'My life after death',(INDEX IN FIRST PAGE)Update in pg-100 - Page 39

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PRATHA1

Awesome update Mohana! Conversation between Siddharth & Abhay is nicely written! Sid is so cruel, he want to destroy abhay's life! Now how will abhay saved pia from sid?
waiting for the next update! thanks for pm me!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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awesome update
loved it 👏
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I went back to home thinking deeply about Siddharth's words. Pia was watching television when I enterd, she came running to me & hugged me as soon as she saw me. "So did you got anything for your dinner",? She asked.
"No", I answered absent-mindedly.
"Dont worry, tonight I am making chicken so you have its blood", she said. "Okay", I replied. She came near me & started watching my face carefully. "What happened? What's wrong?", she asked. "Nothing is wrong", I answered trying to behave normal. "Abhay, I know you better than myself so no lies with me. Tell me fast what's wrong", said pia. Finally I decided to tell her everything about Siddharth after all she needs to be aware about the upcoming danger in our lives. I dint wanted to tell her atfirst because I dont wanted her to scare her . "The devil is back to create havoc in my life", I said. "Who? You are talking about whom?", she asked. "Siddharth, my infamous elder brother", I answered. "What ?You have a brother?!", asked pia in a shocked manner. "Yes, I have a brother", I replied. "But why havent you tell me anything about this? Abhay how many more secrets you have"? asked pia.
"I dint said anything about him because I dont even like to talk about him . He is a pure devil & I hate him, I hate him the most in this world", I said.
"But why? Why you hate your own brother?", she asked.
"Its a long story ", I replied.
"I want to know it, you never want to talk about your past. Abhay I am your present & I have the right to know about your past. Please tell me everything," said Pia.
"Okay fine. I was born in the 18th century in the region of Pandher. My mother died while giving birth to me, my father used to work in the royal stable. I had an elder brother who hated me from my very birth, his name is Siddharth. I had only one friend & that was Maithili, she was the daughter of the king of Pandher.When I first met her we both were 6 years old. We grew up together playing in the Pandher Palace. Our relationship started to change with our age, We both fell in love. I had no idea at that time that my brother also loved her. I came to know about this only after he proposed her & she refused him. Soon Siddharth came to know about us. We knew it very well that our union was not possible in the eyes of this world so we decided to ran away & get married. But Siddharth informed the king about me & Maithili's relationship before we could elope. The king locked me in a prison & ordered death sentence for me but Maithili released me from the prison. She asked me to leave & promised me that she would come & meet me in the forest ,from where we will leave Pandher forever . When I was waiting for her, I noticed fumes & flames coming out from a hut situated in the forest. I went near it & saw Maithili inside the burning hut. Her father had put her in the fire for releasing me . For him his social status was more important than his daughter. Without thinking anything I also went inside the burning hut , I tried a lot to save her but couldn't succed. That night Siddharth also had come to save Maithili from the fire but he also died with me. All the three of us died on that night but me & Siddharth were turned into Vampires by our new mom & dad who were Vampires. For 100 years we provided our service to them. After 100 years Siddharth decided to leave us & live alone. His hatred for me grew even bitter with the passage of time. Dad agreed to free him, you know dad was not that strict, if dad wanted he could have kept Siddharth forefully because dad only created him & a vampire is like a slave to his creator but dad never wants to keep any one against their will. After leaving us Siddharth became a total monster as there was none to control him. He started drinking human blood to be more powerful. I havent seen him for once in these 100 years but today he came back in my life ", I said.
"So did he came back for a motive"?asked Pia worriedly. "Yes, his motive is to destroy my happiness. He just cant see me happy", I replied .
"What he will do Abhay?",asked Pia.
"He is planing to snatch you from me", I replied.
"What nonsense, how can he even think? He can try as much as he want but he will never suceed. I only love you", said Pia.
