Abhiya SS : Frozen Pain - Story of Eternal Love *completed* page 34 - Page 18

nice..

Mindblowing epilogue

Wonderful epilogue

The Time You Put In Really Shows!
Remarkable! Far Out! How Extraordinary!
You're A Winner! You Came Through! That's Incredible!
5 Star Work! You're Super! You Can Do It!
You're The Greatest! Sweet! Great Effort!
How Original! What A Genius! You're A Natural!
Very Brave! You're A Pleasure To Know! Way To Go!
You're Sharp! Congratulations! I'm Proud Of You!
Thank You For Caring! I'm Impressed! You're Very Talented!
Great Discovery! You're A Champ! Right On!
You're So Kind! Thanks For Helping! You're A-OK!
Magnificent! You've Earned My Respect! You've Made Progress!
Outstanding Effort! Neat Work! I Love It!
Beautiful! Clever! Brilliant!
That's Perfect! Right On! Your Best Work!
Expressive! You've Improved! Keep It Up!
Nice One! Wicked! Incomparable!

Wohooo! SS completed , has really Wooowww epilogue , really , i were really really curious to know further, And i m glad tht u liked my idea, being helpful to you is all my pleasure :) and immortal Human being concept really make this SS amazing, and about raichand's sunshine lil cutipie was so cuttteeely described by u ,Pia's tantrums , abhay became kiddo , raichand's happy family and moreover happiest ending, i to both Loviiinnngg it ,Its saddening too, coz u make me badly addicted for daily updates, like it became my daily routine to check ur pm . So as u know bad habits die hard ;) :p so i m seriously , eagerly , hoping that u wont stop writiing, nd will come with another mindblowing abhiya FF. And yeah i mean it :);)I ll waiting for next ff for sure :*:) 😉 😊 👏

wow superb epilogue loved it thank you for pm.

awsm story!!!! i am little bit sad as it got end...
abhay is soo... cute after becoming father he z behaving like a kid...
like u i also like abhay as vampire and piya as human...

mind blowing update
oh god abhay got frozen by that evil maithali 🥺
damn maithali she is so bitch 😡
it was really painful for both abhiya 😭
pia had change a lot she always shout at everyone
god that bimboo T always think she is very beautiful & every boys want her 😡
pia dad got to know abhay's truth but pia didn't let go of abhay 🤗
pia was guilty for not trusted abhay 🤢
finally pia brought abhay back 🥳
abhiya love was really unique & pure 😃
they fought with everyone & even with each other be together 😃
oh hell that bitch maithali came back again to kill pia 😡
in all those fight kabir & misha got to know abhay being vampire
thank god misha had brain & she was brave to understand 😉
but kabir was scared of abahy 😆
poor abhay got badly hurt in that war with werewolves & while saving pia & misha 😭
OMG abhiya's true love connect their soul 😃
even pia got the power 😃
wow abhiya got cute baby boy he is everyone's apple of eyes 😃
baby want just his papa 🤣
hope dear u will continue on abhiya more 😃

Originally posted by: ...Seema...

Mindblowing epilogue

Abhay n piya having baby..so cute

N abhay is bunking classes to b wid his baby

Flashback was amazing

Yes abhay n piya eterna love turned da vamipre family into a cute caring family

Thanks dear
Am glad you liked it

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Wonderful epilogue

Abhiya having cute baby

Loved it

Will miss reading it

Please start the new ones soon and please make them FF

Thanks dear

I'm working on FF but it will have lot of parts so I'll post it when I will feel that I can update it with delay