OS--My Light in the Dark Night UPDATED PG. 6! - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: XoXKashishXoX

AHHH! OMGGG Loved this, it was too cute! Argh too many Adi feels haha I was literally gushing, I scared my Mum&Dad last night since I was wandering around the house with an idiotic smile😳😆. See the effect your OS' have on me?! ;P Anyways BRILLIANT, I am expecting the next part but you don't have to rush since I feel bad for threatening you so much anyway ;P lol I am probably going to read this for what seems like the 30th time today =PP

Hahahaha! Idiotic smile.. hahaha. That's too cute. But sorry to disapoint.. this is the last part for this OS.. I'll have different OS's but no more for this part. I actually had another idea in mind alreayd but this stupid new track/article is making me 😡 and im losing the inspiration 😭😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Wow!! sharna... beautiful post... i loved reading. 🤗

Adi is is so caring... why he still cant realise dat he is in love... confused man... hell on him😡
I just love the line...wen he stroked her cheeks...n kissed her forehead awww!! so romantic...
and at the meantime she too dreamt the same...awww cho cweet

A slumber party... 🤣 adibaba is too funny...
btw i realy want CV's to show dis... it wl be worth watching...😃

Thanks sharna... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sharna... that was an amazing update, i loved it a lot..

Aditya's concern, loved how he said will he be able to sleep thinking of Pankhuri being alone n hurt... hw sweet 😳

poor Pankhuri not being able to express why exactly she won't be able to sleep with Aditya in the same room 😆

Awww Pankhuri dreaming about Adi n Latika's wedding then suddenly Adi kissing her gently on the forehead.. how cute, funny how it suddenly changed from one 2 another 😆

Awww I just love their connection, they are so made for one another

Very very Well Done Sharna, i loved the update n on the whole it was a superb OS 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Ahh...that was amazing! Loved the camaraderie between PaYa and Adi's dependence on Pankhuri and vice-versa!


I do hope there is a part 3:) *hint*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Thanks guyss! No, 3rd part, but there may be other OS's ;)

Keep encouraging me with more of your alls sweet words! ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Supriya and Sukhi.. thank you so much for actually reading it all the way through! I'm so glad you guys weren't disappointed!! (hopefully!) Hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: sharna2k6

<font color="#330033" face="Calibri" size="3">Hey guys, I'm back with another OS. Well, its in two parts just for you lazy dears who do not like reading! Hehe, you guys know by now I cannot create anything short, and this ended up being really long, so I just broke it into two parts! This OS isn't anything serious or intense like my last one, just a light PaYa moment in between all the chaos.. well you guys can read it, lol. But I just want to mention quickly, I wrote this OS before I caught up with three weeks of episodes I had missed and I thought it was funny, some of what I added is diologues and thoughts from the show! But I swear I hadn't known til after I wrote the OS.. Haha. Guess my psych studying is paying off and I can dicepher Adi well.. better than the CV's I think! Hehe. 😛😉</font>


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<font color="#330033" face="Calibri" size="3">Sooo enjoy, and YESS, do comment! If I don't get enough comments I'm not posting my second part, and then you guys will be at risk for a verrry angry Pooja as the results hahaha 😆😆😉</font>


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<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">It has been a hectic week with the preparations of Adi and Latika's wedding approaching around the corner. Adi was getting a bit irritated with all the chaos and rituals that were starting to take place. He was still having mixed feelings about the wedding but what could he do, the deal has been settled. After a lot of analyzing and speculating he came to the conclusion that this marriage, this settlement, was a good deal. He just wanted to get this whole shenanigan over with and continue on with his life. In all this commotion he hasn't even been able to spend time with his best friend, best friend who has taken it upon herself it seems like, to do all the decorations for his wedding herself. Or is it just an excuse to keep herself busy and away from Adi? He cannot tell. He's been a little confused and worried about her behavior lately, actually. She seems distracted and in a haze every time he sees her. Odd. He decided he will have to do something about it because if it's one thing he cannot stand, it is to see his dear ones upset. And Pankuri, his dear best friend is very important to him. </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">The night was coming to an end, all the work for that day was wrapping up when all of a sudden all the lights in the Diwan mansion go off, followed by a big BOOM. </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"Uof, yeh baresh bhe na.. hamesha saab kuch kharaab kar deetha hain. Kithna aandhera ho gaya hain," Adi murmers in the dark. "Generator bhe on nahin ho raha hain!" </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"Well, it's a good thing that all the work for today was wrapped up anyways" he adds as a side thought. </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">As soon as he thought that, he heard a loud scream coming from the direction of Pankuri's room. </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"OH SHIT, PANKURI!" </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">In a heartbeat Adi was in her room, by her side. She was up on a small ladder putting up some decorations when the lights went out, and now she was stranded up on top, panic-struck. </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"Adi! Adi please help me! Muhje bahut daar laag raha hain.. kuch nahin dekai de rahi hain! I'm stuck!! Aur achanak yeh lights kyu chale gaye?" </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">She was honestly a little more afraid of the darkness instead of getting stuck on top of the ladder. The darkness was not her friend these days' </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">She was squirming around at the top of the ladder, laced with pure fear. </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"Pankuri, mein hoon na, chinta math karo. Agar mein hoon tumke saath, tumhe kuuch nahin ho sakta. I'll get you down, but don't mov'" </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">Before Adi could direct her to stop moving, Pankuri lost her balance and she was falling. She closed her eyes and braced herself for the fall and pain which was sure to follow. Instead she found herself in the safe, strong arms of Adi. Her hero. </font>


