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snitchseeker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

this was so beautiful. Heartwarming :)

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Oh Shreya, I never thought this this OS was yours. The OS was very deep and it was really very touching.

I never compared it with your writing style but felt that it has the same professional touch.

It really gave the feel of Magnetic Dipoles.

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Andromeda001
U will say I always do this. Bt I always felt this writing style matches urs. Bt I never wrote this line in my cmnt coz I thought may be I m nt attentive enough 2 see d difference. I had a nagging feeling u know bt I dodged it coz of Juhi's specification n esp i was surprised, when a reader n writer like u, responded differently 2 my post abt this OS in fb grp.

Anyways thnk U Shreya 4 this *hugs*

LOL. Some people are saying it's different and you think it's similar..cool...the specification was my idea actually so people wouldn't think otherwise people know I am close to Juhi😆

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Shreya, I felt the same like when I read Magnetic Dipoles. Its definitely different from the way you write. But the feeling is yet the same.

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: harinisriram39
Shreya, I felt the same like when I read Magnetic Dipoles. Its definitely different from the way you write. But the feeling is yet the same.

LOL. I have no idea why

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: FieryHeart
This defo was different from your usual works and at first I wouldn't have recognised it was by you 😆 It was beautiful and I wonder what made you take on an anonymous identity 😕 I have questions though. What is Abhay's age in this? 😆 So Pia was blind too when she met him and before reuniting with him, she got her eyesight back? Interesting 😳 The emotions were depicted very well 👏 and I am gonna read it once more 😊 Sorry for not commenting before. I did see this and the only reason I parked it for later is because it was long and u know how messed up my work life is right now 😭 Yesterday when u revealed it was u, I knew I had to read it 😆 n I did n I am happy I did 😃

I have already explained my reasons for the anonymity in the note above and your comment vindicates my decision😆

Why does it matter how old Abhay is? But in my mind, he is close in age to the Abhay of Magnetic Dipoles, I think. Give or take a year or two.

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Shreya, Lol, Abhay's age in MD. There Abhay was a student and then some years older when he meets Piya again and then some more years after marriage where he has a teen age daughter.

I guess he should be between late twenties or early thirty. He was studying engineering and was engaged to be married before he meets with an accident and then 6 years pass when he meets Piya and some more time when Piya returns post getting her vision back.

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

@Shreya : It is definitely different from any of ur works bt a feel esp in convos b/w Abhiya is same as ur characteristic.

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

LOL. I have no idea why

The same feeling, in the sense not about the writer. But the characters. Some kind of belonging in a different way. I dont say it reminded me of story of Magnetic Dipoles. But the feeling was the same. After you read a touching love story.

Edited by harinisriram39 - 11 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

@Kirti oh I see.

@Harini, yes. Like I said, in my mind, he is close to Abhay's age in MD, where he was thirty. So yes early thirties or late twenties. I don't understand the significance of this though. 😆

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