Abhiya TS - A Night With U , PART 3, UPDATED

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Hi ... So happy to see u back with another bang on story.. U r giving ur best ... Ummmah... I know I'm getting kanjoos in giving now a days ... Uurrgg... I hate it too ... But studies getting harder ... Have to read other ones too... Meaow... MeaooowwW... Hehehe... So many questions arising at this point of the story ... it really feels bad ... People who are abandoned in this hell and no one is there to protect them... They are innocent ... They had pure soul ... But ... No one cared... They just used them for their greed ... For their thirst... It shattered them... They broke ... But no one gave a damn... Feel really bad for them ... But not everyone is to be blame ... All the people in this business aren't s**ts ... W***e ... S*x slave ... They are not b***h ... . They have heart ... Feeling pity...

piya was abandoned in this hell... Maya did her best to protect her... For piya she made herself burn in this hell more... But she knew ... She cant help her all the time ... Piya had her first time ... And that man ... Have beaten her... She became quite ... Not knowing anything ... Even Maya was hurt to see her in such a miserable state... But not everyone comes there for pleasure ... Piya second time... Abhay was the man... Piya was seeing his features and shied ... Abhay was drunk.. His girlfriend T ... Woho eohooO... U made her died .. Yes. .. Heartly happy ... Ok coming back.. He loved her but couldn't be the one she wanted him to be... Is it?? He was in depress... But what thing I liked... He didn't do... Piya a naive girl ... Soothed his pain and said him that she is there... Abhay talk to her .. Telling her a bit of himself ... Both slept... Urrg.. Alina ... In the morning ... Abhay went from there... Update soon next. ... Eagerly waiting

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Abhay ... Was drunk and there is high chances that he wouldn't remember anything but it can happen if he remembers bit of her face ... And that will make him uncomfortable... And he will go there again ... Yyauya... Will be happy to have him there for piya... Rosy... Just like rose..

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R Mifzala R

@rmifzala

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Purple.shade

Thank u so much rmifzala!! This is really the sweetest comment I have read :')
Reading this made me smile a big smile. I try my best to create abhiya magic with different situations and I am glad I am kind of successful in it . Frankly studying brings out the best in me 😆 I don't know how , but the best ones come when I am studying during exams and tests , and it's not fair because I have to wait to write it down 😆

Yes, they r going to converse in the coming update , which will updated today or tomorrow 😃

Thank u for ur lovely comment 🤗

Hehe its the same with me whenever I'm seriously studying there is only abhiya roaming in my mind 😆 may b we love them so much that when we are in a tensed situation we think abt the most lovely thing & donno abt others but for me its abhiya 😳
so will wait for ur next update & for ur studies all the best... 😊

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

I'm guessing hell is going to burn Piya soon

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Anita

@AnnetteSpring

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Seems like the good time is going to be over for Piya soon. Waiting for the next part.

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Great updt...
Yup..T doesnt deserve abhay's tears,Haseena said it...i was thinking d same evry gud thng hs 2 came 2 an end..when abhiya would drift apart,pia would be badly broken but sumwhere i hope abhay wont let that happen..Thanks for pm..😊

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jyotikaur

@jyotikaur

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Awesome...its so gud...they r together...bt its true gud thngs doesn't last for more tym...thanx for pm

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barki

@barki

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Mindblowing story. Loved both parts. Eager to read more.

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Amazing update. Pia's good times are about to get over & I am already feeling terrible for her. Abhay is very kind & I like the fact he doesn't judge Pia for her profession. I want to know how Pia actually landed in this place.