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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Awesome story 👏 ahh da mystery was absolutely superb. Since part 1 to. Last . Even now m trying to make perfect guess😆. May b piya was bitten by piyali before getting staked by abhay but piya's mysterious smile is confusing. Can't imagine piya and piyali to be same , der difference seemed too much . Pls write some thing, v readers already lost lots of talented writers from forum.

Thanks Mahi and we old writers hardly get any readers interested in our writings these days, so it just doesnt seem like worth the effort
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

Amazinggg open ended story ...

Well 4 me it's look like piyali turned piya in the end
Hatts off to u !!!!
Awsome piece of writing ... loving the story

yeah that sure is one of the most likely possibility 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Awesome update

Abhay tried to kill piyali in past
But she survived from that
God that was really disgusting piyali killed her families herself bcoz her father didn't hand over the kingdom
When abhay saw piyali he felt really disgusting
For a moment thought abhay will give up but thank god he strikes stake through piyali heart
But the last line made me realize that piya is piyali
Hope abhay will find the truth
Continue plz

hmm... this is the end of this story. it was supposed to end at this juncture only - with many possible ending possibilities.
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Dishu not even gonna consider that 5th one LOL
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for late comment... i was so occupied with busy life that i can't get time to go through the SS... Now i finally went through the whole SS... It will always be one of my fav as this genre is always dear to me... thriller mystery with the touch of horror is always too fascinating.. and you keep up the charm from beginning to till the very end that i ended up finishing it in one go...
I love the open end you gave into the story.. it seriously rises so much question in our mind about the possibility. I like that...
Well if you ask me from the very beginning i am holding onto the faith that piyali is indeed piya...😆.. may be i was the only one... and i have some reasons for that... would u mind if i explain my own theory regarding to the mystery... i guess not...😆... so get ready to listen to my rants...🤪

In this story we get to see two woman who are look alike to each other... Piyali a vampire with seductive charm which no male can deny... the person is destined to get into her trap to whom she lay her eyes... she lures the guy to quench her need for blood and physical pleasure... (I guess so) in short she gets what she wants... kind of thing...

In other hand we get piya...who doesn't hold any mysterious aura like piyali...she is earthly, cheeky a bit tomboyish and workaholic... she was someone with whom anyone would enjoy their company... she doesn't look like any seductress or seems like having any charm to lure any guy...

Apparently they look total different... their face are similar but their appearance seemed miles apart to each other...

But still they have such subtle similarity i noticed...

The Confidence in both woman just makes me think sometimes that they can't be different... they are no doubt same... The way they have control over the situation its kinda so similar... the manipulative seductress piyali lures abhay with her charm so that he fall into his prey... from the very first she holds her command her ruling over him that he had no way to fall into her charm... She made him do whatever he desired for

Same thing i saw for piya in some cases where she totally took command of the situation... like when she came in interview... her posture looks so much confidence... like she knew he wouldn't have other way to appoint her... Abhay was sure not to appoint her for her similarity with piya... but piya made the situation turn in the way fulfilling each and every criteria for the post that he had no other way rather than appointing her... her sarcastic answer somehow had a deep indication that she knew what he actually wanted and she did exactly same so that he couldn't deny...
And i studied in deep that both of the woman hold a strong dominance over abhay... they always left a deep impression in his mind that he couldn't afford to think about them in different way... piyali lures abhay with her charm where piya attracts her with her wise thinking and casualness...

There was a point before the fashion show where abhay went to meet piya and she hugged her all of a sudden... though u mentioned that they are good friends but still that much of casualness fro m piya's side looks a bit odd to me...
There are so many points in the story that indicates piya and piyali might be same but there are also some points that gives strong evidence of being them different... the opposite thoughts collides with each other through the story and creates the perfect unsolved mystery at the end.. i think this is the key point of the story... to create confusion 😆

Well so at last even i was in conclusion with two thoughts... either piya was none other than piyali from the very first and pretending to be the so called innocent cheeky girl... she can do it BTW... a 200 years old vampire who is so tech savvy🤣 about modern technique of digital camera and laptop... well aware of the latest fashion trend... it wouldn't be hard for her to pretend a total different lady with a total new get up...

Or either other thing is possible... i came out with a very odd presumption which might look so bakwas... well i won't mind getting juta chappals for this..🤪

Piya and Piyali were throughout the different person always... but definitely they have some links between... my crazzy head spining thought is that Piya is the doppelganger of Piyali which she created herself... (crazzy naa i know...😆😆)... to avenge abhay... (well why not... we r not aware of vampires powers totally...🤪) she made her with some different traits than her... so that abahy could get into confusion seeing the similarity and dissimilarity btwn them and he gets into mad zone comparing btwn them... may be tha'ts her own way of revenge... she made some arrangements or have some powers that when she will be again allive through her doppelgangers existence whenever her body is burned or destroyed. Well this is something so crazy any1 could have thought so i am stopping my creative brain now...🤪

well on a serious note i guess there was no such definite thought about piya and piyali fiasco while the story was written.. the end game is dependent on readers that how their thought process goes during the story and how they take the whole thing... if they wanna take piya and piyali as same they are true or even they want to consider piya and piyali as diff that is also true... the story agrees to both of the parties and also goes along with both thoughts... it was meant to be like that from the very beginning. like..."Anything Could Happen"😆

whatever the end agenda was to make abhay bali ka bakhra...🤣.. bechara😆

PS: Awsome work...i think till date its ur best!!👏👏 nd sorry for replying late again..... hope u don't get faint seeing my crazy reply...😆

Edited by BabyHimavari - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
ouch now it gonna eat my brain not know who she is
pia or piyali 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BabyHimavari

Sorry for late comment... i was so occupied with busy life that i can't get time to go through the SS... Now i finally went through the whole SS... It will always be one of my fav as this genre is always dear to me... thriller mystery with the touch of horror is always too fascinating.. and you keep up the charm from beginning to till the very end that i ended up finishing it in one go...

