OS--My Light in the Dark Night UPDATED PG. 6! - Page 2

Originally posted by: Poojaa_P

Firstly I AM WAITING FOR THE 2nd PART! post it ASAP. or else 😡

hahaha

oo and yes if people don't comment on your OS, i will literally hunt them down and things will get pretty messy ! so they better be good readers and comment to save their lives!

haha Omg i sound like a some dangerous woman. I can't even think of a word to describe myself rightnow.. my threatening avatar is not pleasing at all.. I love this dangerous, threatening avatar of yours! Keep it up! Just not directed at me though 😆😳

anywaysss back to your awesome -wonderful - beautiful - too good - sweet and cute OS.. it's AMAZING x Infinity + 1 😳 Awww shuccckss, you got me blushing again.. I LOVE your comments, they's make me feel special hahaha 😳 And you put so much effort into it, you put yourself into your comments! I love that about you. 🤗

I think i have the whole OS memorised, not kidding, i probably know it word for word. And i've only read it about 2 times so far ! Haha, hey mee too.. but only to see what else I could change and add. This OS wasn't very dramatic, very simple, just my input from a potential PaYa scene, my version. 😳 I hope you'll like the second part 😃 Unfortunately, like i said, it's kept G rating, to make up for my R rated thoughts some times 😆😉

I know you think i'm being biased and just saying the good stuff to make you happy, it's not the case at all ! you know how much i adore your writing! it's beautifully written in every way. it can't get any better than this. Awww! You're too sweet, like the frappe 😉 LOL, we just love referencing the frappe don't we? I can't take all the credit though. Seriously, it's PaYa and NaSha combined that has inspired a complete lazy, non creative nonwriter to actually want to write OS's. I would have never guessed I would start writing. They are really something. Special couple, so dear to me. 😳

Its so cute and you've correctly used their character personality - i.e the way pankhuri meeks and says i'm fine.. when she's not fine. That is SO her personality, i can just imagine her saying that.

And how Adi says, would i ever hurt you?! the honesty is clearly visible. If this ever happens in the actual show, this is EXACTLY how ADI would react to the situation. As i've said before, you know the guy too well. LOL I know! I didn't think it would be the same if I didn't keep their personalities the same. It's the most fun to read when their personalities match what it actually is in the serial. So I tried to keep it how they really are. And like you said, I get Adi really well, weirdly enough. For some reason Pankuri is a little harder to decipher, which I wouldn't guess, but still fairly easy. They are beautiful chaacters, especiallly our Adibear. YES, I said OUR adibear 😃 Be proud. I'm sharing him withyou, and you onlyyy. 😉 I wisssh Cv's would come across these and use them! I can just vividly imagine how it would go, so I'm dying to see it played outtt! 😭

The best thing about it is, that it relates the current track and you made it sound so real!

Favourite part was obviously Adi lifting pankhuri, and being stubborn that i will stay here with you tonight. The care, the concern is just UFF I LOVED writing that part too, him carrying her over to the bed.. AHH. I was drooling at my own words 😆😆

Your words make me fall for adi even more! how do you manage to come up with these creative ideas! Weeell, the walk to my classes in the morning is a 30 minute duration from my car. Usually, when I have nothing better to do, I listen to music and daydream.. and avoid getting hit by a car simultaneously.. So lately I've started daydreaming of PaYa, Adi and of course my Nakuul darling, and thought hmm.. what would I like to see?!?! Actually, this I got the idea because the light is going out in my room, and somehow this popped into my head hahaha. I'm aware, it was probably just a rhetorical question, but there, I still answered it for you 😉😛

Oh and also, have i mentioned your English is so good! I mean the vocabulary and grammar. It just makes the story sound just that tiny bit better. like cherry on cake. Otherwise no matter how good the concept is, it kills the mood to read. so yes thank you for such beautiful writing. 🤗

I think credit goes to your psych studies no? 😉 OMG, I know EXACTLY what you mean. That really irks me sometimes, so I try to make sure super hard that it all makes sense grammatically and flows together. If I ever become a writer to my book "1001 Inappropriate Thoughts Nakuul Makes Me Think", will you be the editor for me?!😳😆 And nooo problemo, love. You're a major reason apart from PaYa, why I write. Your enthusaism everytime I put up a new OS.. makes me feel so good.. no kiding! Love you darling. 🤗❤️

OH SHIT. I just looked at the clock, its 12:03 AM.. I need to be getting to beddd. Or else I'll turn into a vampire like youu 😉 Just wanted to reply back for ya though before bed! 😃

Originally posted by: f.s.m

As always ... Love your Writings ... 😃 It's quite simple and yet too beautifully written ... loved the way Adi cares .. Hope we could see this in show ...

Please continue soon ;)

Originally posted by: anusha.cochin

Very short OS sharna..congrats

Originally posted by: sukhi...

@ Sharna darling, i read it half r parcchi porte... bt i assure u tomm. i wl deffo complete it... plz karap peyo na...!!