<font color="#990000">"Meine kaha na mein tumhe kuch nahin hone donga," he states proudly. </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">Just then, another thunder suddenly struck loudly, scaring Pankuri into causing her to grip onto Adi's shoulders more firmly. Adi watched Pankuri thoroughly concerned and perplexed at her frightened state. Suddenly it clicked!</font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"Of course, you fool! How could you forget??" He chastises himself. Ever since Pankuri's incident at the office, the strong, fearless Pankuri was replaced by an anxious, jumpy Pankuri who reacts to things that didn't affect her before. "You should have checked on her the instant the lights went off instead of waiting for her scream. You idiot!!!" </font>


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<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">He gently puts her down but as soon as he does so Pankuri yelps in pain. When she lost her balance and fell from the ladder, she twisted her ankle trying to break her fall. In an instant, she is pulled back into his arms, cradling her; he carries her over to the bed and gently sets her down, ignoring her meek protests that she's fine. </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"Chup Pankuri! Tumhe choot lagi hain! You are not fine. You are not walking on it until I take a look at it." </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">In the darkness he roams around and manages to find candles and matches located on top of her wardrobe. </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"It's a good think you have an obsession with candles, Pankuri, otherwise we'd have to roam around in the complete darkness looking for torches!" </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">With the light from the candle illuminating the room, he finds the first aid box and takes a look at Pankuri's injuries. Pankuri, now quiet and still' finds herself greedily savoring this unexpected moment with him, etching it into her memories because she knows soon, that's all she'll have' </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">With him there, by her side, the darkness, the storm, none of it bothers her. Adi's presence has a calming effect to her. </font>


<font color="#990000">Her thoughts are suddenly interrupted by Adi's distraught voice. "Pankuri, you're bleeding too! You scraped your ankle as well as spraining it when you fell. What was the need for you to get up on the ladder? You silly woman! What if I had not come in time? You could have hurt youself even more. Stop with all this preparation nonsense. No more." He continues to scold her while Pankuri pouts, secretly enjoying the concern Adi was having for her. But then again, she didn't want him to worry too much. She was fine. As long as he was with her, she was fine'</font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"Tumne he tho kaha, agar tum hoo, tho muhje kuuch nahin hoga" She retorts back, very pleased with her answer. </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"Oooh, very nice Ms. Pankuri, very nice. Meri hi line phirse meri oopaar hmm??"</font>


<font color="#990000">He extends his hand to clean her wound but gets unexpectedly surprised as Pankuri pulls back her foot. </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"No Adi! Please, it's okay. No need for that' </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"What? But why..? Don't be so shy Pankuri!"</font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"No, no. It's not that.. It's just that it'll.. it'll.. sting!" Adi burst out laughing at this childish Pankuri. </font>


<font color="#990000">"It won't hurt Pankuri, trust me. Would I ever hurt you? Here, take my hand and hold on to it. If it stings, you squeeze my hand okay?" </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">He covered Pankuri's small delicate hands with his own. Meanwhile Pankuri constructs the sensation of his warm, manly hands on hers into her brain so she could keep it forever. She's so focused on the sensation that next thing she knows she hears Adi saying it's done! </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"Ithni jaldi?? " she asks, a little disappointed that she has to release his hands now' </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">Adi just responds with an amused smile. </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"Thank you so much Adi. I don't know what would have happened if you weren't here.. But I am okay now, so you please to get some rest now. It's quite late now too." </font>


<font color="#990000" face="Calibri" size="3">"What?? Are you out of your mind Pankuri? You think I'm going to leave you in this state? The lights are not back on yet, and you are injured. You really must be out of your mind if you think I'm going to leave. I'm staying here with you tonight."</font>

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<font color="#330066">Sooo.. What're you guys waiting for?? Comment awaaay </font>😃😉</font>

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm confused by this ...^^^^ 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Sharna Dear,,,,😳 Aww.. It was so so so cute and lovely...!!❤️ loved it 2 d core..! Keep Writing...!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww, thanks Prateek! This is pretty old actually.. I didn't like this one at all actually haha, but thank you so much for liking it!!

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