I love the open end you gave into the story.. it seriously rises so much question in our mind about the possibility. I like that...
Well if you ask me from the very beginning i am holding onto the faith that piyali is indeed piya...😆.. may be i was the only one... and i have some reasons for that... would u mind if i explain my own theory regarding to the mystery... i guess not...😆... so get ready to listen to my rants...🤪

In this story we get to see two woman who are look alike to each other... Piyali a vampire with seductive charm which no male can deny... the person is destined to get into her trap to whom she lay her eyes... she lures the guy to quench her need for blood and physical pleasure... (I guess so) in short she gets what she wants... kind of thing...

In other hand we get piya...who doesn't hold any mysterious aura like piyali...she is earthly, cheeky a bit tomboyish and workaholic... she was someone with whom anyone would enjoy their company... she doesn't look like any seductress or seems like having any charm to lure any guy...

Apparently they look total different... their face are similar but their appearance seemed miles apart to each other...

But still they have such subtle similarity i noticed...

The Confidence in both woman just makes me think sometimes that they can't be different... they are no doubt same... The way they have control over the situation its kinda so similar... the manipulative seductress piyali lures abhay with her charm so that he fall into his prey... from the very first she holds her command her ruling over him that he had no way to fall into her charm... She made him do whatever he desired for

Same thing i saw for piya in some cases where she totally took command of the situation... like when she came in interview... her posture looks so much confidence... like she knew he wouldn't have other way to appoint her... Abhay was sure not to appoint her for her similarity with piya... but piya made the situation turn in the way fulfilling each and every criteria for the post that he had no other way rather than appointing her... her sarcastic answer somehow had a deep indication that she knew what he actually wanted and she did exactly same so that he couldn't deny...
And i studied in deep that both of the woman hold a strong dominance over abhay... they always left a deep impression in his mind that he couldn't afford to think about them in different way... piyali lures abhay with her charm where piya attracts her with her wise thinking and casualness...

There was a point before the fashion show where abhay went to meet piya and she hugged her all of a sudden... though u mentioned that they are good friends but still that much of casualness fro m piya's side looks a bit odd to me...
There are so many points in the story that indicates piya and piyali might be same but there are also some points that gives strong evidence of being them different... the opposite thoughts collides with each other through the story and creates the perfect unsolved mystery at the end.. i think this is the key point of the story... to create confusion 😆

Well so at last even i was in conclusion with two thoughts... either piya was none other than piyali from the very first and pretending to be the so called innocent cheeky girl... she can do it BTW... a 200 years old vampire who is so tech savvy🤣 about modern technique of digital camera and laptop... well aware of the latest fashion trend... it wouldn't be hard for her to pretend a total different lady with a total new get up...

Or either other thing is possible... i came out with a very odd presumption which might look so bakwas... well i won't mind getting juta chappals for this..🤪

Piya and Piyali were throughout the different person always... but definitely they have some links between... my crazzy head spining thought is that Piya is the doppelganger of Piyali which she created herself... (crazzy naa i know...😆😆)... to avenge abhay... (well why not... we r not aware of vampires powers totally...🤪) she made her with some different traits than her... so that abahy could get into confusion seeing the similarity and dissimilarity btwn them and he gets into mad zone comparing btwn them... may be tha'ts her own way of revenge... she made some arrangements or have some powers that when she will be again allive through her doppelgangers existence whenever her body is burned or destroyed. Well this is something so crazy any1 could have thought so i am stopping my creative brain now...🤪

well on a serious note i guess there was no such definite thought about piya and piyali fiasco while the story was written.. the end game is dependent on readers that how their thought process goes during the story and how they take the whole thing... if they wanna take piya and piyali as same they are true or even they want to consider piya and piyali as diff that is also true... the story agrees to both of the parties and also goes along with both thoughts... it was meant to be like that from the very beginning. like..."Anything Could Happen"😆

whatever the end agenda was to make abhay bali ka bakhra...🤣.. bechara😆

PS: Awsome work...i think till date its ur best!!👏👏 nd sorry for replying late again..... hope u don't get faint seeing my crazy reply...😆

Well your analysis is surely in-depth and shows that you have actually gone through all the subtleties of the story very carefully. the way Piya and Piyali were similar was surely a conscious thought as was the way they were different. Like you said, it was all done with only one purpose - to confuse the readers. 😆
and yes you are absolutely right that there was never any definite thought about piya and piyali being same or different. it was always meant to be left to readers' imagination and their understanding of the story and that's why it was written in a way that it would agree with whatever take they want to take. for this kind of ending i was actually inspired from an old Sony's show "Hubahu" which though was a completely different genre, but ended on a note where any of the two possible endings could have hold true based on what viewers wanted to see.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ha ha awesome awesome! So u actually made a bakra of Abhay 😆. Piya and Piyali were similar too & different too.
I would like to go by positive ending though. Have seen enough of negative endings in real life.

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