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Hey my lovely Pyaar Ka Dard fans,
We havent had many stories on the forum, so here I am to start it all off and I hope we see a lot of creative writers step up and fill up this forum with PaYa romance and amazing stories for us all to read! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ This is really a rubbish OS I can write better than this so here it is! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Please leave your honest comments and critisisms they are all welcome! I havent sent PM's out to anyone but please have a read if you see it! Happy Reading! Love you all! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

OS- Heavenly Rain

Aditya and Pankhuri were sitting outside near a cliff watching the stars and discussing about Nana's birthday. "Adi what are we going to have for entertainment it's not a party if there isn't any entertainment!" Adi smiled at her and thought looking up at the night sky. "Pankhuri, I think we should hire some musicians or maybe some dancers?!" Pankhuri didnt look satisfied. She shook her head in disagreement. Adi was shocked. He gasped at her. "Come on Pankhuri that is such a good idea you can't deny it!" he looked at her with a puppy face, they shared an eye lock. "Idea!" Pankhuri clicked her fingers and smiled. "Adi why dont you play the drums like you did at Neha's sangeet you were really good!" she looked at him with a confident smile her eyes glistened as she looked in those blue eyes. Adi had a charming smile on his face "It's not a bad idea but you have to sing!" he looked at her innocently. She started denying. "Adi I can't sing, I'm awful" Pankhuri looked confused and tense. Adi crossed his arms "Pankhuri dont lie, so who was that girl that was singing at her cousin's wedding with me, because she was damn good at singing!" Pankhuri went shy and Adi started laughing. Pyaar Ka Dard hai meetha meetha pyaara pyaara do dilon ka hai sahara duet. "Pankhuri dont be shy like every other girl, please do it for me!" Adi held her palm and she looked down at it. "Adi come on please dont... Aunty won't like it!" Adi started shaking his head. "You're impossible Pankhuri why do you care so much about mum she won't say anything and if she does main hoon na!" Adi put his other hand on her's and smiled looking deeply into her eyes. "We're together in this dont worry!" Adi reassured her. "Par Adi what song shall we sing?" Pankhuri started thinking of songs that Nana would like. "Pankhuri dont worry leave that to me!" Just then a rumble of thunder emerged in the sky and Adi stood up immediately. "Pankhuri let's get under some shelter!" Adi ran under the shelter. Pankhuri was circling herself in the rain and she was laughing looking at the heavenly rain. She looked over at Adi. She signalled him to come out. Adi was admiring her from the shelter. Mujhe mila pyaar tera, tujhe mere chah mile, naye naye sapnon ki, haemin nahin rah mili , ek arman hamara . "Aditya aao na, look at the rain it's so beautiful!" Adi's eyes were fixed on her. She looks so pretty in that pink and orange anarkali, her smile is just WOW! Pankhuri really is one of a kind. His thoughts took over his heart and he shook out of them. What am I thinking? Adi you and love NO! NO! She was playing with the droplets, her hair completly wet. She ran over to Adi and pulled him out. "Adi stop being a baby come on!" Pankhuri was spinning around having fun; Adi looked up at the heavens and brushed his hand over his slightly wet hair. "Pankhuri, you were right this is kinda cool, Mom never let me get wet in the rain that's why I hated it!" Pankhuri laughed at him and she held her stomach laughing "Adi, you haven't lived seriously!" Pankhuri walked up to him and they looked into each other's eyes. Adi looked at her confused. Pankhuri held his hands and pulled his arms out. "Adi just embrace the heavenly rains in your arms, it's the most beautiful feeling ever!" he put his arms out and looked to the heavens. There was a small breeze brushing through his hair and he had the biggest smile on his face. Adi looked down at her as she was watching him. Aditya put Pankhuri arms out as well, Pankhuri was in front of Aditya and they both looked up at the sky happily. They stood there in that position for a few minutes. Pankhuri stepped forward and slipped on the mud. "PANKHURI!" Adi pulled out his arms and she fell safely in his. She closed her eyes to break the fall but she slowly opened them to see those killer eyes enveloping her with his arms. She felt safe, precious and perfect in those manly arms. Adi had a worried look on his face but his eyes were speaking volumes, he watched her wet hair and her perfect lips. Her eyes were shifting as there was a slight blush on her cheeks. Perfect he thought. Pankhuri wet hairs were disturbing his vision and they brushed over her face. He slowly brushed his soft fingers over her face and put them behind her ear.

Pyaar Ka Dard Hai Meetha Meetha Pyaara Pyaara,

Yeh Hasin Dard Hi,

Do Dilo Ka Hai Sahara,

Thode Thode Chain Bhi Hai,

Thodi Thodi Bequarari

Aur Bhi ho pyaar javan,

Arazu hai yeh hamari,

Yeh Milan Ho Dubara,

Pyaar Ka Dard Hai Meetha Meetha,

Pyaara Pyaara.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
*edited*

Wow... Me first Again...!!!!!!!!

C'mon girls... Other work on PaYa...!!!!!
Superb sweet n cute OS dear... ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Adi and Pankhu in rain... Awww.. So romantic...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰

Waiting for more n more works...๐Ÿ˜›
Awesome OS... Loved it.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by pepples_joy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wwooowww
lovely
well written...
i loved the puupy face scene most...
too goodd
plzz write more
will be waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its beautiful ๐Ÿ‘


i specially loved this dialogue
Adi crossed his arms "Pankhuri dont lie, so who was that girl that was singing at her cousin's wedding with me, because she was damn good at singing!"
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful sonia ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Keep writing


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pepples_joy

res

*edited*

Wow... Me first Again...!!!!!!!!

C'mon girls... Other work on PaYa...!!!!!
Superb sweet n cute OS dear... ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Adi and Pankhu in rain... Awww.. So romantic...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰

Waiting for more n more works...๐Ÿ˜›
Awesome OS... Loved it.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Hahha well done! โค๏ธ Hhehehe dont worry this forum will explode with writing soon! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Glad you liked the OS sweetie! Embarrassed Yeah rain romance is the best for sure just tweeked the original scene a bit! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Yeah I will try to do an OS every weekend if I can! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: payalibm

wwooowww

lovely
well written...
i loved the puupy face scene most...
too goodd
plzz write more
will be waiting

Glad you liked it! Ahahaha Adi is a cutie as well! Yeah i will try and write other OS's soon! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sajanFan

its beautiful ๐Ÿ‘



i specially loved this dialogue
Adi crossed his arms "Pankhuri dont lie, so who was that girl that was singing at her cousin's wedding with me, because she was damn good at singing!"

Thanks for the lovely words! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Hahha glad you spotted it out! It was basically Adi sort of teasing Pankhuri! ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anusha.cochin

Beautiful sonia ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Keep writing


Thank you sweets! ๐Ÿ˜ณ I will try my best! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG sonia !
It is so beautifully written!
Aww rain is always romantic!
and i love when pankhuri held his hand and pulled out his arms, saying he hasn't lived !
wow, i can just totally imagine Adi watching pankhuri play in the rain ! aww she fell in his arms and he got lost in her beauty !
Thank you for such super cute OS !
waiting to read more of your work

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