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Posted: 9 years ago
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clear me one thing shreya
Abhay took PIA punishment, so he is in hell.
After his punishment is finished,will he take a birth r he will again b yamaduta as earlier.
HOW COME U ALWAYS COME EITH DIFF CONCEPT SHREYA
LOVE U FOR THIS.
I ENJOYED A LOT READING THIS.
but sad PIA killed herself,and a doubt why she didn't once saw at ABHAY.it will b highly rediculous if I ask did PIA knew who ABHAY was!!!??
Willb waiting for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

clear me one thing shreya
Abhay took PIA punishment, so he is in hell.
After his punishment is finished,will he take a birth r he will again b yamaduta as earlier.
HOW COME U ALWAYS COME EITH DIFF CONCEPT SHREYA
LOVE U FOR THIS.
I ENJOYED A LOT READING THIS.
but sad PIA killed herself,and a doubt why she didn't once saw at ABHAY.it will b highly rediculous if I ask did PIA knew who ABHAY was!!!??
Willb waiting for next.



No she didn't know who he was. It had been years since they'd met, and obviously circumstances being what they were Piya wasn't looking around.
As for what will happen to Abhay, you have to wait for the next part - which I will definitely write if I get at least an average response. Not many seem to have liked this one 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--



No she didn't know who he was. It had been years since they'd met, and obviously circumstances being what they were Piya wasn't looking around.
As for what will happen to Abhay, you have to wait for the next part - which I will definitely write if I get at least an average response. Not many seem to have liked this one 😆


Awww
U can't hang it more tooo
Plz think about poor souls ,who r bitting thier nails for WHAT NEXT!!!???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SANJANA9167


Awww
U can't hang it more tooo
Plz think about poor souls ,who r bitting thier nails for WHAT NEXT!!!???



I have a total of 3 comments. I think the poor soul here is me only for stupidly deciding to post something different as far as I am concerned.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story. Very different concept. Excited to read how will Abhiya unite. As Abhay is a yamdoot and going to take Piya ke hisse ki punishment. Piya did not love him also.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--



I have a total of 3 comments. I think the poor soul here is me only for stupidly deciding to post something different as far as I am concerned.


No yaar you r too good to have diff concepts.
U r amazingly different with your stories and character's.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shreyaaa
By any chance was yamraj chand!!!????
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That's a brilliant concept Shreya di! I loved it.
So Abhay's gonna take Piya's punishment. Piya is also going to be punished but the yama kept saying that she won't be hurt. I wonder what punishment is it going to be and how would that unite Abhay and Piya.
Plz continue. Excited to read the next part.
- Manisha
Edited by .Rhythm. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great beginning dear. I think Piya might have had more than just platonic feelings for Abhay coz she seemed angry about the fact that Abhay never hinted at anything. Or maybe I am seeing too much. But whatever, I like the concept.
I want to know why Piyashree took this step of suicide. She was a girl with strong opinions that had argued with her father for her education. Was the loss of her husband the only reason for her suicide or there is anything more to it?
Would love to know what happens next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice beggining Shreya & its really amazing u write a different concept..
Awww Abhay is soo madly in love with Piya that he is ready to take her part of punishment..
Waiting for next..would love to read how Abhiya unite & how Piya realizes his love
It's Beautiful shreya..keep it up

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