"He is planing to bite you & transform you into a Vampire", I said.
"It wont make any difference, even after becoming a vampire I will love you only," replied Pia.
"I know but if he bite you then we will be separated forever & that's what he wants", I replied.
"But how Abhay? How will be we separated if he turns me into a vampire?," asked Pia.
"Pia, a vampire is like a slave of the person who had given him/her the life of a vampire. He/She can never oppose the will of his/her creator. You know 6 months back when I choose you over Mom-Dad, if dad wanted he could have take me back with him because he is my creator but he dint do any such things & I am thankfull to him for that . So if Siddharth turns you into a vampire then the first thing he will do is to command you to stay away from me", I said.
"I wont listen to him ever," replied Pia.
"You will be under his spell that time", I said.
" I will better kill myself before that creep turns me into a vampire",said Pia.
"No you wont have to do any such things, I promise you that I will never let him come near you. Have trust on me,"I said.
"I trust you Abhay. Now leave all these and lets have dinner. I dont want to talk more about this matter as I cant even tolerate the thought of getting separated from you", Said Pia.
While having dinner Pia asked,"Abhay can I sleep in your room tonight ? Actually I saw a horror film today & I am afraid to sleep alone in my room, so can I sleep with you?",
"You got afraid watching a horror movie so you dont want to sleep alone & that's why you want to sleep with a Vampire!!!? Fine , you can sleep with me but no naughtyness", I said.
I knew it very well what was going on in her naughty mind . For the past 6 months almost every night she had made some silly & new excuses to come in my room but I never allowed her as I am still not prepared for it. I am afraid that I can hurt her if any physical relationship takes place between us because being a vampire I am too much strong compare to her. So I decided to be on the safe side although I knew that she wanted it like hell. But today I gave her the permission to sleep with me because now I am afraid of her safety. I want to stay with her all the time to protect her from Siddharth.
I went in my room & changed my dress after dinner. I wore black vest & black jeans. Pia knocked at the door & asked,"May I come in",?
"Come in", I replied.
I looked at her & got a shock. She was wearing a very short black lacy frock, her curled hair all open & seductive looks . I knew it she is upto seducing me but I behaved as if everything is normal. I took a book & started reading it. She came near me & sat beside me. "I want to dedicate a song to you, can I",she asked . "Fine", I replied. She changed her expressions & started singing,
"Zara zara mehekta he, behekta he aaj to mera tan badan, me pyasi hu, muze bhar le apni bhaho me.
He meri kasam tuzko sanam, dur kahi na ja, ye duri kehti he paas mere aa ja re." She continued singing the song & soon her song got involved dance too. She came very close to me, seducing me all the while. It was very tough to resist her & finally I gave away infront of her. I touched her, kissed her all over & finally did what she wanted.
"Thankyou. This was the best night of my life", said Pia laying on my cheast. We both were wrapped in a white satin bedsheet devoid of any clothes
"You are all right? I hope I havent hurt you much?", I asked.
"Not at all Abhay, you were very nice to me. Not even for once you applied your force on me. Very gentle & very caring. I love you Abhay",said Pia.
"I love you too Pia, you are mine only mine", I said kissing her forehead.
Abhay Raichand
(PLZ NOTE -- THIS UPDATE CONTAINS SOME ADULT MATERIALS SO READ IT AT YOUR OWN RISK)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update mohana di
Liked how Abhay told Piya of his past and about Sid
The ending was sweet
Wish we saw this in the show
Continue soon 😃
Edited by Abhiya4life - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life

Loved the update mohana di
Liked how Abhay told Piya of his past and about Sid
The ending was sweet
Wish we saw this in the show
Continue soon 😃

Thanks for liking it dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for liking it dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow awesome update love it what a story u wrote mohanLuvAbhiya
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wht u hv write it nt at all adult momo. It was vry sweet and beautiful.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thax fr using dat song. Bt i thought u'll write whole dance sequence. Never mind M happy.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
waiting for next part...

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