It was really written and it incorporated all those classic scenes that we love with a new bang!! It was written really well and the emotions are communicated clearly! Your style is unique and enjoyable to read. The way you take the character and mould them in your own way is admirable!
You are a great inspiration to all those out there and I can say that you definetely inspire me to write!
Thank you for sharing this amazing writing with us!
Shivanisaur