever thought that my countless prayers will be answered so soon, Pankhuri was back to me, we confessed for each other and what else? She was perfectly alright so was I. It is true that God is there and will always be there.

The hug was broken after moments of love and silence took entry again. Our mouth kept quiet but our eyes spoke what our heart wanted to.

She broke the glance, suddenly and stood up. Opened the bag, she had with her and took out a Tiffin box from it; opened it.

"I know you haven't eaten anything, so now open your mouth.", Pankhuri smiled at me and took my favorite Aalu Paratha from the box. My mouth watered. She slowly took a piece of the paratha and started feeding me with her soft hands. The moment looked so special that my eyes kept staring at hers. I wished it never ended but it did as soon as she started speaking.

"Adi, now promise me something.", she said feeding me with another piece of Paratha.

"What?", I asked still lost in her eyes and chewing the piece of delicious food. In fact, it seemed it is the tastiest piece of food I have ever had.

"Promise me that you will take care of yourself." She asked so cutely.

"But why?", I asked confused because her request seemed so sheepish.

She let out a small laugh and said, "Because I won't always be there to bring you Aalu paratha."

"Oh really?", I asked and laughed with her.

Suddenly my vision started becoming blur, my head started spinning and my eyes were suddenly forced to open widely.

I heard my mobile's ring and slowly attended the call feeling dizzy.

"Hello.."

No response from the other side, after moments of silence, the person on the other side spoke. It was Dad. "Adi, it's a bad news. Pankhuri left us a few minutes ago."

My eyes widened in shock and I looked around. Everything remained the same, except the fact that Pankhuri wasn't there.

It was over, she has gone

To the place , far and forbidden..

I thought my prayers were answered,

But it never was..

I thought she will come back,

but she never did.

Mujhe cho dkar Vah bhaag gayi,

Meri dil ki doctor mar gayi..

~~~~~~THE END~~~~~~

So I made Pankhuri die again! But believe me, I never wanted to. But my wild sense of imagination wasn't with me. I don't know if you guys became emotional or not, but I really did while typing this.

I am really sorry for making Pankhuri die in my second story too but I promise if I write another one here then it will be a completely happy one.

Bits of the last part has been taken from Ravinder Singh's "I too had a love story." If you love romantic, heart-breaking tales then you must try that out.

Thanks a lot for the comments guys.

Please do comment and thank.

Till some other crazy idea hit me,

Linaya

really heart touching... I truly loved it yaar your whole TS was amazing please don't stop continue writing more stories on this forum please!

Awesum...:-)..
Ur twists r really shocking...i ws thinking finally everything turnd good..but..:-(
plz plz do write more in dis forum

@Linaya

This part made me cry. You write so beautifully it makes my heart feel so nice! You have portrayed Adi's every feeling so perfectly I don't even think the CV's can do it better. I really wish Pankhu was back with Adi but I liked how you ended it. The last few lines were perfect. When she came to him I actually thought she was back but it was just Adi imagining those moments with his love! Just wow girl! I really hope you write more for the forum because you are an AMAZING and PERFECT writer! Kudos to this piece of work! ❤️