Abhiya TS - A Night With U , PART 3, UPDATED - Page 3

Nice...great...new story line h ye...plz update other stories

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Mind blowing starting

Oh god piya had work as sex workers

Poor girl lost everything

Maya tired a lot time to save piya but couldn't save her more

I just want to kill the jerk who sold piya & want to kill that monster Danish

Abhiya first meeting want nice

Abhay love tanushree but she is dead

He got emotional talking abt her

Poor piya also got attracted toward abhay

Hope abhay will save piya from that hell

Continue soon

Thank u !

Well , let's see if Abhay is Pia's saviour or not 😉

Thanks for commenting :)

Originally posted by: ..juhi..

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">awesome start...loved it...oh god piya is trapped in such a hell...!!! and abhay loved T and she died?????😲but how???? so many questions...waiting for the next update...!!</font>

Thank u !!

Yes , ur questions will be answered , don't worry 😆

Thanks for reading !!

Originally posted by: kiara97

Awesome start.. But how did pia end in such a place?? Nd what happened to t?? And does Abhay not remember anything that happened with him last night?? So many questions.. Continue soon..
Eagerly awaiting an update..
Love,
Kiara

Thank u !!

Ur questions will soon be answered , don't worry 😆 and yes , Abhay had been drunk so he didn't remember anything in the morning . But who knows about afterwards ? 😉

Thanks for commenting Kiara !

Originally posted by: as-Sweet

Awesomee one...abhay is broken but he's not in blind rage..he's in his control..They just tlkd whole night..kabir brought him..T died..why..how..?? & pia brought up in brothel at age of 17...how..?? Superb start to the story...thanks for pm..cont. Soon :))

Thanks !

Yes, I don't like my Abhay being angry and doing domething that could hurt Pia ( most of the times ) , acid ur questions will be answered soon !

Thanks for commenting :)

Awesome.start!!!

Originally posted by: rmifzala

hmmm ab mai Kya bolu?????? jai ho tumhaari 😆
hey dear kahaa se aate hai aise sensitive issues tumaare brilliant mind mai???& usme u create abhiyas magic...I'm telling u its ur combination of both ur thinking abt the sensitive issues & writing abt it around abhiya makes u different from others... 😊
& coming to ur TS ...
u have very nicely described the pain which every girl goes through wen they r been forced to b a prostitute...& loved Mayas & piyas bonding...
loved abhiyas first short & sweet convo 😉
I guess there will b long convo in next two parts 😉
& I'm so happy to know that ur gonna update soon... 😊

Thank u so much rmifzala!! This is really the sweetest comment I have read :')
Reading this made me smile a big smile. I try my best to create abhiya magic with different situations and I am glad I am kind of successful in it . Frankly studying brings out the best in me 😆 I don't know how , but the best ones come when I am studying during exams and tests , and it's not fair because I have to wait to write it down 😆

Yes, they r going to converse in the coming update , which will updated today or tomorrow 😃

Thank u for ur lovely comment 🤗

Originally posted by: Andromeda001

Interesting concept. Abhay doesn't even know real name of Piya yet. Wud be interesting to see their further development. Keep writing.

Thank u !

Abhay will know her name , but I can't tell u when 😉

Thanks for commenting :)

Originally posted by: jyotikaur

Nice...great...new story line h ye...plz update other stories

Thank u :)

Sorry for not continuing my other story , it's just that I haven't felt like writing it down right now . I haven't got a inspiration and I want the best for U peeps 😃 also these ideas keep knocking my head , and I don't want to miss out on writing these;) but yes , I will surely continue my story after this TS . No worries 😆

Originally posted by: mamtapkyeklover

Wowww darling u have become my fav writer in this forum!!
Awww abhay...innocent as always.. 😆
Thank god T is dead..i usually hate love triangles!
Pleaseee update the next part dont keep us waiting..wana know about Abhiya's..oopsss sorry Abhay and Rosy's next meeting 🤗

Mamta , I am honoured that u like my writing and see me as ur fav writer :) thank u 🤗 *hugs u tightly * 😆

I know ! I don't really like love triangles too , there is too much conflict in emotions . But yeah , sometimes I like them , but not in this story ;)

U will soon see the next meeting , thanks for ur lovely comment 😳